Ariya OS: Jawaab - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

If possible after junoon give one more os mixture of jawab and saawan ki woh raat


That's a great idea Di. I will try to write up something after Junoon 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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amazing story... this was beautifully written!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

amazing story... this was beautifully written!


Thanks a lot dear 😊
I'm glad you liked it...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was an emotional os.At last both were together😊
But, Arjun shouldn't have slapped Riya though he was angry.He could have shouted or rebuked at her.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: KaziRume

It was an emotional os.At last both were together😊

But, Arjun shouldn't have slapped Riya though he was angry.He could have shouted or rebuked at her.


Thanks a lot dear 😊
I agree but in reality, a person can pretty much do anything in anger. So I just tried to show a little bit of reality in this OS.

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