Jeet...Victory...ParVi,CharVik and ParNa SS

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Jeet...Victory... Part 1

I dedicate this SS to my sweet friend pinkcode90 who wanted me to write a story on the movie Jeet with ParVi,CharVik and ParNa.I have seen this movie when I was very small,but I don't remember it at all.So based on the plot I am writing this story.So it's different from the movie.


The credit for the cover page goes to Sevenstreaks


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A goon punched an old man cruelly.

The goon:The owner of this house has told you to leave the house.So just leave soon.

The old man:He could have told me politely.Why did he have to beat me up to leave this house?

Goon:Because you did'nt leave immediately when he asked you to do.

He:I did'nt refuse to leave.I just requested him for a few more days as I needed to find a new house.

The goon kicked him and left.

Knowing this, a young man lost his temper.He threw away the cigarette he was smoking

and rushed to that goon angrily.

He punched that goon without any mercy.He was none other than Gaurav.

Gaurav was arrested and put in the jail by the police.



A beautiful girl was dancing on stage.She was Sameera.

Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha  Kabhi Sochte Hai Unhe Hum Bhulade Kabhi Sochte Hai Unhe Yaad Karle Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Oh, Kabhi Hum Judai Ka Sadme Uthaale Kabhi Hum Akele Mein Faryaad Karle Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib  Hum Unhi Pe Marte Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Hum Unhi Pe Marte Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai  Unse Pyar Karte Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Hum Unhi Pe Marte Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Bekraari Ka Dard Na Jaane Yeh To Pagal Hai, Baat Na Maane Nain Milte Hi Chain Kho Jaaye Ek Nazar Mein Ishq Ho Jaaye Samandar Se Jaake Kare iltejaa Agar Mauj Ho To Use Mor De Kabhi Jaanke Naa Lagaaye Lagan Yeh Sheesha Jo Ho To isse Tor De  Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Hum Unhi Pe Marte Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Unse Pyar Karte Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Dhinak Dhin Dhin Dhin Dhinak Dhin Dha Yeh Wafaa Kya Hai, Ek Dhoka Hai Par Deewano Ko Kisne Roka Hai Jhoote Waade Hai, Jhooti Kasme Hai Log Kehete Hai Jhoote Rasame Hai Yahan Me Asar Hai Sadaee Sabhi Yahan Sab Mohabbat Me Naakaam Hai Yahan Chaahaton Ka Guzaara Nahi Yeh Galiyaan, Yeh Gunje To Badnaam Hai Dil Ka..Are Dil Ka Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Hum Unhi Pe Marte Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Jurm Bas Itna Hai Unse Pyar Karte Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Sahib Sahib Sahib Sahib Hum Unhi Pe Marte Hai Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib Kya Kare Kya Kare Kya Kare Dil Ka Kya Kare Sahib(Jeet).

After the dance,she got a phone call.

She was shocked:What?Gaurav got arrested again?

Sameera went to the police station.

The inspector:Welcome Sameera...you came to release Gaurav.Right?

Sameera:Yes.

Inspector:How long will you release Gaurav from here?

Sameera:As long as I am alive.

Inspector:You are a reputed gynecologist and a well known dancer.Why are you wasting time on a goon like Gaurav?

Sameera:Because I am sure that Gaurav fights only for justice.

The inspector kept quiet.

Sameera went to meet Gaurav.

Sameera:Again you fought fought with others and got jailed.

Gaurav pouted.

Gaurav got released from the jail.



At home....

Sameera applied ointment on Gaurav's wounds.

Gaurav:Why are you doing so much for me?Our class is different now.You are have reputation in the society.But I am a mere goon.Your friendship with me is spoiling your reputation also.Why are you not leaving me?

Sameera:Did you finish?Now let me say.Since childhood we have been friends.I can't just leave you to protect my image.How could you just ask me to leave you Gaurav?For me,our friendship is more important Gaurav.Never talk like this to me again.

They looked at each other emotionally.



Gaurav saw a girl being harassed by a boy.They were Shivani and Ronit.

Shivani:Ronit,leave me.I told you that I don't love you.Why don't you understand it?

