Meri Ahmiyat ~ A shivi OS ✨

MERI AHMIYAT

Hello guys ... How are u all.??? I'm back with a new story on this book after so long... I hope u will enjoy reading it.

Scene:- Shiva came home after fighting with Janardhan seth. He was badly injured .

Raavi was pacing in the aangan ..as she was tensed about shiva. .. just then shiva arrived and raavi sighed relief..she was shocked to see shiva in injured condition.. she ran to take first aid box..

Dhara:- shiva...😲yeh chot kaise aai ???

Gaumbi:- maine bola tha tujhe mat ja akela..par tu meri sunta kahan h 😡

Shiva:- gaumbi aap chinta mat kijiye main theek hu...us Janardhan ka kaam nipta ke aaya hu...yeh lo property ke papers..

Gaumbi happily hugged him..

Gaumbi:- shiva..tu na heera h heera aapni family ke liye aapni jaan ki fikar bhi nhi ki tune...

Shiva:- aree bhai...esa kuch nhi h...

Just then raavi arrived with the first aid box.. shiva saw tension in her eyes..

Dhara:- aaja raavi...shiva ki first aid krde..

Raavi:- ji..dhara di...

Shiva:- ( coldly) koi jaroorat nhi h...

Dhara:- ese kaise jaroorat nhi h .. dekh kitni chot lagi h tujhe... Raavi tu kar first aid..

Raavi moved towards him..

Shiva:-😤bola na nhi chahiye.... Tu na dur rh mujhse..samji..

Dhara:- shivaaa..yeh kya baat hui...

Shiva:- bhabi aap krdo first aid..mujhe is se nhi krvana first aid..

Raavi felt dejected.. she silently went to her room..

Raavi's pov:-

Yeh shiva chahta kya h...mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha..ik taraf to yeh kaki aur dhara di ki itni respect krta h..aur dusri taraf mere saath sab ke saamne batmeezi se pesh aata h..jaise mere koi feelings hi nhi h.. ( she was on the verge of crying)

Main rona bhi chahu to bhi nhi ro sakti varna yeh sochega ki main sympathy gain krne ke liye ro rhi hu...

Main thak gyi hu ese rehte rehte..

Kya kru ...ese chod ke jaa bhi nhi sakti.. or yahan reh kar bhi main uske saath na rehne ke barabar hu... 😣

She wants to cry out loud but she can't..

Shiva yeh hi chahta h na main es se dur rhu..to ab yeh hi hoga..main na to isse baat krungi na hi kisi or ke saath faltu main baat krungi..chup chap rahungi.. ese rahungi to sab Khush rahenge kyonki fir kisi ko mujhse problem to nhi hogi especially shiva and Rishita..

She was busy in her thoughts she saw shiva coming to the room.. she hurriedly went towards the cupboard and start fidgeting the things..

Shiva:- tu bahar kya dikhana chahti thi??? Ki tujhe mere fikar h...tu na yeh natak krna band krde..

Raavi didn't respond to him..

Shiva:-😠main tujhse baat kr rha hu...

Raavi again didn't respond..

Shiva angrily holds her arms and made her look towards him..

Shiva:- tu kya gungi ho gyi h..jo chup chap sun rhi h. ..magar koi jawab nhi de rhi...😤

She didn't respond to him and with a full force she pushed him... And she went out of the room..

Shiva:- ese kya ho gya?? Itna bura man gyi meri baat ka...main to itna kuch bolta hu ese par aaj esa kya ho gya jo yeh ikdum chup hi ho gyi...

At night.

In kitchen

Raavi:- dhara di..kya main aaj aap ke saath bahar aangan main so jau???

Dhara:- kyu...shiva ke saath jhagada hua h ???

Raavi:- nhi...di...

Dhara:- dekh raavi tu na shiva ki baat ka bura mat mana kar..tu to jaanti h na mera shiva ik dum nariyal jaisa h upar se kadak par andar se ik dum komal...

Raavi:- dhara di..esa kuch nhi..bas mujhe room main thodi ghutan mehsoos ho rhi h kuch dino se..isliye pucha aap ke saath so jaau..

Dhara:- haan...theek h koi baat nhi..

Raavi went to her room to take her pillow and blanket ..shiva was sitting on the bed only..

Shiva:- kahan jaa rhi h tu ??

Raavi didn't respond and straight away went out to the hall..

Shiva followed her ..

