Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 28

I frankly don't mind I love reading about him. Although at this point I'd rather have more of RB and Pre than Shiv, maybe we can have more Shiv when the RB and Pre dynamic is more settled!

Shiv is such a sweet heart. Reading about him will be definately pleasurable

Originally posted by: lovefk

I frankly don't mind I love reading about him. Although at this point I'd rather have more of RB and Pre than Shiv, maybe we can have more Shiv when the RB and Pre dynamic is more settled!

I agree to this point!

Guys.. thanks so much for the feedback.

I'll reply properly to each and every comment as soon as I get time.

Okay, quick author's note:

I want to assure everyone that Shiv's backstory is not going to be a major part of the FF because this is a PreRish story. Everything that is a part of this story will be to move the relationship of PreRish. We'll have no love angle for Shiv or anything like that.

That said, in the last update, I kind of dropped a few hints of how Shiv came to be a part of Rishabh's family. And I'm torn between showing the dynamic between the brothers or focusing on PreRish dynamic only. The same struggle arises when I am writing Prerna's dynamic with her family. There I can breeze past it with few lines because we already know how the Sharmas are. But since Shiv's an original character, I don't have that luxury.

Also, there's a little scene with Anu-Shiv that I've written that would be better if there was a little background about how Shiv is as a person. We know he's a good natured meddler who does what he thinks is needed to be done. Shiv ships PreRish because he loves his brother and wants his happiness. He wants Kukki to get the parents' love she deserves, that he himself didn't get. And now, he's friends with Prerna so he's wondering if Prerna will be happy with Rishabh or not. That's why he was doubting himself in the end of the last chapter. But I don't want Shiv to just force PreRish together when he isn't sure that AnuPre isn't good for Prerna.

That's my dilemma though. I'd like you guys to know who Shiv is because I love writing his POV. His way of looking through RB's bulls*it and subtly manipulating situations to force RB to do things he should have done anyway, is fun for me as a writer. I want to have Shiv's opinion on Anurag but that's again not absolutely relevant. Also if readers aren't interested in his pov, then I don't want to thoppo it, just to fill blank pages. So please let me know what you guys think.

Also, thank you for the feedback you've given so far.

It has really helped me. I hope you guys will like the next update. It's proving to be a pain in the neck but I hope it turns out right.

Lots of love,

Aparna/Arya

I would like to read shiv’s POV of Anu

He should be aware of this third angle in his brother and bhabhi story

I just want update 😆

I want to more about shiv .but not solely just him in one update I want him to come intertwined with prerish or rishab or kukki,in a word with the main characters of this ff.but plz before that established prerish a bit more solid.u are a very good writer I know and at the end of the day whatever u update I'll love that.so plz update soon.p-s:I love ❤️ shiv🤗

I frankly quite like the character so I don't mind reading more about him however relevant or irrelevant the arc may be! He's so much fun plus I think it'll make Prerish even more slow burn! So now I feel like we should have the shiv angle too👍🏼

You said Sunday. It is sunday. God's day, if you will. Where is my update?!

Originally posted by: Sohali19

You said Sunday. It is sunday. God's day, if you will. Where is my update?!

Give me twenty minutes please.

Originally posted by: AraBearxo

I LOVE THIS. I haven't loved a story in so long and this is it!

Thank you so much. This means the world to me!