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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank u so much Kavitha,,Khwaishfan,coderlady,Taahir.



Jeet...Victory... Part 4


Thank you my friends pinkcode90 and Reena for the beautiful Adhvik Charvi edits.


Sohum:I feel blessed to have you Shivani.When I saw you..at the first sight itself I fell in love with you.I could see only you in my dreams.

Shivani looked at him emotionally.She felt guilty too as he has no place in her heart.

Shivani:Sohum...I want to tell you an important matter.

Sohum:Say.

Shivani:I married you only for my dad.I was in love with someone else.

Sohum was shocked.Shivani was nervous about his reaction.

Sohum asked her painfully:Then why did you marry me?

Shivani:For my dad.Dad did'nt want me to marry him.His health got deteriorated knowing about our relationship.Nothing is more important than my dad for me.That's why I married you.

Sohum was upset.

Shivani:I know that I hurt you.But I know that I am a wife now.I will try my best to be a good wife.But please give me some time.Please don't be angry with me.

Sohum smiled emotionally.

Sohum:You promised to be a good wife.Then why should I be angry with you?I trust you and I am sure that one day you will love me as much as I love you.

She smiled emotionally.

Shivani:Thank you for believing in me.

They shared an emotional eye lock.



Gaurav went back to his old life style.He became a goon again.


Sohum lit the lamp before his parents' photo frames.

Shivani looked at him emotionally.

Sohum:I lost my parents.But they still reside in my heart.I became all alone after they left me.I had only my chachu.But still I feel lonely.

Shivani felt sad for him.


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Shivani:You don't need to feel lonely.Because you are not alone.I am there with you...as a friend.I may not be in love with me.But still I can assure you that I can be a good friend to you.

He smiled.

Shivani:Shall we be good friends?

She extended his hand towards her.He smiled and held her hand.She smiled back.



After 5 months...


Shivani started getting attracted towards Sohum.


Sohum was sitting.Shivani sat closer to him.Sohum was surprised.

Sohum:Shivani,why are you sitting so close to me?

Shivani:Why I can't sit near my husband?I am your wife.

Sohum was surprised as it's for the first time that Shivani claimed to be his wife.Earlier she had only addressed herself as his friend.

Shivani:I have accepted you as my husband with my full heart.I want to be your wife in every sense.

Sohum could not control his happiness.

Sohum:I had been waiting to hear these words since a long time.

They looked at each other romantically.

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They embraced each other.



They shared romantic moments.



Sohum-Shivani danced romantically.


Abhi sans lene ki fursat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Abhi sans lene ki fursat nahin hai


Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Ke kuch dekhne ki zaroorat nahin
Hai tumhi tum nigaahon mein ho
Abhi sans lene ki fursat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Ke kuch dekhne ki zaroorat nahin hai
Tumhi tum nigaahon mein ho

Hey hey hey..hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey aa haa haa haa
Aa haa haa haa

Shivani decorated the house with balloons and surprised Sohum on the Valentine's day.

They held each other closer as a sign of togetherness and celebrated Valentine's day.


Kitna pyara pyara hai samaan
Aa aa aa oo aa haa haa
Pyase dil ki dhadken hai jawaan
Aa aa aa 00 aa haa haa
Jaane kaisa chaya hai nasha
Aa aa aa hoo oo aa haa haa
Yoon na mujh ko chero dilruaa
Aa haa haa oo oo aaa haa haa
Choro chorojaane jaana
Tum aise sharmana
Ke ab sochne ki ijazat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Ke kuch dekhne ki zaroorat nahin hai
Tumhi tum nigaahon mein ho

They shared romantic eye lock with each other as if there is nothing more beautiful and romantic than a simple pure romantic eye lock.

Haale dil main tum se
Kya kahoon aa haa haa haa
Oo oo aa haa haa haa
Itni bechaini kaise sahoon
Aa haa haa haa 00 00 aa haa haa haa
Tum nein aisa jadoo kyaa kiya
Aa haa haa haa oo aa haa haa haa
Betabi se dhadhke hai jiyaa
Aa haa haa haa oo oo aa haa haa haa


He pulled her closer and pressed his lips on her soft hair expressing his sweet love to her.



Mere pehlu mein rehna
Ek pal bhi door na jana
Kisi aur ki dil ko hasrat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Abhi sans lene ki fursat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho

Shivani laid her head on Sohum's lap sweetly.He smiled.

He caressed her.Slowly she fell asleep.He pecked her forehead and placed her on the bed covering her with the blanket.


Main hun dewaana bekhabar
Oo oo ho ho ho hoo oo o ho ho ho
Pal pal dekhe tumko hee nazar
Oo o ho ho ho hoo oo o ho ho ho


Sohum and Shivani enjoyed their first Lohri by doing Bhangra dance.


