Rishmi ff part 17updated on page 10 (completed) - Page 3

The jealousy Rishi here he's really worth reading. Infact Lakshmi should not go easy on him. I hate the one am watching in the serial right now. Please do continue

Really loved the Rishi here but in the serial is may to shameless have an extra marital affair with 3gobthis chudail Malishka but it's gonna be interesting how dev get to know about lakshmi(Jhanvi) and Rishi and liked but loved the jealous Rishi here please continue it 😜😜😘😘❤️❤️❤️😍😍🥰🥰

Originally posted by: chandujojo

Really loved the Rishi here but in the serial is may to shameless have an extra marital affair with 3gobthis chudail Malishka but it's gonna be interesting how dev get to know about lakshmi(Jhanvi) and Rishi and liked but loved the jealous Rishi here please continue it 😜😜😘😘❤️❤️❤️😍😍🥰🥰

Yaa I will update soon

Hii guys

So Continuing the story

Rishi: I want to talk to you.

Lakshmi : What do you want to talk to me Mr. Oberoi?

Rishi: I know I have done a crime and for that every punishment is less. But your this behavior is paining me.
When you call me Mr. Oberoi. I feel hurt.

Lakshmi: (scarastically) O Now my behavior is hurting you Mr. Oberoi. When I call you Mr. Oberoi you feel hurt. Why? I mean people feel hurt when they are connected to other person. But you are not connected to me. You are with me because my horoscope can protect you. Am I right?

Rishi: I know I married you because of your horoscope. Give me any punishment you want but don't this much rude to me.

Lakshmi:Get habitual of my rude behavior Mr. Oberoi. Enjoy your self with malishka.

After saying this lalshmi left the room.

Lakshmi comes to her table and start his work .

Rishi Cabin

Rishi pov
Ok Lakshmi if you don't want to talk to me nicely alone. You have to talk to me nicely infront of everyone.

Rishi left the room.

Rishi comes to jahnavi table
rishi: Do miss jahnavi give me the account file .

Jahnavi: Yes Sir.

Jahnavi gives the file to rishi.

Rishi: As I checked your bio data. I found out that you have a degree in interior design too. So you have to give some new interior design for our hotel till tomorrow.
And yaa you should come to my cabin for the details. Got it?

Lakshmi : got it sir

Lakshmi and Rishi left for cabin

In cabin

Lakshmi start her work sincerely but rishi is staring at her endlessly. Lakshmi feels that but ignored

Rishi pov
When I don't love Lakshmi Then why I am doing this. There is something wrong. I have to find out but how.

After sometime Lakshmi left the cabin as it was time to go home.
Lakshmi change her dress
Her look



As Jahnavi and Priya are going through priya scooty. They found priya scooty tier get flat.

priya: How will we now go to home?

Jahnavi: By taxi or bus.

priya: today is strike you forget.

jahnavi: O yaa. Now what will we do?

Dev comes there see both the girls worried expression.
Dev : What happened?

Jahnavi : Actually Priya's scooty tier get flat.

Dev:O no problem I will drop you both.

Priya and Jahnavi : Ok

They start to sit in dev's car when dev said

Dev: Hey Priya. See I am helping you Say thank you to me.

Priya : No never I am going to thank you.

Dev: How rude you are miss attitude.

Priya: haww you call me miss attitude. You are a duffer.

Dev : You called me duffer. You are moti.

Priya: Moti. How dare you ?

They start to fight.

Jahnavi start to stop the fight.

Jahnavi: Stop it guys. You both always fight.

Dev: Priya start the fight.

Priya: No you started

Dev: No you

Priya: You

Dev : you

Priya : you

Dev: you

Jahnavi: Stop it and sit in the car

Priya: No I am not going to sit with him.

Dev: me too.

jahnavi : ok.I will sit with dev.

Priya: Now happy Yaa thank you. I dont want to sit with this idiot.

Dev was about to say something but jahnavi stop him.

Dev smiles and open the door for Jahnavi. Jahnavi sit but he didn't open the door for priya. Priya feels bad but ignored and sit in the car and the car left.

But Rishi was angry because he sees that lakshmi left with dev and dev open the car door for lakshmi only.

Rishi pov.

I have to talk to Ayush about dev. I have to do something of that dev. He is getting too friendly with Lakshmi.
Lakshmi also smiles at him. Remembering Lakshmi smile for dev, rishi hit his hand in his car.

Thats it for today.

Ignore my mistakes.

I am so sorry as I am not able to give big parts as I am busy.

Suggestions are welcome always.

Thank you for reading my story.

