Ariya OS: Jawaab

Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Raksha

@ariyalover

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Posted: 7 years ago

Res/unres

Yayyy me first again...😛

Anyways beautiful story dear...just awesome...👏

I almost cried reading this...all d emotions r vry beautifully depicted...👏

Keep writing n yah if possible plz giv an epilogue fr this one. .😃

Thanks for pm... Take care ...😊

Edited by ariyalover - 7 years ago

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Shahanaz shaik

@Shannusjs

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful os

Thanks for the pm...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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+ 12

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful and emotional

It was just awesome

Keep writing 😊

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gauri

@ariya143

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Wowww lovely os..

Love it..

Emotional ariya mom..

Thank for pm dear..

Gud work..👏

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful story

loved it

thnx for pm

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ShriRukminiKrishna

@RainOfDew

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+ 38

Posted: 7 years ago

Nice os

Finally Arjun realised his feelings

Thnx for pm

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

You write beautifully but sorry to say I didn't liked it!

I can't tolerate a guy slapping a girl who claims to secretly loving her and girl still tolerating everything to become his. No self respect!

Forehead kiss was also not necessary in my opinion! Consoling ke aur bhi ways hote hai this was way too intimate for Arjun Sakshi who he considers a team mate and that too infront of the one he claims to love and so much lost in his moment with Sakshi.

All the best for future works.

Edited by IfritAmbrose - 7 years ago