Kalma ff:" joganiyaaa..."( Chapter 2 updated 7.4.22 page 4)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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prologue

Malhar paced tensely as the doctor is checking someone inside the room

..the someone who is not even known to him , but still she is important for him how ...

His question took a break as the doctor comes out from the room ..seeing his face it does not look he has some good news ...but shrugging his thoughts he moves forward to him to get a reaction

Doctor::" we need to talk mr.rane it's urgent .."

Nodding his head he took his coat from the seat ..,hanging it on hand he goes behin the doctor

Seating in front of him dr.mahajan proceeds him about the girls conditio

Dr.:" Look mr.rane i know this case is too complicated but as you bought her here so it's our duty to tell you about her condition..she is not good right now ..her state is fragile she is mentally too weak and exhausted she needs peace and love of her dear ones ..

Malhar ::" i know doctor aap kya kehna chahte hai but she is not my family..she just comes to our police station aur ekdum behosh ho gayi ..abb mai inhein naa janta hoon..naa inki family ko even mujhe Inka naam bhi nhi pata hai ..i have told my team to search about her more and her family par vo bhi abhi tak koi baat nhi jaan sake ..

Dr:" main samjhata par maine jo unki condition thi vo aapko batayi aur humein dar hai ki unhein kuch yaad bhi hoga ya nhi kyunki jiss samay aap laaye the unhein yahan unki sir ki chot sein kaafi khoon aaraha tha ..hope she doesn't loose her memory..aur ho bhi sakta hai jaise unhone aakhiri samay aapko dekha shayad vo abb aapko hi apni family samjhe ..pati, dost kuch bhi ..we need to mr.rane to get more pray she remembers something

Doctor left from there leaving malhar in a trance kf confusion what he should do ..he even don't know her name his job is also risky how could he take care of her but suddenly he remembers doctor words

She is in fragile state ..she can recognise you as he husband or friend.

How would he handles this situation but as he turns to leave from there his feets stopped and turns back to look the door where she is ..her face the serenity and peace he feels just by seeing her how could he resist her face ...her soft features her voice in which he just said one word

Aap

It feels like he has some more to do with this girl ..


At that time he doesn't know the life is going to be roller coaster for him now ..his life is going to change fully from here

Who is the girl ??? What will malhar do now ??? Will he leave her there alone or what ?? What will the girl when she will see him ???

Should i continue this story pls let me know

Don't know this will grab your attention or not ..

Par pls do tell me how you feel about this one ..

In this story malhar character has many layers sometimes you will find him wrong or sometime you will love him like anything ..he has some special agenda in this story let's see where it goes

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Teri story ho aur hame acchi na lage...is this even possible? This story intro is so intriguing. Aaj tune, Rekha ne and Priyu ne nayi stories start ki, you three made the day so much brighter.


Mallu ka character kaisa hone vala hai? I'm curious.


And Kallu? Is baar thoda different dekhna hai mujhe dono ko.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wherever this story goes

I’m ready to go with it


Bas you have to write it

Waise bhi I missed your stories a lot..


This sounds interesting.. Vanshu

kalyani ko kuch yaad hai ya nahi

Malharji kya karenge ???



I’m excited to know what happens next

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome.... 😍😍😍😍


Kaun hai ye mystery girl???


Puchna bhi mat.. Please continue..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ok ji jo aap teeno ka hukum pragyu di aur priyu mujhe thore sein ideas do abb iskein liye mere dimag main ye thora sa aaya isliye maine likh di ye update abb jaldi sein mujhe ideas pradan kijiye ...😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Ok ji jo aap teeno ka hukum pragyu di aur priyu mujhe thore sein ideas do abb iskein liye mere dimag main ye thora sa aaya isliye maine likh di ye update abb jaldi sein mujhe ideas pradan kijiye ...😳

Ye huyi achhi pyaari pyaari vanshu wali baat 😘😘😘😘
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Vanshu vaise to Teri stories perfect hoti h par this is my wishlist:


1. Different avatars of Kalyani and Malhar: Like something different from bubbly Kalyani and angry young man Malhar. Is baar Malhar ko thoda flirty and Kallu ko thoda different character traits Dena. Dono characters gray shaded hon to it's perfect.


2. Koi secret ya hidden identity vala twist ho to...


3. Malhar ke one liners- I miss them so much

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yaar vanshu tumhari stories mujhe itni pasand hain par ab to darr lagta hain ki agar continue na karo to mera to tadap tadap ke haal bura ho jayega😩

But this one is sooooooo cool!! I love these kind of concepts!! Where one forgets everything and the other one becomes that person's whole world! Sooo exciting this one is!!

These type of stories have so so so much scope Vanshu! Kalyani's pov, Malhar's decisions, their past, feelings for each other, their growing love comfort and attachments- you have so much to write about and we have so much to read!!! Shy wale kalma bohot cute hain par issbar thode expressive kalma ko dekhne ka mann hain. Aur ab doctor ne bola hain to Kalyani ko to Malhar ko pati manna hi hoga😌 please yaar jaldi update dedo!!! Aise hume tadpao matttt!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you jara for such kind words ..hope main tumhari wishes pein khari utroon aur issein ache sein likh paoon 😳

Abhi kein liye main ye do stories hi continue karoongi phir april sein main apni doosri stories ko update karoongi koi bhi story incomplete nhi rahegi Dont worry 🤗

Abb to jara nein bhi daant diya abb to kalyani ko malhar ko pati banana hi hoga 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09

Vanshu vaise to Teri stories perfect hoti h par this is my wishlist:


1. Different avatars of Kalyani and Malhar: Like something different from bubbly Kalyani and angry young man Malhar. Is baar Malhar ko thoda flirty and Kallu ko thoda different character traits Dena. Dono characters gray shaded hon to it's perfect.


2. Koi secret ya hidden identity vala twist ho to...


3. Malhar ke one liners- I miss them so much

okkkk ji done pakka 👍🏼

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