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nitris23

@nitris23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Awesome n beautiful update

Love it

Thnx for pm

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ruhi1985sheetal

@ruhi1985sheetal

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

I have no words to say I m speechless just two three words right now in my mind emotional beautifully written thanks for this fantabulous story thanks for pm dear

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

wow..

beautiful os.

do write more

thanks for pm

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Awesome os

loved it!

Finally, Arjun was able to acknowledge his feelings and get back Riya

beautiful one!

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Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Fantastic update. The emotions were portrayed very well. The pain,hurt,sorrow both faced because of love was too much to handle. Arjun surely loved Roshni and that's the reason which made it difficult for him to accept that his heart can love someone else. Thigh not true but he felt he betrayed Roshni. Both were right at there places. But I still feel Arjun had no right to slap Riya whom he proclaim to love beyond anything else. And same goes with Sakshi's scene he was so lost in consoling her that he didn't even realise that he had hurt his love. That ignorance from Arjun is what I didn't like when Riya gave everything of her to him. She continued to love him even after facing repeated hurdles. But finally they united forever. The song was very apt. And so was the last line. Wonderful os. Keep writing more. And thanks for the pm.

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armishra

@armishra

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Emotional and beautiful os

Thanks for pm

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Swati

@swaasp

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

super duper fantabulous os

loved it a lot

and u made me cry

thanks a lot for the pm

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Sorry to say but this OS totally sucks

I totally hate this kind of women

U really made me hate this Riya

Who don't have any self respect just to get love from the guy she can put her self respect in garbage all the time yuck

I'm sorry if I hurt ur feeling but I totally hate this Riya this Riya disappointed me very badly

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ariyalover
Res/unres
Yayyy me first again...😛
Anyways beautiful story dear...just awesome...👏
I almost cried reading this...all d emotions r vry beautifully depicted...👏
Keep writing n yah if possible plz giv an epilogue fr this one. .😃
Thanks for pm... Take care ...😊

I wonder how you always manage to be the first but I'm not complaining 😆

Thanks a lot dear for such wonderful words. 😊

I'll try to see about the epilogue but thank you again for motivating me