Ronit:But i love you and that's enough for me.I want you Shivani.If you don't come with me,I will take you with me.

He held her hand forcefully.

Shivani:Leave my hand.

Suddenly Gaurav pulled him back and started punching him.

Gaurav:Can't you hear what she said?She asked you to leave her.When a girl says 'no',it is 'no'.

Again Gaurav punched him.Ronit hit his head with a stick and ran away.

Shivani screamed:Nooooooooooooo

Shivani took him to the hospital and got him bandaged.

Shivani:Get inside the car.I will drop you home.

Gaurav:No thanks.I will go by myself.

Shivani:Because of me only you got hurt.You helped me a lot.If you don't allow me to drop you home,I will feel bad.

Gaurav:Ok.I will sit in the car.

Shivani smiled.

Gaurav sat inside the car.

Shivani:Are you feeling pain?

Gaurav:I am used to getting hurt.So I don't feel any pain.

Shivani:To be frank,I used to hate you thinking that you are a cheap local goon.I am feeling guilty for that.Sorry.I really thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Gaurav:No need of thanking me.It's alright.

Shivani:Everyone in this area knows you.But you may not be knowing me.I am Shivani.Shall we be friends?

Gaurav was shocked.

Gaurav:I don't know you personally.But I can guess that you belong to nice family.Friendship with a goon does'nt suit you.

Shivani became dull.

Shivani:Ronit is a stalker who has been troubling me since a long time due to his obsessive love.But when Ronit troubled me,only you were there to help me while all the so called reputed people were watching as if it was fun to see a girl getting harassed by a boy.So it is better to befriend a goon like you than befriending those decent people.So please accept my friendship.

She extended her hand towards him.Gaurav smiled slowly and held her hand.

Shivani dropped Gaurav to his house.

There Sameera was waiting for him.She was shocked to see his bandage.

Sameera:What happened to you Gaurav?How did you get hurt again?

Gaurav:Relax Sameera.I am fine.This is Shivani.Somebody tried to trouble her.So I had to interfere.That's how I got hurt.But now I am fine.

Sameera:Are you sure that you are fine?

Gaurav:Shivani took him to the hospital and now I am fine.

Sameera looked at Shivani.

Gaurav:Shivani,this is my best friend Sameera.We are childhood friends.

Shivani smiled:Nice to meet you.

Sameera:It's my pleasure to meet you too.Thank you for taking Gaurav to the hospital.He is least bothered about his wounds.

Shivani just smiled.

Gaurav and Shivani's friendship strengthened and they both started feeling for each other.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congrats on the SS

thanks for the pm


Part 1

lovely update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gaurav is a goon, but he stands for the right. Nice to see Sameera concerned about Gaurav. I loved Gaurav's heroic act of saving Shivani from Ronit. Shivani telling Gaurav that so-called decent people found Ronit harassing her as entertainment was right. Glad that Gaurav accepted Shivani's friendship.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations on your new SS


Part 1


Beautiful Start


Fabulous song choice

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gaurav beat up the goon for harassing the old man. Who is the old man?

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Why did the police arrest Gaurav? Why didn't they arrest the goon?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gaurav saved a damsel in distress, Shivani. Falling for each other now?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The old man is a random character.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Gaurav beat up the goon for harassing the old man. Who is the old man?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gaurav is also goon.Since he beat the other goon too much the police arrested him.you can assume that the other goon was also arrested.

Thank you so much.


Originally posted by: coderlady

Why did the police arrest Gaurav? Why didn't they arrest the goon?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The credit for the cover page goes to Sevenstreaks

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Thank u so much Kavitha,,Khwaishfan,coderlady,Taahir.


Jeet...Victory... Part 2

Sameera was thinking of her moments with Gaurav and blushing.


