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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: bloomie
Awesome os
loved it!
Finally, Arjun was able to acknowledge his feelings and get back Riya
beautiful one!

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm really glad you liked it...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Arjunasr
Fantastic update. The emotions were portrayed very well. The pain,hurt,sorrow both faced because of love was too much to handle. Arjun surely loved Roshni and that's the reason which made it difficult for him to accept that his heart can love someone else. Thigh not true but he felt he betrayed Roshni. Both were right at there places. But I still feel Arjun had no right to slap Riya whom he proclaim to love beyond anything else. And same goes with Sakshi's scene he was so lost in consoling her that he didn't even realise that he had hurt his love. That ignorance from Arjun is what I didn't like when Riya gave everything of her to him. She continued to love him even after facing repeated hurdles. But finally they united forever. The song was very apt. And so was the last line. Wonderful os. Keep writing more. And thanks for the pm.

Oh my...what a long comment.

Thanks a lot dear for the beautiful words. 😊

You have just wonderfully analyzed the OS. And even I was mad at Arjun for doing all that. The song is my personal favourite so I was happy to write an Ariya on it.

I'm really glad you liked it...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: armishra
Emotional and beautiful os
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I hope you liked it..

Edited by Aquabutterfly - 6 years ago

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: swaasp
super duper fantabulous os
loved it a lot

and u made me cry
thanks a lot for the pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm glad you liked the story..

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Sorry to say but this OS totally sucks
I totally hate this kind of women
U really made me hate this Riya
Who don't have any self respect just to get love from the guy she can put her self respect in garbage all the time yuck
I'm sorry if I hurt ur feeling but I totally hate this Riya this Riya disappointed me very badly

That's alright. I'm still glad you at least read the story. 😊

And like I always say, everyone's entitled to their own opinion.

And as far as the story goes, I also mentioned in one of the comments above, Riya still values her self-respect. She loves Arjun so she wanted to know if her wasting her time on him was worth it or not. She knows that if someone doesn't care for her, she wouldn't care about their opinions.

But still thanks for giving this story a try and for the honest reply.

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Thanks a lot for reading 😊
And you don't need to say sorry. Everyone interprets a story in a different manner. I completely respect your point of view. I guess you saw it as a weak Riya begging for Arjun's love.

But my intent while writing was two broken souls finding their way to one another. I agree that what Arjun did was wrong but Riya hasn't forgiven him yet. She never said 'I forgive you' and she won't until Arjun made up for his mistakes. She just wanted to know if being angry at him was even going to be worth it in the end. This is an OS so I couldn't fit it in but she still values her self respect and Arjun is still not forgiven, but they both have found love.

Thank you for taking it as a honest criticism!