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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#891

After a long wait of 18 or so parts

he is finally here😃

its not like i always look for the male lead to make his presence known and save the day for his lady

but yaha heroine was herself looking forward to get de-addicted

she cancelled her plans to attend the meeting

it seams like babaji's conspiracy 😆

And mr.Tharapist kuch bhi kaho Maa nahi

please dont go there

just in a meeting thoda chill karlo warna heroine lene k side effects bohot bhayanak hote hai🤣

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#892

family time

as i said earlier everyone has their own ghosts locked up somewhere deep with in themselves

each and every character of this story has

ab apni baat pe aate hai😉

i'll settle calling him Doc from now on

Doc has a shak on his brother having extramarital affair

but doc heroin k saat affair nahi hota addiction aur distruction hota hai

and your bro knows it way too well

babaji i hope doc research k chalte koi wrong chemical na usse karle🤣

I can foresee our Docs future

banda pitne wala hai buri tarha😆

heroin is addictive yaar which ever scene she is she makes sure her character is elevated

a peace of advice Doc james bond mat ban tri sehat k liye acha nahi hoga🤣

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#893

the part i loved the most

its so well written sophie

i could feel maans apprehensions on living in that house with so many bad memories

memories that still haunt him

and geets past which is slowly uncovering

the question is Do they need each other now?

and i have an instant answer too

Not yet😉

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#894

past

it was painful

wo 5 saal k bache k liye koi bhi ro deta sophie

you've done it soo well

heroin ka past tho i've been living the whole story till now

tho no special mentions

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#895

heroin tho super women nikli

she is off to rescue her knight

but haan the star of the whole update is

the sapno ka rajkumar ❤️

bhopu on hogaya mera automatically

cant wait to see heroin in action😉

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#896

for the reader who is stalking me😳

sweetie since u are yet to read this one

following my comments will only prove to be spoilers😆

rest aap ki marzi😛

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#897

and now i feel the lack of heroin taking a toll on me

ye wo nahi hai someone has taken over my heroin😕

and thank god with a little slip here and there Doc did manage to stick to his charaters

this part clearly messed up the whole buildup of the story

kuch bhayanak gadbad hogaya yaha😳

with both of them playing cat and mouse

as entertaining as those scenes were i felt i was suddenly in the wrong thread

ye mera opinion hai you could always ignore it😳

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#898

halfway into the story

i take a short break

will read the rest tomorrow😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#899

ye tho interval k baad puri story hi change hogai😕

Doc has fallen for heroin but the question is is she really the heroin?

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#900

ok so i have decided to read it as separate story altogether

so all this silly fights and stufff going on at her work place is fun

on further thought this doc is acting as an antidote to heroin hai na

and superman lao ab superman ko

mai bhi dekhu 😆

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