Shiva:- ise ho kya gya h..??? Abhi puchta ho jaake...

Nhi..nhi .. bhabhi aur gaumbi bhi h vahan vo kya sochenge... Subah baat krunga..

Krish:- raavi bhabi ...mujhe na bhook lag rhi h.. plz coffee bna do..

Raavi:- hmm abhi bnake lati hu..dhara di - gaumbi aap peoge???

Gaura:- nhi..raavi...

Raavi went towards kitchen ..shiva finds it a good way to talk with her...

Shiva:- tu bahar kyu so rhi h??? Dar gyi kya mujhse..??

She didn't respond..

He angrily pinned her to the wall..

Shiva:- 😤tujhe ho kya gya h raavi ??? Tu ese kyu behave kr rhi h....

She again didn't respond .. instead she tried to push him but failed to do so .. because shiva was holding her arms tightly..

Shiva:- jab tak tu mere sawaal ka jawaab nhi degi... main nhi chodunga ( sternly).

Krish:- areee bhabi.. coffee bni nhi..

( He entered the kitchen.. and just then shiva frees raavi)

Raavi:- hmm ban gyi.. yeh le..

Krish:- thank you bhabi.. chale bahar...

Raavi:- hmm..chal..

Shiva was watching her and was confused why she was behaving like this with him only..

4 days passed in the same way.. shiva tried hard to talk with her but he was failed in his every attempt..now he was craving for her talks , her fights, her bickering, etc..

In evening

Suman called raavi in her room..

Suman:- raavi beta kya baat h??

Raavi:- kuch nhi kaaki??

Suman:- raavi main na ab teri maa hu kaaki nhi..( caressing her hair)

Raavi:- 🥺 aapne aaj khud ko meri maa bola na..to mujhe mere maa ki yaad aa gyi..

Suman:- tu ro kyu rhi h beta..main hoon na..

Raavi:- she hugged her and started crying..

Suman:- raavi beta maine ne yeh baal ese hi safed nhi kiye..main jaanti hu tu theek nhi h..aur kuch dino se tere aur shiva ke beech bhi kuch theek nhi chal rha..agar mujhe maa samjati h na..to khul ke bta kya hua...

Raavi:-(crying) maa..main na thak gyi hu.. shiva ke saath ese reh reh kar...voh meri bilkul izzat nhi krta...mana ki voh mujhse nafrat krta h par iska matlab yeh to nhi na sab ke saamne mere insult kre... Maa voh mujhe khud se dur rehne ko bolta h..kyunki usne meri diary padh li jo meri shadi se pehle ki thi..maa tab to aap bhi jaanti thi na main dev ko pasand karti thi..par ab mere dil main dev ke liye kuch nhi h...par voh mere baat samajne ko tayar hi nhi h.. main jitne baar usse baat krne ki koshish krti hu..voh utni baar mujh pe chilata h..maa mere main dil h mujhe bhi dard hota h..kab tak main yeh sab sehti rhu ....aap khud btayiye..mujh main ab himmat nhi h aur tutne ki... pehle hi main do baar tut chuki hu... pehle mumma papa chod ke chale gye fir dev aur ab jis pe mujhe itna bharosa h voh bhi bol rha h chod du usse...

Suman was feeling pitty on her...she saw her how broken she was..she was just listening to her so that she can vent out all she is reserving in her for so long ...

Raavi continue:- maa ..mujhe nhi lagta ki mere koi ahmiyat h shiva ki zindagi main... Voh aapki or dhara di kitni izzat krta h par meri...main yeh nhi kehti ki voh galat kr rha h..par mujhe bhi to barabar ki respect de na...kya main yeh sab deserve nhi krti...🥺

Suman:- esa kisne kaha ki tu yeh sab deserve nhi krti... Tu na sab kuch deserve krti h meri bachi...tu na shant ho jaa raavi...aur mere baat dhayan se sun...

Dekh tu na ese himmat mat haar...kyunki sirf tu hi h jo mere shiva ko sambhal sakti h...agar tu ese himmat haar degi to mera kya hoga...tu na meri sabse ladli beti h..maine kabhi tujhe aapni bahu nhi samja ..main to kab se chahti thi ki tu mujhe maa bula par tune hi der krdi..

Par ab to na bilkul bhi himmat mat haar..bhagwan par bharosa rakh ..sab theek ho jayega..bache...

