Rishmi ff part 17updated on page 10 (completed) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Roroo

Waiting for more..

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Originally posted by: carbabez82

Me too waiting for more

I will update soon

There are very less people who are showing interest in my story.

So Should I continue it or not?

Please let me know about your opinions.

hii guys

So Continuing the story.

Ayush and lakshmi reached the Roseland Hotel. Ayush take her to his cabin.

Ayush: So lakshmi this is the hotel. Now, I will explain you all the work and introduce you to the staff. Ok?

Lakshmi :OK

Ayush explain Lakshmi his work.

Ayush: Did you understand your work?

Lakshmi: Yes Ayush

Ayush: Now let me introduce you to staff.

Ayush call the whole staff

The staff comes.

Note : I am adding some characters

Sharad Malhotra as Dev
manager in Roseland Hotel
He will be Lakshmi best friend



Adaa Khan as Priya
As Lakshmi Best friend
She is also work as Receptionist.
(As in big hotels there are two or more receptionist)



Ayush: So guys let me introduce the member of our family (as ayush is a cheerful person so he treat the staff as family and all the staff is very helpful) our new receptionist JAHNAVI ARORA (as I already mention in part that lakshmi will change her name and did not tell anyone that she is married but she will to dev in future )

Everyone : Hello Jahnavi

Jahnavi: Hello

Dev: (Smiling 😊) Welcome to our hotel and family. Nice to meet you .

Jahnavi: Me too.

Ayush: Dev I have explained her work. As I have a meeting. So please Show her the hotel.

Dev:Ok Sir.

Dev: Come Jahnavi.

Jahnavi goes with Dev.

Dev shows her the hotel and notice her silent nature.

Dev: Can I ask you something?

Jahnavi: Of course

Dev: Did you always stay Silent or you are nervous because today is your first day.

Jahnavi: No, None of those reason. Its just that I meet you for the first time. Now, I take time to get friendly to with someone.

Dev: So thats the matter.
(Introducing himself) Hii I am Dev Bedi. Will you be my friend?

Jahnavi: Smiling at his antics. Hii I am Jahnavi Arora. Its my pleasure to be your friend.

After some chit chats they go to their respective work.

Priya:Hii Jahnavi. This is your saree for working hours.

Jahnavi:Hii Priya. Thank you.

Lakshmi change her dress and feels happy because the atmosphere and the people of the hotel is peaceful and good. Now Jahnavi start her work.

Scene shift to Rishi Office

Rishi pov

Why today I get so angry on malishka.
Why I feel so bad that lakshmi ignores me. I think I should focus on my work. Rishi start doing his work.

Scene shift to Roseland Hotel

Priya and Lakshmi are immersed in their work that they didn't notice time.

Dev comes there

Dev: Priya & Jahnavi don't you have to go home. See already its 8:30

Priya: In so much work I forget about time. We should leave Jahnavi. How should you are going to home?

Jahnavi: By bus or rickshaw

Priya : I will drop you to your home.

Jahnavi pov

I can't go with Priya to Oberoi Mansion and If I go with her then she will come to know my relation with oberois.

Dev : Where did you get lost?

Jahnavi: No nothing. I will manage.

Priya: I will drop you. I have a scooty.

Jahnavi: Having no option say yes

Trio leaves .

Lakshmi asked to drop her 1.5 km away from oberoi mansion.

After saying bye to priya Lakshmi goes to OM ( Oberoi Mansion)

After reaching OM she freshen up
and comes to dining table and sees everyone and ignore rishi.

Malishka comes there and collides with a servent and a glass of coffee fall on her. She start scolding the servent and was about to slap the servent but was stopped by lakshmi .

Lakshmi:How can you slap him?

Malishka: How dare you to stop me? Don't you know you have no status to stand before me.

Lakshmi : I know I don't have a status to stand infront of you because I am not cheap like you.

Malishka: How dare you and was about to slap her but Lakshmi stop her and slapped her hard.

Lakshmi : Don't you dare to slap me. I am not puppet of you that whatever you want you can do it with me. Its juat a trailer. If you again try to misbehave with me then the consequences will be very bad for you. You understand you better understand.