Jeet saanson ka chalna dil ka machalna - 2
Jiski badaulat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain


Khwaabon mein aana aake sataana - 2


Jiski sharaarat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain


Saanson ka chalna dil ka machalna - 2


Jiski badaulat hain teri mohabbat hain teri mohabbat hain

(Tere jaisa nahi koi nahi koi meri jaan-e-wafa
Tera hasna tera chalna nahi dekhi maine aaisi adaa) - 2
Ye khushbu ye aankhen ye chehara tu lagti hai kamseen pari


Main hota agar koi shaayar to karta koi shaayari
Kesu giraana daaman mein aana - 2


Kiski inaayat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain


Khwaabon mein aana aake sataana - 2
Jiski sharaarat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain

Na na na jaalima na na na na na na


Tere charche teri yaaden teri baahon mein khoyi rahi


Tera jalwa nazar mein tha main to jaagi ya soyi rahi



Seema started dreaming of romancing Gaurav.


Meri dhadkano pe likhi hain kahaani teri jaaneja
Main hone lagi dheere dheere deewaani teri jaaneja


Is zindagi ko deewaanagi ko - 2


Kiski jarurat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain


Saanson ka chalna dil ka machalna - 2


Jiski badaulat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain
Khwaabon mein aana aake sataana


Saanson ka chalna dil ka machalna
Khwaabon mein aana aake sataana


Jisaki badolat hain teri mohabbat hain o o teri mohabbat hain(Jeet)


Sameera:I love you Gaurav.I will share my heart's feelings with you.

Sameera went to meet Gaurav.

Sameera:Gaurav,I want to tell you something.

Gaurav:Even I want to tell you something.I had hidden it in my heart for a long time.But now I can't hide it anymore from you.

Sameera blushed.

Sameera thought:I think Gaurav is going to confess his love to me.

Gaurav:I never thought that I will fall in love.But I have fallen in love.I myself can't believe that I have fallen in love.

Sameera smiled.

Gaurav:Love is a beautiful feeling.I wish I had fallen in love earlier itself.

Sameera smiled.

Gaurav:I really love Shivani.

Sameera was shocked.

Sameera:What?Shivani?

Gaurav:Yes,she is the only girl who could conquer my heart.

Sameera was shattered.

Sameera:Did you confess your love to Shivani?

Gaurav:Not yet.

Sameera hid her pain and smiled.

Sameera:Then don't delay it anymore.Confess your love soon.

Gaurav:How can I?

Sameera:You have courage to beat others,but not to propose the girl you love.Very funny.

Gaurav was embarrassed.

Sameera:Such things should not be delayed.If you become late in confessing love to the person you love,you may lose your love.

Sameera said in her mind:Like me.I lost you Gaurav....

Sameera took his phone.

Sameera:Tell Shivani that you want to tell her something immediately.

Gaurav smiled.

Sameera dialed Shivani's number.

Sameera:Hi Shivani..

Shivani:Hi...

Shivani blushed seeing Gaurav.

Sameera:Gaurav wants to meet you soon.

Shivani:Why?

Gaurav stammered.

Sameera:He wants to tell you something very important.

Shivani smiled:I will come to meet you soon Gaurav.I want to hear what you want to tell me.

Gaurav and Shivani smiled at each other.



Sameera reached home and burst into tears .



Gaurav and Shivani met each other.

Shivani:What do you want to tell me Gaurav?

Gaurav blushed.

Gaurav:I was a rough goon till I met you.I thought that there was no emotion like love in me.But you changed me.You made me realize that I can also love.

Shivani blushed.

Shivani looked at him deeply and asked:You can love whom Gaurav?

He smiled.

Gaurav:I am in love with you Shivani.

Shivani smiled happily.

Shivani:I also love you Gaurav.I also wanted to confess my love to you.But you confessed it first.

He became very happy.

He held her hand and said:I promise you Shivani that like you wish,I will leave my violent life style.Now onwards I will lead a normal life like a normal person.

Shivani became so happy that she embraced him.



Gaurav-Shivani's love blossomed.

Shivani sat closer to Gaurav on the swing in the beautiful garden.They felt peaceful and sweet in the fragrant flowery garden.