Superb now we can smell the jealousy 😉😉😉,good work now Rishi started loving lakshmi and feeling jealous towards dev but finally it is showing good and this fan fiction I loved it yaar upload the next part soon waiting for it and good work 🥰🥰🥰mam

Originally posted by: chandujojo

Superb now we can smell the jealousy 😉😉😉,good work now Rishi started loving lakshmi and feeling jealous towards dev but finally it is showing good and this fan fiction I loved it yaar upload the next part soon waiting for it and good work 🥰🥰🥰mam

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Hii guys

As I sais that I am not posting the Story for 2-3 days because of some issues but my issues get solve so the chapter is here

Continuing the story

Rishi hit his hand in his car.

Ayush see this and thought
I know bhai you love lakshmi that is why you can't see dev with lakshmi. You never loved Malishka.Its just attraction nothing more. Its high time you realize the importance of lakshmi in your life.

Ayush though something left. Even Rishi left.

On the other hand,
In the car, Dev is driving the car and talking to Jahnavi about did she like the hotel and its atmosphere. (because he ask everyone as feedback and use it to improve the hotel atmosphere)and Priya was silently sitting at the backseat .

Jahnavi : I feel awesome in the hotel. All the staff member are friendly. It never feels like we have to work.

Suddenly Priya saw a pani puri stall and shout "STOPPPPP"

Dev got scared and asked what happened?

Even Jahnavi got scared

Priya: Woh I want to eat Pani Puri. See the stall of Pani Puri.

Dev:Are you mad for just a pani puri you just give us a heart attack by your shout.Now I am not going to stop the car.

Priya: please dev please stop the car please dev.

Dev:No We are getting late.

Priya see toward Jahnavi and sign to make dev agree. Dev see it

Dev: No Jahnavi please don't take her side.

Jahnavi looks down.

Priya get sad and sit silently making a pout.

Dev start the car and park his car at the nearest parking lot and ask jahnavi and priya to come out. Both come out and priya looks angrily at dev.

Dev:Kya Hua miss angry girl. Don't you want to eat pani puri. Priya got excited and hug dev. Dev get shocked and happy.
Then comes out of their hug.

Trio left to pani puri stall.

Jahnavi: Bhaiya mujhe khatta meetha dejiye gaa

Dev: Mujhe teekha

Priya:Mujhe bhi teekha

Bhaiya give them their pani puri according to their preference.

They like their pani puri. Priya ask Jahnavi to have a teekhi pani puri but she denied then dev feed a teekhi pani puri to jahnavi and she liked and after eating their t
pani puri they left.

But Rishi saw everything and burn in jealousy and start to drive his car harshly.

At the parking lot
Priya : Thank you dev

Dev : For what

Priya: For pani puri

Dev: No need for thanks

Jahnavi: I like the pani puri a lot

Priya: Haina. World ki best pani puri mumbai mein hi milti hain.

Jahnavi:hmm

They all sit in the car left.

Oberoi Mansion

Rishi comes home driving his car harshly and ayush see this but didn't said anything.

Rishi goes to his room directly.

Ayush messaged Virender and Rishi's dadi to meet him in his room very urgently and don't tell this anyone.

Virender and dadi comes to ayush room.

Virender and dadi: What happened. Why you called us here and that too secretly.

Ayush: Yes I will tell and narrate everything what happened in hotel today.

Virender: It means Rishi is jealous of Dev because of dev and lakshmi friendship.

Ayush: Yes

Dadi: So we have to do something so that rishi realize his love for lakshmi.

Virender: But how mummy.

Dadi: I have a plan

Virender and Ayush: what plan?

Dadi: ayush you make sure that dev and lakshmi work together mostly in the hotel and after sometime we will say to Rishi that dev and lakshmi looks so good as couple. We will fix their( Dev and lakshmi) marriage and you will see that till then Rishi will realise his love for lakshmi.

Ayush: What a plan. You are a love guru.

Dadi: Haww How are you talking to me.

And After some more planning they left for their room to sleep.

Suddenly Ayush phone rings and ayush saw the caller id and its shows shalu.

Ayush: Hello

Shalu: (Rudely) Hello Se I don't want to disturb you but di's phone is not reachable. So I got worried and I ave to call you.

Ayush know that shalu is upset because of Oberoi's betrayal and he also know shalu loves his sister a lot and her anger is justified.

Ayush calmly I know you are very angry on me and my family because what happened to lakshmi. I am sorry on behalf of my family but trust me Now I will make sure that lakskmi will stay happy.

Shalu: Now i don't want to trust you but di said you are good person at heart and my di believe you so I am trusting you for the last time.

Ayush: That is enough for me.

Ayush goes to lakshmi room and knock on her door.

Lakshmi open her room's door amd saw ayush

Lakshmi : Ayush you at this time.

