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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: GOLD3009
Beautiful and emotional
It was just awesome
Keep writing 😊

Thanks a lot Di 😊

I'm glad you liked it...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ariya143
Wowww lovely os..
Love it..
Emotional ariya mom..
Thank for pm dear..
Gud work..👏

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm really happy you liked the story

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: piya2812
awsm.

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
beautiful story
loved it
thnx for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether
Nice os
Finally Arjun realised his feelings
Thnx for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose
You write beautifully but sorry to say I didn't liked it!

I can't tolerate a guy slapping a girl who claims to secretly loving her and girl still tolerating everything to become his. No self respect!

Forehead kiss was also not necessary in my opinion! Consoling ke aur bhi ways hote hai this was way too intimate for Arjun Sakshi who he considers a team mate and that too infront of the one he claims to love and so much lost in his moment with Sakshi.

All the best for future works.

Thanks a lot for reading 😊

And you don't need to say sorry. Everyone interprets a story in a different manner. I completely respect your point of view. I guess you saw it as a weak Riya begging for Arjun's love.

But my intent while writing was two broken souls finding their way to one another. I agree that what Arjun did was wrong but Riya hasn't forgiven him yet. She never said 'I forgive you' and she won't until Arjun made up for his mistakes. She just wanted to know if being angry at him was even going to be worth it in the end. This is an OS so I couldn't fit it in but she still values her self respect and Arjun is still not forgiven, but they both have found love.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Beautiful os
Love it
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm glad you liked it...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: zubiya92
Awesome os
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal
I have no words to say I m speechless just two three words right now in my mind emotional beautifully written thanks for this fantabulous story thanks for pm dear

Thanks a lot for such wonderful Di 😊

You don't know how much your motivating comments mean to me...so thank you very much for them