Lakshmi goes from there and Rishi look at malishka with lots of anger.
Malishka leave from there because of humiliation.

Scene shift to lakshmi room

Lakshmi was doing some work when ayush and virender knock on her room.

Lakshmi: please come inside.

Virender: How was your day Lakshmi.

Ayush: Have you any problem in the hotel? If any then plz tell me.

Lakshmi:No,I don't have any problem and my days was good. Even I made two new friends. I just pray to god that they don't betray me.

Virender:I know beta we have done a injustice to you by hiding the motive behind your marriage. But I was helpless as my son life was in danger. I know there is no forgiveness for my crime. But if you can then plz forgive (joining his hand infront of her)

Lakshmi holding his hand
Lakshmi : No bauji I respect you like my Bauji so you don't need to ask forgiveness from me. Yes I was disappointed with you all because for any girl, her marriage was a dream.Even my wedding was a dream. I start loving rishi more than my life but when I got to know the reality of my marriage I feel cheated. But I know you are father of rishi. You are worried for Rishi. So what you feel right for rishi life you did. So I am not angry with you all and ayush is just like a friend to me now (ayush smile) So how could I get angry with him.But what rishi did is wrong he played with my emotions, my feelings. Who give him that right? So I am not going to forgive Mr. Oberoi.

Virender:I totally agree with you that Why I am not going clarify rishi'doing.

Ayush:Leave that all thing Lakkshmi
You didn't tell me your friends name.?

Lakshmi :Dev & Priya.
They both are good person at heart.
Dev is calm, and cheerful person. He talk with everyone so nicely. In one day I got to know about him so much.
You know what Ayush. Today a man whose age is 65-68.Thats person wallet is stole outside of the hotel and he is staying from past one week in the hotel. After that person say wallet is stole with his phone. So he don't have money to pay. Dev pay his full due. I got so impressed with him. I mean he helped an unknown person . Such a great quality he have.

Ayush: I know him. He is very helpful and nice person.

Virender: I also know He is a gem.

They are talking unaware of that someone was hearing their talk and the someone is none other than rishi.

After hearing Lakshmi words he feels pain, anger and jealousy. Pain because lakshmi is hurt and angry because of him and angry and jealous because she praised an unknown man and was impressed too with that guy and he can't digest that Lakshmi was impressed by any person other than him.

Rishi goes to his room and thought I have to who is this Dev? I have to see how can he impress my lakshmi. Then he thought "MY LAKSHMI "
what is happening to me. Why I am feeling like this. Why I feel restless when Lakshmi praised that Dev. I don't love Lakshmi. Did I love Lakshmi?

That is for today.

Ignore my mistakes.

Do comments. if you want me to continue.

Thank you for reading.

Quite awesome superb want to see jealous Rishi 😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

I loved the update… I loved the angry and jealous Rishi.. hope to read a update soon ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Tanukirti

There are very less people who are showing interest in my story.

So Should I continue it or not?

Please let me know about your opinions.

There r few active members here… maybe if u tag the previous members who replied in this forum.. they could start coming here to read ur story and making this more active.. I don’t know how to tag people or I would have done it

Originally posted by: Roroo

I loved the update… I loved the angry and jealous Rishi.. hope to read a update soon ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much

I will update soon

Hii guys

Continuing the story

Next Morning

Everyone had come to dining table except Lakshmi. Rishi is restless as he want to see and talk to lakshmi .

Sanjay comes serve breakfast to everyone.

Everyone start to have his food but rishi was thinking where is lakshmi. He want to ask where is lakshmi but he was thinking how to ask.

Sanjay: Dadi ji have your medicine otherwise Lakshmi mam will scold me.

Dadi: Why? Where is Lakshmi.

Sanjay: She leaves half an hour ago.

Karishma: Now that madam doesn't find necessary to inform us before going.

Ayush: But mom she informed me and ahana and even mamaji too before going as she was late yesterday. So she thought to go early today.

Rishi felt disappointed 😔

After breakfast everyone leaves for their work.

At rishi office

Rishi pa: Sir plz sign on this file.