Raavi:- maa kitna wait kru.. main thak gyi hun.. ab aur himmat nhi h...

Suman:- tune mujhe maa bola ...hna..to meri baat nhi manegi...tu bas himmat rakh aur sabr kr...kyunki sabr ka fal meetha hota h..

Chal ab uth or muh saaf kr ..dekh kaise shakal bnali h ro ro ke..

Raavi obeys her order..

Raavi:- thank you maa..aaj lag rha h ki man se bhoj utar gya ho ..kab se itni ghutan mehsoos ho rhi thi..par aaj bohat acha feel ho rha h aapse baat krke... ( She again hugged her)

Suman:- baba somnath tujhe hamesha ese khush rakhe...chal ja aapne kamre aur jaa ke rest krle..

Raavi:- ji..maa

They both were unaware.. that someone has listened to their talks... And that person is shiva only.. he felt guilty on his acts.. he decided to talk with raavi just now only..

Shiva entered his room and locked it from inside so that no one can disturb them..

Raavi was startled to see shiva there..she tried to unlock the door but shiva pick her in bridal style and made her sit on the bed and he sit in front of her..

Shiva:- sorry raavi.... main jaanta hu ki maine tere saath bohat galat kiya h..teri har baar mene insult ki h... voh bhi sab ke saamne..mujhe esa nhi krna chahiye tha...main yeh bhi jaanta hu ki mene teri diary padh ke aapna perspective bna liya tha..teri ik bhi baat nhi suni...par raavi main yeh tujhe batana chahta hu..ki voh diary padh ke main isliye broke hua kyunki main tujhe pasand krne laga tha..or diary padh ke pta laga ki main tere compatible nhi hu...khud ka man mar ke main jaa buj ke tere sath ese behave krta tha so that tu khud mujhe chod ke chali jaaye....main teri zindagi barbaad nhi krna chahta tha...

Raavi was about to say something but shiva kept his finger on her lips..

Shiva:- aur jo vo tu maa ko keh rhi thi na ki teri meri life koi ahmiyat nhi h...to yeh jhooth h raavi ...tu na mere liye utni hi important h jitne mere maa or bhabi.. sorry maine teri or maa ki saari baat sun li thi...vaise maa ko pta tha ki vahan khada hu...

Raavi plz mujhe maaf krde.. main aage se esa kabhi nhi karunga..tere har baat sunuga.. or to or kabhi dur rehne ke liye bhi nhi bolunga.. par plz ese chup mat reh ..tere chupi mujhe khati h ... Mujhe tuta hua mehsoos hota h andar se.. bohat guilty feel hua mujhe raavi jab tune mujhse baat krna chod diya... Am sorry raavi ...am really very sorry..

Raavi:-( emotional) agar tu pehle hi meri baat sun leta to itna bada bakheda nhi hota ( chukle)

Shiva:-(embarrassed) sorry na..maaf krde...

Raavi:- kr diya maaf tujhe...par agar aage se esi harkat ki naa tu muh tod dungi..( she hugged him tightly)

Shiva:- aur agar tune bhi kabhi socha.. na ki teri ahmiyat nhi h meri life to tu bhi dekh lena...

Raavi:- kya dekhayega tu??

Shiva went close to her and quickly gave a peck on her lips...

Raavi :- 😳yeh...kya..tha...??

Shiva:- (hugging her) tujhe nhi pata 😏( teasingly)

Raavi hit him on his chest..

Shiva:- maar kyu rhi h???

Raavi:- kyunki tu kaam hi ese krta h???

He kissed her on her cheeks..

Shiva:- par tu ese kaam krti h ki tujhe kiss dene man krta h...

They both laugh..

The end ❣️

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I'll meet you soon in new OS..

Enjoy and stay safe 💕

Beautiful !!

Show mein bhi aisa chahiye mujhe. Shiva badal raha hai. No doubt about it. Par mujhe abhi bhi shivi ka conversation chahiye iss matter pe. A proper redemption for Shiva chahiye mujhe show mein bhi

Originally posted by: Manasa09

Beautiful !!

Show mein bhi aisa chahiye mujhe. Shiva badal raha hai. No doubt about it. Par mujhe abhi bhi shivi ka conversation chahiye iss matter pe. A proper redemption for Shiva chahiye mujhe show mein bhi

I agree I hope we get this type of conversation asap 😃❤️

How cute his apology

Can relate to her 😭 she was exhausted