Ayush:yaa lakshmi actually Shalu was trying to call you but your phone is not reachable. So she calls me. So please talk to shalu.

Shalu: How are you di?

Lakshmi: I am fine? How are you, bani, neha, chacha ji chachi ji.

Shalu: All are fine but you tell me are they troubling you.

Lakshmi : No (looking at ayush) they take good care of me. Forget what happened past is always a past we can't change the past. So please Forgive them.

Shalu: I have not a big heart like you but yaa I will try to forgive? can I ask you something di.

Lakshmi: ask

Shalu: Did you forgive Rishi also?

Lakshmi : I forgive everyone except Rishi.

Shalu: Ok di please take of yourself.

Lakshmi :you too and cut the call and return the phone to ayush.

Ayush: What are you doing at this time?

Lakshmi: Actually Rishi ask some interior design for hotel. So I am just preparing it and I had completed too but I don't know how it is.

Ayush: you completed in this short time. You are brilliant Lakshmi.

Lakshmi :please check the design first than tell me.





















Lakshmi : How is the designs?

Ayush: Too good yaar Lakshmi. Mind-blowing. Bhai will love it.

Lakshmi : Are you sure?

Ayush: Damn Sure

Scene shift to Rishi room

Rishi was thinking about Lakshmi and Dev and was feeling angry and broke a vase.
Ayush saw this and enter his room

Ayush: what happened bhai. How did the vase broke.

Rishi: Woh by mistake it broked by me. I will ask Sanjay He will clean and What are you doing here at this point of time.

Ayush:Actually Shalu called me as she want to talk to Lakshmi as Lakshmi phone was not reachable so she called me.

Rishi: Oh Ok

Ayush: You know What Bhai Lakshmi is just awesome. She is so dedicated towards her work. As you give her tge interior design work she completed in such a short period of time and that too so brilliantly. I just saw her design and get shocked. The design are so beautiful and unique.

Rishi: I know she is brilliant in everything.

Ayush: (intentionally) Even Dev was saying the same thing. Looking at rishi with smirk Dev was so impressed with lakshmi. He was saying that lakshmi is so unique and helpful person and beautiful at heart. Lakshmi also thought same about dev.

Rishi again get hell angry.

To add more fuel Ayush said they look very cute together. You know what they come home together, lunch together etc.

Rishi anger reached its peak.

Rishi(with lots of anger) I am very sleepy aayush I will talk to u tomorrow.

Ayush: (Smiling) Good night bhai amd left the room and start to get happy and thought you are so jealous bhai. You will realize your love very soon and goes to his room.

Rishi pov

Why ayush said that Lakshmi and dev look cute together. They look horrible together. I can't see that dev near my Lakshmi . I have to do something. Wait a second MY LAKSHMI. What is happening to me. I have to find out the answer of my questions but how? and start to think about Lakshmi .amd sleeps.

Lakshmi pov

I have to be financially stable so that I can take my sister responsibility. I am missing you maa bauji looking at the moon. Why Rishi do this to me. I stay strong infront of everyone but I am feeling weak . I loved Rishi with all my heart and and what he did to me. Why Rishi Why you did this to me. If you had ask my life I have given you my life to you happily but you broke my everything my heart, my trust, my feelings, my everything. With that thought lakshmi also sleeps.

Next Morning
Lakshmi Looks



Lakshmi comes to breakfast table serve breakfast to everyone except rishi and left. Rishi feels bad but didn't said anything

Lakshmi did her breakfast and leave for hotel.

In hotel,

Ayush: So Everyone, You all know today is a big function in our hotel and the function is of famous business tycoon. So everything should be perfect And I need no mistakes here. I am distributing the work.
Ayush:Reema you will see the food arrangements
Mahesh will see the sitting arrangements
Aman you will see the music arrangements
Jai you will see the lighting arrangements
Priya you will see the guest welcome arrangements.
Dev and Jahnavi you will see the decorations amd other stuff
You all got it.

Everyone : Got it sir.

Ayush:Ok So start your work and Jahnavi I have to talk to you something.

Jahnavi : Ok Sir.
Everyone else left.
Lakshmi please give all interior design to bhai. He is in his cabin after that you start your this work.
Jahnavi : Ok.
Jahnavi left

Rishi Cabin
Someone knocks on his cabin.

Rishi: Come in.

Jahnavi comes and said your interior design Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi take the design and look at it and becomes shocked the designs are so beautiful and unique.

Rishi: Very Beautiful Design Jahnavi
Jahnavi nods
Someone knock on the door
Rishi: Come in
Dev :Good morning sir
Rishi:(angrily) Good morning
Dev:please come fast jahnavi. I need you help. There are too much work left.
Jahnavi nod and start to left but her leg slips and dev hold her by waist in nick of time.

