Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 33

The entire update was oh so good i love your updates so much you know that.

The first part everything mushy 😍😘

The second part oh so hot yet so comical Paresh Rawal watch hera pheri taubaa 😂😂

And King is back to rule.

Now my dear pls update only here.

Oh dear God,

This is perfect! Prerna's gym debacle was hilarious. Although I don't appreciate the introduction of Paresh Rawal's chest in my headspace. It was like an ice bucket. Who knew it'd be so overwhelming? I couldn't quite go back to blessed KSG's fab body after that.

You're the best Sohaa. I love you. And your updates. I'll die if I don't get regular doses of your writing.

Anurag is back.. but unto happier thoughts! The king has a new trick up his sleeve. Update fast. Please. I can't wait.

Love. Like galaxies of love,

Aparna.

P.S. Your story is so technically sound. It's refreshing to read something so grounded in reality. Makes my little Commerce heart scream in joy.. thank you.

Its best pre keeps rish in loop and tells him about onu

Problems happen when people keep secrets.

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

The entire update was oh so good i love your updates so much you know that.

The first part everything mushy 😍😘

The second part oh so hot yet so comical Paresh Rawal watch hera pheri taubaa 😂😂

And King is back to rule.

Now my dear pls update only here.

Ankie,

You cutie. You know you'll be getting a pm. You're one of the first ones who pushed me to write. ❤️

I'm so glad you liked the update.

Awesome update.

But why start with Anurag. Anyway, he wants to meet her, why, to again scold and accuse her? Please no. I so want her to tell this to Bajaj. I know he said it doesn't matter to him whom she meets, with that clause. Hope this does not lead to any misunderstandings between them.

This cracked me up: 🤣

I’m not going to get my masters, I’m not going to get a job. Oh god, I’ll have to become an Instagram influencer!

“We’ll have to get a divorce then. I can’t be married to someone who poses with avocado smoothies.”

Now coming to main part. He helped her in her studies. Can you believe he is a business tycoon and he is willingly telling her that he would help her? No wonder she is in shock.

Surprise from both of them for her to celebrate her success❤️. I LOVE Kuki, she is such a pure soul. Preparing the food and also the bouquet which has the flowers which she has broken❤️❤️❤️. It is an emotional moment. Also, I love how he boosts her self-esteem.

Gym. She is goner seeing him like this with all his tattoos☺️. Seriously, Paresh Rawal, Hera Pheri🤣.

The ending. No comments on this, he played his cards, waiting to see what's in store for us now.

P.S. If you're planning to send updates via PMs, include me.

I have been a silent reader to your story. Coincidentally the first chapter I read of this story was the marriage proposal one. And then I binge-read the entire story in one sitting. I'm in love with the way you have written the characters especially Rishabh Bajaj. But I'm very partial to the way you have Prerna Sharma. It is through this fic that I'm able to connect to her as you have given her a perfect combination of slightly naive, fairly intelligent, college-going, wanting more from life than just love and a depth to her personality,her reasons behind the things she does and a whole lot more….

I love how you have alternately referred to Rishabh Bajaj as 'The King'. Calling him the king gives him a very regal aura and feel which in itself makes the reader realise that he is a force to be reckoned with. With the random things he asked Prerna to do, there was an clearly an intention behind it. The falling apart of AnuPre relationship at the careful but indirect prodding of RB slowly highlighted the cracks and shortcomings in their relationship. The gradual buildup was amazing though personally I couldn't enjoy it as the proposal was the 1st chpt I read and I already knew what it lead to.

When RB came to visit the Sharma family, I thought that Prerna's mother would not tolerate the guy. But as it turns out there is no one in the world who can be immune to Rishabh Bajaj's charm. Kukki's introduction, her medical condition, her shyness, her excitement at something as simple as learning a new song and everything about her just tugged my heartstrings. While imagining Kukki, my mind pops in Michelle Tanner from Full House. Kukki opening up to Prerna and Prerna coming to love Kukki and feeling protective about her in their first interaction itself speaks volumes about RB's knack of identifying people and their innate nature.

RB's angry outburst regarding Kukki's ill health at Prerna made me worried for her but she held her ground very well. And how can one talk about The Bajaj's and not speak of the newest member of the family. TubTub is the cutest puppy in existence. I do agree with him about reserving judgement on 'the tall human'.

The newest update sheds light on how RB is well aware of the efforts Prerna makes in all that she does and that he is considerate and grateful of them. Mentor RB made a reappearance as did the supportive hubby and co-parent. But so did Anurag Basu.... And then the gym...RB working out...RB tattoos....RB muscles....the whole description had me flustered and Prerna's reaction, her rambling was very very relatable. And then you put in Paresh Rawal and his chest ....His name and the thought of him was akin to having cold water poured over the head....sigh.....

You're a terrific writer.Please keep up the good work. And Kindly don't deprive me of this beautiful story. Do update here and PM me if possible. I apologise for not reviewing before. I will try my best to be vocal about my thoughts about the story in the future.

-Love, Rekha

Loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ prerna was hilarious in the gym 😂😂

Loved the update! Loved their interactions. And it's actually true, I mentioned it somewhere that KSG could easily pass of as a fighter with his body. And I even said it would be fun if Bajaj's past saw him as a street fighter, I had Brothers in mind. I loved Prerna's self talks about failing, I do that too, Paresh Rawal. I was affronted. 🤣 Btw, if you are updating via PMs, I'd like one please? I comment on most of your updates, or some of them together.

Originally posted by: najma123

Loved the update! Loved their interactions. And it's actually true, I mentioned it somewhere that KSG could easily pass of as a fighter with his body. And I even said it would be fun if Bajaj's past saw him as a street fighter, I had Brothers in mind. I loved Prerna's self talks about failing, I do that too, Paresh Rawal. I was affronted. 🤣 Btw, if you are updating via PMs, I'd like one please? I comment on most of your updates, or some of them together.

Thank you for such kind words. Paresh Rawal to counteract the effects of KSG's body. 🤣

And Najma, of-course I will be pm-ing you with updates as long as you want them. You've been such a vocal and consistent writer and supporter. Without question.

Best,

Sohaa

Awesome.

There was so many things happening😁

Her guilt of hiding things, him being her mentor and the cutest of all . Gesture of love and support. Tralala someone is mesmerised by husband .king will always be a king

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