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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#921

I am at chapter nineteen. I have to comment now before I move further.

I didn't feel the absence of Maan at all. I always had a thing for the story than the characters and let me admit, I'm a huge equalist. (My friend says I'm a feminist. And I don't understand the difference - well I do but you hetthe gist)

Abyway, I liked how strong Geet is, how everyone acknowledges that and how everyone is bound to her.

The little bit of past creeping up is my fav. I won't lie, I thought Maan might be the husband. At this juncture, when I get to know her husband was actually nice to her, I still don't understand why it ended.

I think Yash and his Hallelujah is my most favorite thing apart from Geet and Musky.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#922

Vicky is a brute. But I'm still confused if musky is his daughter with his wife.

Did he die or something?

Ok I'm at the chapter after Maan apologized and is trying to ship pari to someplace. Honestly though even when I know Maan was an idiot for hurting Geet, I sort of related to him

My bloody anger takes over me sometimes and I just don't let the other person explain. And then I go entirely remorseful and go around apologizing. So, I understand Maan.

I relate to him so I'm not abusing him much lol.

And it was cute of him to apologize before everyone although the one liners with the bouquets were kinda cheesy.

Catching up more now, captain.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#923

I forgot to mention, I love Pari.

How many of us get friends like that who goes and bashes her boss not caring about her career or job, just to take her friend's side?

Maan, you gotta impress this woman too. She is looking out for Geet. You better respect that.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#924

Caught up!

I love how you beautifully tie all the loose ends perfectly. Sasha and Nikhil, to be precise. Although it was fleetingly mentioned, it was nice you made her a happy woman.

Even Vicky Rajji was a nice twist.

Coming to the story, this is such a beautiful story. Totally my type. Friends who care for each other, people who face adversities come out of it stronger and build each other up.

This is what the beauty of a relationship is.

Thanks for writing this story Soph. I adored it.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#925

Bing, I have stayed away from here ever since you've commented just because you've left me speechless and as you can tell I'm not bared of speech. If anything I can talk about anything and everything however this is a rare occasion lol

Thank you, like sincerely and deep felt thank you for reading this. I have this feeling it felt like that story you talked about, the one with so many characters thrown at you from left, right and centre lol.

But nevertheless I will take it as a compliment, to have you read me. Its a huge honor. 😃

Honestly, it wasn't meant to be this really, but in the end it came out like this. Anni was meant to be the cause of Vikram's death and in the end I was like, just stop it. It has too many things already going on lol. This story holds a special part of my heart, not only because it was my first but also because her story was somewhat similar to someone i love and care about. If anything, this was my attempt to write a happy ever after for the 'real' her in my life.

But anyway thank you for reading and for being such a sweetheart about it

Much love MWAH 🤗

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#926

Will you post somewhere else ... may be wattpad 🤔🤔🤔

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Will you post somewhere else ... may be wattpad 🤔🤔🤔

please do... even if on your blog... I want to read this story again

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#928

^ dreamer and Kwaish the aim is to rewrite, this wasn’t polished so hopefully will cut down on gibberish and make the story much more crisp. That being said that’s the sum but without an plan lol

Yes when and if I upload, it won’t be on IF no more but rest assured I’d drop an PM to you both regarding the weblink

I believe my time in GF is over. I’d much rather just talk and have fun on the forum then be a nagging writer. 😊

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: Twenty1st
^ dreamer and Kwaish the aim is to rewrite, this wasn’t polished so hopefully will cut down on gibberish and make the story much more crisp. That being said that’s the sum but without an plan lol
Yes when and if I upload, it won’t be on IF no more but rest assured I’d drop an PM to you both regarding the weblink
I believe my time in GF is over. I’d much rather just talk and have fun on the forum then be a nagging writer. 😊

Will wait .. but gonna miss your story .. no one can write comedy like you 😢😢😢 gonna miss that very much... but I do hope after short break you may come here as writer 😊😊

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