OS: MEEM SE MOHABBAT HO GAYI - Page 2

Originally posted by: minakrish

Aazeen... you can't do this to me. How could you stop where you did? i need at least another 2-3 parts of this story. It cannot be an OS.

I absolutely loved every bit of it. Written brilliantly and I could picture everything.

First of all, I'm touched by your comment, precisely because I can feel the warmth I craved from my readers that has become very rare ever since I stopped writing for Indian fictions. So thank you for being so warm.

Secondly, I apologise for the delay in replying. It was a deliberate wait. Because your demand for more updates had me in a happy frenzy. I wanted to write more, but didn't know what to write. Because I thought I had closed all the ends and what more to write since I wrote all the possibilities in the last paragraph. So, this delay was a deliberation. I'm still open to ideas if you have as to what more can I write. In the meantime I am also trying to brainstorm.

And thank you again for the appreciation. It means a lot to me. I'm glad you could imagine it.

WOWWWWW! JUST WOWWWWWW!

I'M IN LOVEEEEEEEE WITH YOUR WRITING

I could literally feel Talha's queasiness through the words, when he got to know that Roshi was getting married.

And I really wish ki show mein bhi, Roshi had witnessed the confrontation between Sabeeka and Talha! She would have understood Talha's perspective better!

And the Nikaah sequence!!! I loved that Roshi wasn't aware of Shariq's identity till then! Because it would highlight her recklessness a lot more, and make the consequences worse!

And Abid Uncle knows when to move his pieces Mauke pe chauka maar liya uncle ne toh

And I loved that Talha and Roshi got to speak to each other before the marriage... that was much needed! Talha kitna pyaar se samjharaha tha Rosh ko

Hayeeeeeee! Write a part 2 for this, ki raat ko woh kaise gussa karti hai Talha pe

Thank you so much for this amazing OS Zeenuuuuu!! Part 2 chahiyeeeeeeee!

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

WOWWWWW! JUST WOWWWWWW!

I'M IN LOVEEEEEEEE WITH YOUR WRITING

I could literally feel Talha's queasiness through the words, when he got to know that Roshi was getting married.

And I really wish ki show mein bhi, Roshi had witnessed the confrontation between Sabeeka and Talha! She would have understood Talha's perspective better!

And the Nikaah sequence!!! I loved that Roshi wasn't aware of Shariq's identity till then! Because it would highlight her recklessness a lot more, and make the consequences worse!

And Abid Uncle knows when to move his pieces Mauke pe chauka maar liya uncle ne toh

And I loved that Talha and Roshi got to speak to each other before the marriage... that was much needed! Talha kitna pyaar se samjharaha tha Rosh ko

Hayeeeeeee! Write a part 2 for this, ki raat ko woh kaise gussa karti hai Talha pe

Thank you so much for this amazing OS Zeenuuuuu!! Part 2 chahiyeeeeeeee!

Itna lamba review itne time baad.. You've made my writing worth it...

I wish you were following the other shows that I wrote OS on, maza hi aa jaata...

But I'm not complaining... What you've given me here is exceptional. And I can't thank you enough Niyuuuuu....

Now, coming to my take on this situation, I was so done with the " save the grace" kinda marriage. I wanted her to know that her baraat coming or not has nothing to do with her getting married, just because ye izzat ka sawaal hai. Which looked like, had dadajaan not fainted in the show.

Rahi baat sabeeka se breakup ki in front of Roshi, I feel Talha needed to do so, mainly because he broke her heart because of Sabeeka; him closing that chapter before Roshi will give her a lot more solace than hearing from him that- "Main Sabeeka ko nahi chahta tha."

Their talking before marriage made her know that this is no ehsaan from anybody, plus, she knows that he has actually taken efforts to stop that horrendous marriage from happening and saving her from the blackmail that was due. He confesses his feelings yet gives her a chance to show her anger in person later on can lead to the similar scene in the room, where instead of saying- Main iss shaadi ko nahi maanti, she'd rather say- Aap kisi khushfehmi mein mat rahiyega, main abhi bhi aapse bohot naaraaz hoon.

Now coming to part-2... I'll have to egg on this babes, because mujhe bilkul kuch click nahi ho raha tha. I thought mere last para ne sab cover kar diya hai. But this demand for part-2... Sochna padega...

AGAIN... I'm very thankful for this amazing amazing amazing review. I loved it to the core of my heart.