(tu dharti pe chaahe jahaan bhi rahegi
tujhe teri khushbu se pehchaan lunga) - 2
agar band ho jaayegi meri aankhen - 2
tujhe teri dhadkan se pehchaan lunga
hamko tumse pyar huva hain jeena dushwaar huva hain
tu dharti pe chaahe jahaan bhi rahega
tujhe teri khushbu se pehchaan lungi
agar band ho jaayengi meri aankhen - 2
tujhe teri dhadkan se pehchaan lungi
hamko tumse pyar huva hain jeena dushwaar huva hain

Gaurav-Shivani sat together in darkness watching the beautiful sparkling stars in the sky.

(bada sukun hain main dil se tum pe marati hoon
main ab kisise nahi bas khud hi se darati hoon) - 2


kiya jo pyar to phir door se machalana kya


tadap ke shaamosehar karvatein badalana kya
mere jaanu mere jaanam jaaneman jaanejaana
jo gujaregi tu meri rehguzar se - 2


tujhe teri aahat se pehchaan lunga
hamko tumse pyar huva hain jeena dushwaar huva hain


They both swam together in the pool sharing romantic moments with each other.

(Thank you so much my dear friend pinkcode90 for this marvellous edit)

(aa baith paas teri rooh mein utar jaanu
nazar ke paas rakhu had se main gujar jaanu) - 2
nazar ka tir hata yu jigar ke paar na kar
main bekaraar bahot aur bekaraar na kar
mere jaanu mere jaanam jaaneman jaanejaana
kabhi chupke lega jo aaghosh mein to - 2


Gaurav embraced Shivani from behind and Shivani felt goosebumps.


tujhe teri chaahat se pehchaan lungi
hamko tumse pyar huva hain jeena dushwaar huva hain
tu dharti pe chaahe jahaan bhi rahega
tujhe teri khushbu se pehchaan lunga
agar band ho jaayengi meri aankhen - 2
tujhe teri dhadkan se pehchaan lungi
hamko tumse pyar huva hain jeena dushwaar huva hain(Jeet).



Gaurav:Shivani...I don't know why..I feel an unknown fear that I am going to lose you.

Shivani became dull.

She caressed his face and said:Don't worry Gaurav.That will never happen.I belong to you only.We will never get separated.

He smiled emotionally.

They shared an emotional eye lock.



Some guests came to Shivani's house.They were Giriraj and Sohum.

Sohum got mesmerized by Shivani's beauty.

Shivani's father Rajesh:This is my daughter Shivani.

Shivani:Namasthe!

Giriraj:We recognized her easily.

They smiled.

Rajesh:Shivani,I have told you about my childhood friend Rajveer.

Shivani:Yes dad.

Rajesh:Unfortunately Rajveer passed away in an accident,Giriraj is his brother and ever since Rajveer and his wife passed away their son Sohum is with Giriraj.

Giriraj:Sohum is like my own son.

Sohum smiled.

Sohum:Hi Shivani.

Shivani:Hi Sohum.

Sohum and Shivani had a casual chat.



After they went back home,Rajesh asked Shivani:How is Sohum?

Shivani:He is nice.

Rajesh:Thank God...you liked him.We were planning to fix your marriage with Sohum.That's why Sohum and Giriraj came here.

Shivani was shocked.

Shivani:What?Sohum and I..?

Rajesh smiled:Yes.

Shivani:No dad.I can't marry Sohum.

Rajesh was stunned.

Rajesh:Why beta?

Shivani:Because I love Gaurav.

Shivani told him everything.Rajesh was shocked.

Rajesh:You want to marry a local goon?Are you out of senses?

Shivani:Gaurav has changed dad and he is a very nice human bring.He loves me a lot.

Rajesh:But no father will want to marry his only daughter to a goon beta.Forget him.I am saying this for your good.

Shivani:No dad.I can only marry one person in my life and that is Gaurav.

Rajesh was shattered.

Rajesh:My daughter who always loved me and obeyed me is now going against me for a goon?This is the worst thing a father can tolerate.

Rajesh wept.Shivani felt sad.

Shivani:I am sorry dad.But i can't obey you.

Rajesh found it unbearable.Suddenly he had chest pain and fainted.

Shivani was shocked.

She ran towards him crying.

Shivani:Dad!

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