Kehta hai ye chahat ka mosam
Oo oo ho ho ho hoo oo o ho ho ho
Itna bhi to chaaho na sanam
Oo oo ho ho ho hoo oo o ho ho ho
Sirf mujhay chahat hai teri
Main sabse begaana
Mujhay pyaar kerne se fursat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho



Sohum-Shivani were in the rain holding the umbrella.Suddenly Shivani moved away with the umbrella wetting Sohum.She laughed and Sohum moved towards her laughing to snatch the umbrella from her.

She threw the umbrella away.They both splashed rain water at each other.


Abhi saans lene ki fursat nahin hai
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Kahin dekhne ki zaroorat nahin hai
Tumhi tum nigaahon mein ho
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Ke tum meri baahon mein ho
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey aa haa haa haa
Aa haa haa haa.(Jeet).



Sohum reached home with a dull face.Shivani noticed it.

Shivani:What happened Sohum?Why are you looking upset?

Sohum looked at her painfully.He was about to say something.Suddenly Shivani fainted.Sohum held her from falling down.He got worried for her.

Sohum:Shivani,open your eyes.

He laid her on the bed and called the doctor home as she did not respond.

The doctor did her check up.

Doctor:Congratulations.You both are going to be parents.

Sohum-Shivani were surprised.

Shivani:Now there is one more person in your life Sohum to love you.

Sohum:Thank you so much Shivani.Because of you only my life is filled with happiness.

Shivani smiled.

Suddenly she remembered Sohum coming home with a sad face.

Shivani:Why were you upset Sohum?

Sohum's eyes became wet.

Sohum:I realized that I was cheated all these years Shivani.Chachu was cheating me.He is doing smuggling and other illegal activities secretly.Accidentally I overheard his conversation with his men and realized his true colour.

Shivani was shocked.

Shivani:Such a big betrayal!

Sohum burst into tears and embraced Shivani.Shivani caressed him emotionally.



Giriraj was shocked to see Sohum and Shivani with luggage.

Giriraj:Sohum,what is this?

Sohum:We are leaving chachu.

Giriraj:What nonsense!

Sohum:After knowing your true colour it's difficult for me to stay with you.I know how you are involved in illegal activities.

Giriraj was shocked as Sohum knows his illegal activities.

Sohum:Shivani is pregnant.

Giriraj was stunned.

Sohum:Since Shivani is pregnant,she needs a peaceful atmosphere and this house is not fit for her in this condition.So we are leaving.I am giving you one more chance chachu as you looked after me.If you don't reform by stopping all your illegal activities I will inform the police.

Giriraj was shocked.

Sohum and Shivani left the house.

Giriraj was scared and tensed.

Giriraj:Sohum's presence is a threat to me.If he is alive,I will be exposed by him and caught by the police.I will not let that happen.

Immediately Giriraj took the phone and ordered a professional killer to kill Sohum.

Giriraj:Just finish him.

The killer smirked.

He thought:I was waiting for a chance to kill Sohum.Now I got that opportunity.He snatched my Shivani from me.He does'nt deserve to live.

He was none other than Ronit.



Sohum was walking on the road.Suddenly Ronit attacked him.Sohum tried to punch him back.But Ronit defeated him by punching him. When Sohum lost the strength to fight back,Ronit took the knife to stab him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Sohum is a very kind and understanding person.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Giriraj ordered an attack on Sohum even though he left peacefully.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 4

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superb update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

I loved Sohum's understanding of Shivani.

Shivani proposing her friendship for Sohum was cute.

Nice to see Shivani falling in love with Sohum & accepting him as her husband.

The Sovani conversation & song sequence was cute & romantic.

It was shocking to see that Giriraj turned out to be a smuggler.

When I saw that movie, I got a thought that the girl's father didn't want to give her to a goon in marriage and got her forcefully married to a person of his choice.

But, later on, the girl realized that her in-laws are doing illegal activities. The lover was at least good at heart & loved her truly.

But it was nice to see the husband loving her the same way.

It was shocking to find Sohum dull immediately after the song & Shivani getting pregnant immediately.

The couple decided to separate after getting to know they got betrayed very severely.

It was shocking to see Giriraj wanting to kill the boy he had bought up in his childhood, just because he got to know his secrets & opposed him.

Sad that Ronit overpowered & defeated Sohum.

Where is Gaurav?

Will he come to Sohum's rescue?

I am waiting for the next part.

Edited by kavitha_r - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Part 4


Fabulous and Mind Blowing Update


Beautiful song selection


I'm really liking Soham's character

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Thank u so much Kavitha,,Khwaishfan,coderlady,Taahir.



Jeet...Victory... Part 5

Dedicated to Kavitha who named Sohum-Shivani as SoHani.