Rishi sign the file.

Rishi pa: Sir today is your meeting with Mr. Singh.

Rishi: Why you fixed the meeting without my permission?

Rishi pa: Sir I fixed the meetings after your permission.

Rishi:When did you asked me?

Rishi pa : Sir plz remember yesterday at 4:30pm I have asked you that Mr. Singh want to meet you. So I asked that Should I fixed the meeting? So you noded.

Rishi remembered

Rishi: Yaa I remembered but please cancel the meeting and tell him sorry on my behalf and fixed the meeting for next week.

Rishi pa: but why sir?

Rishi: Today I am not well.

Rishi pa: Ok sir.

Rishi pa goes.

Rishi pov

What is happening to me. I can't focus on my work. Why I am thinking about Lakshmi and who is this dev who impressed Lakshmi so much. Why Lakshmi was praising him. What if that dev is using Lakshmi. Lakshmi is too innocent. I should check on dev. I have to go to roseland.

Rishi called his pa and asked him to come inside.

Pa : yes sir why you called me urgently.

Rishi: Cancel all my meetings. I have to Roseland Hotel.

Pa: But today is your no work in hotel Roseland.

Rishi: Just do what I had said. Got it😠

Pa: (sacred) got it sir.

Rishi left in hurry to hotel Roseland

Scene shift to Roseland Hotel

Priya And Jahnavi are working. When Ayush called Priya with some file. Priya goes to Ayush cabin.

Dev comes on reception to check the feedback file which is on jahnavi's table.

Dev: Jahnavi plz give the feedback report and where is priya.

Jahnavi: Actually Ayush Sir called her to his cabin.

Dev: OK. How is your work going on and I hope you have no problem here. If you had then please inform because we are friends. Right ?

Jahnavi: (smiling) Yaa My work is going well and I have no problem .No we are not friends.

Dev:( sadly) Why?

Jahnavi: (laughing) Because we are good friends.

Dev:( relaxed and happily) Oh so you are doing prank. Good Good Very Good Joke.

Jahnavi: (Happily) Thank you

They didn't notice that rishi was present there and was unknowingly burning in jealousy because Lakshmi was smiling because of someone else other than him. He feel pain seeing Lakshmi smiling with other man. He comes inside.

Rishi: (angrily) What is going on here. You guys come here for your entertainment or work.

Priya,ayush and other staff come there hearing rishi loud noice. Dev and Jahnavi get shocked.

All except Ayush : Good afternoon sir

Rishi looks at lakshmi but lakshmi again ignores him.

Dev:Sir she is Jahnavi Arora. Our new receptionist.

Rishi:( looking at dev angrily) Ok .

Rishi and ayush goes to ayush cabin

Dev :Looking like Rishi Sir is in a bad mood today.

Priya:I am sure you have done something.

Dev: I didn't do anything. Really.

Priya: then what happened to rishi sir. He never comes in bad mood. He is looking at you(dev) with lots of anger.

Scene shift to Ayush's cabin

Ayush:What are you doing here?

Rishi:Why ? I can't come here.

Ayush: Not like that. I mean today you don't have work here. Also, You have a important meeting in our other hotel.

Rishi:I cancelled my meeting.I thought to visit here.

Ayush: I have a meeting. So I Will in 2 hours.

Rishi:Ok

Ayush left and thought you came here because you want to see lakshmi.

Rishi called jahnavi with some files.

Jahnavi comes with file and knock on the door.

Jahnavi: May I come in?

Rishi: Yaa Come in.

Jahnavi comes put the file on table and start going.

Rishi: Stop lakshmi.

Lakshmi without turning said: Here my nsme is Jahnavi Mr. Oberoi. So please call me Jahnavi.

Rishi:Ok Jahnavi. I want to talk to you.

Thats it for today.

What do you think What rishi want to talk with Lakshmi. As I am little busy So today I am giving a short chapter.

Suggestions are welcome always.

Please ignore my mistakes.

Thank you for reading my story

Bye guys.

I like this Rishi better than the serial.. I m just tired of watching him cheating and saying ILU to malishka all the time.. I love this jealous Rishi