Rishi saw this and get very very very angry.

Thats all for today.

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So continuing the story

Dev is holding Jahnavi. After a moment Dev make jahnavi stand properly

Jahnavi: Thank you Dev

Dev:Welcome Jaan

Hearing the word jaan Rishi get angry and feel like to punch dev very badly.

Jahnavi : Jaan why did you call me jaan?

Dev: Aree yaar As you know I call everyone by nickname or Shortname. So Jahnavi ka jaan.

Jahnavi : O that way

Dev: Even you can call me by nickname.

Jahnavi: No need Dev is a good name.

Dev: Ok Jaan. Accha come fast.There is lots of work.

Jahnavi: Ok dev. Let's go.

Dev and Jahnavi left.

Rishi pov

Now its high time I have to do something. I have to talk to Lakshmi. I will make sure that dev stay awy from my Lakshmi.

Rishi start to follow Lakshmi.

Now scene shift to function hall.

There is lots of hustle bustle. Everyone are doing their work.

Jahnavi to man1: Please place the flower here.

To man2: I need Rose flower not lavender.

To man3:Why there is no ribbon. Bring some more ribbon. Please do your work fastly.

Dev:Jaan relaxed. Everything will be fine.

Jahnavi:(little nervous) How dev. There is much work left.

Dev patted his back.

Rishi saw this and comes there in full anger

Rishi:(angrily) What are doing Mr.Dev ?Only Time pass.There is lots of work pending. You are just talking to Miss.Jahnavi.

Dev:Sorry Sir and left from there.

Lakshmi pov

What happened to Mr. Oberoi? He is behaving weird?
Lakshmi pov ended

Rishi:Miss Jahnavi I need to talk to you. So just come with me.

Jahnavi :Sir I am little busy now I will talk to you later.

Rishi:I said come with me. I have to talk to you urgently.
Jahnavi was about to say something but Ayush come and said bhai Please talk to her later.There are so much work for her.

Rishi unwillingly left from there.

Function hall







Lakshmi Look



Priya Look



Rishi look



Dev look



Jahnavi and Priya come there.

Rishi and Dev are mesmerized by jahnavi and priya respectively.

Dev goes to Jahnavi said you are looking good jaan.

Jahnavi : Thank you and said in dev ears I know you are saying this for priya.

Dev: How do you know jaan.

Jahnavi:I know I know the language of eyes.

Dev get shy & goes away.

Rishi saw Lakshmi talking to dev and thought I feel like make Lakshmi hide from the world.

After sometime there is dance on stage partner have to be changed. Couples make a circle start dancing After some switches Dev and priya dance romantically both smiles.
after that jahnavi dev dance rishi feel jealous after that rishi jahnavi dance jahnavi start to go away but rishi dance with her closely and very romantically.

After dance jahnavi start talking to dev about party.
Rishi feels very insecure and start drinking heavily.

After party everyone goes back to their home.

At oberoi mansion.

Rishi room

Rishi remembers Dev and Lakshmi and hit his hand in wall repeatedly and blood was coming out non stop.
He start to go towards Lakshmi room.

Lakshmi Room

Lakshmi was staring at the moon when rishi comes in her room without knock and turn her and hold her tightly by waist. Lakshmi get shocked.

Lakshmi :What are you doing Mr. Oberoi. Leave me. Did you drink. Leave me you are not in your sense.

Rishi:I am in my full sense. I came here to take my wife back to my room and yes I, drink because I can't see you with that Dev. Stay awy from him. You are just mine only mine.

Lakshmi was struggling to get out of his hold but he again tight his hold on her.

Lakshmi :No I am not your wife Mr Oberoi. I will not go to you room. I can talk with anyone I like. It is none of your business.

Rishi: It is my business because I am your legally wedded husband. No one can deny our relationship not you, not court, not anyone.

Lakshmi : I am not your wife.

Rishi: You are and filled Lakshmi hairline with his blood.

Lakshmi notice his hand and wanted to do his bandage but stop herself as she didn't want to fall weak infront of him.

Lakshmi : angrily I am not your wife and pushed him out of her room and closed the door.

Lakshmi touch her maang and see the blood on his hand and cry.

After crying for 10 mins she called ayush told him that Rishi injured his hand and need first aid immediately.

Ayush comes there and saw rishi sitting in front of Lakshmi room
and take him to his room and did his first aid.

Rishi :Am I that bad that she hate me so much? I can't see her with anyone? She is only mine only mine and sleep

Ayush thought You love Lakshmi that why you can't see her with anyone but to make you realize your love we have to do this with you?
Ayush left the told everything to mamaji and naniji

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