Sohum was walking on the road.Suddenly Ronit attacked him.Sohum tried to punch him back.But Ronit defeated him by punching him.When Sohum lost the strength to fight back,Ronit took the knife to stab him.

Sohum looked at him painfully and asked him:Why are you doing this to me?What mistake did I do to you?

Ronit just smirked and tried to stab Sohum.

Suddenly somebody took the knife off him and punched him.He was none other than Gaurav.Ronit was shocked.

Ronit said in low voice:You fool!He is Sohum.Shivani's husband because of whom you lost Shivani.Still you are trying to save his life.We both loved Shivani and lost her to this guy.He is our common enemy.

Gaurav pulled his collar harshly and said:I am not a beast like you.If you had loved Shivani,you would not have tried to destroy her married life so cruelly.

Gaurav injured his hand with the knife.Ronit moaned in pain.

Gaurav:You deserve the worst death to try to kill an innocent man.

Gaurav started punching Ronit.In the meantime with much difficult Sohum got up from the ground and

called the police.The Police men came there.

Sohum:Sir...he only harmed me and this guy saved me.

The police men arrested Ronit.Gaurav smirked at him.

Sohum looked at Gaurav:Thank you so much.I don't know how to thank you for saving my life.

Gaurav:No need of thanking me.Your body is wounded.I know a doctor.Let me take you to her to get bandaged.

Sohum:It's ok.No thanks.

Gaurav:How can I leave you like this?Come with me.


He took Sohum to Sameera.

Sameera applied ointment and bandaged his wounds.

Gaurav took Sameera to another room.

Gaurav:He is Shivani's husband Sohum.

Sameera was surprised:Shivani's husband?Why is he in this condition?

Gaurav:He was attacked.It's Ronit who tried to kill him.

Sameera was shocked.

Sameera:He was that stalker who was obsessed with Shivani.Right?

How dare he stoop so low to attempt murdering Sohum?

Gaurav:Some men are cheap.

Sohum came there.

Sohum:Thank you very much.I am leaving.

Gaurav:I will drop you home for your safety.

Sohum smiled.

Gaurav dropped Sohum near his gate.

Gaurav:Ok.I am going.

Sohum:How can you just leave without entering my house?You should surely come inside.

Gaurav thought:Oh no...Shivani will be there.

Gaurav:Not now.

Sohum:Now itself you should come inside.

Sohum pulled him out of the vehicle and walked towards the door.As he pressed the calling bell,Shivani opened the door.

Shivani noticed bandage on his body and git shocked.

Shivani got worried.

Shivani:What happened to you Sohum?

Sohum:Somebody attacked me.Must be any robber.But a nice man saved my life.He saved me.

Sohum pulled Gaurav inside.Gaurav was not able to face Shivani.

Shivani was shocked to see him.

Sohum:I am alive only because of him.You need to thank him.I owe my life to him.

Shivani looked at Gaurav emotionally.

Sohum:Gaurav...it's very late now.You stay here tonight and leave in the morning.

Gaurav was stunned.

Gaurav:No thanks.I ...

Sohum:You saved my life.I won't leave you go without giving you a treat.So wait till morning for that.Shivani...show him the room.

Shivani nodded.Shivani showed him the room.They both did not talk to each other.



In the morning...

Shivani went to Gaurav's room with tea.

Gaurav:Thanks.

Shivani:Gaurav,thanks for saving my husband's life.Even one whole life won't be enough to thank you.

Gaurav:I did not save him to get thanked by you.

Shivani:You knew that Sohum is my husband?

Gaurav:Yes.I had seen your wedding photograph in the newspaper.It's Ronit who tried to kill him.I think he wanted you by removing Sohum from your life.

Shivani was shocked:Ronit!

Gaurav:Don't worry.He is in the jail now.

Shivani was relieved.

Shivani:Even after knowing that Sohum is my husband you saved him.I wounded your heart so much by loving you and leaving you.Still you protected my husband.Why are you so good Gaurav?I am really sorry Gaurav.I did injustice to you.

Shivani shed tears.

Gaurav felt sad seeing her hears.

Gaurav:You don't need to be sorry Shivani.You did not do anything wrong.You only made others happy.Even I am happy in my life.You don't need to be guilty thinking about me.

Gauravi wiped her tears.

Suddenly they both saw Sohum at the doorway staring at them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Part 5

thanks for the pm

fascinating update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Gaurav saving Sohum's life was heroic.

Glad that Gaurav & Sohum handed Ronit to the cops.

I loved the friendship between Gaurav & Sohum.

Suhum & Shivani accommodating Gaurav for one night is awesome.

The conversation between Gaurav & Shivani was emotional.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Part 5


Fabulously Awesome

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