Bepannaah FF *NEW (Part 36- pg 37) Friday, 2nd November 2018

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Hey guys, I am writing my 1st FF on our darling couple Adiya. Kindly share your views. Do let me know whether I should continue this Story or not.


HSC Results where finally out. Most of the students had passed their exams with flying colors. Finally students started taking admission for their further graduation. Same was with this 6 students from Mumbai. All took admission n finally...

It was 1st day of college for Aditya, Arjun and Yash along with Zoya, Pooja and Mahi. The 6 main character of this story.

Aditya, Arjun and Yash where childhood friends or you can say chaddi buddy. They were together since nursery. They had gone to the same school, same junior college and now where in the same COLLEGE. Many people thought they were gays, well hey, what is the meaning of your friendship if people haven't tag you n your best friend as a lesbian or a gay????

Let's meet Aditya..
Aditya was a fun loving guy who loved his family a lot. His family included his mother, sister and his chaddi buddy Arjun and Yash. His father had died long back when his baby sister Noor was born. Aditya if gets angry (which is a rare scenario) can be very difficult to handle. He is a flirt but is waiting for his dream girl.

Coming to Zoya...
Well meet Zoya, a cold, mean, arrogant, silent type of girl for the world but a loner, afraid and lost in the past girl in reality. Her parents divorced each other when she was in 7th. It had been 5 years still Zoya had not moved on in her life. Her father had left her and her mother soon after the divorce. Her mother had been a strong pillar for her but still, the happy go lucky Zoya vanished with her father. She had only 1 friend, Pooja who understood her well and was with her since 5th.

Aditya believes in love at first sight while Zoya does not believes in love. What will happen when this 2 meet?? Will Aditya fall in love with Zoya at first sight? Or will Zoya hate Aditya in the first meet?? Will they ever come across each other?? Will Zoya let Aditya break all the walls she has build around her?? Or will their story end on a sad note?? This story might seem a normal love story but it's not. There are many mysteries revolved around Zoya, Aditya and their friends.

PS: I am thinking on it, but mostly this story might not have a happy ending. There will be a twist which will ruin or you can say end the gang's friendship, love and one relationship.

PS: Mahi will become Zoya and Pooja's friend in college.

Do let me know whether I should continue with the story. If yes I'll upload the 1st part by tomorrow.

Love Love,
Anila

Index:

Part 29

Part 30

Part 31

Part 32 and 33

Part 34

Part 35

Part 36 (Last Part)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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looking forward to this ff...do PM me whenever u update,dear!
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yes please do continue.. the concept is very different.. it'll be nice to explore their relationships this way
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Originally posted by: mahi_gurmeet

looking forward to this ff...do PM me whenever u update,dear!

Hi.
Thankyou!!
Yes sure. I'll. 😃
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Okay. Thankyou! 😃
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yes please do continue.. the concept is very different.. it'll be nice to explore their relationships this way

Sure. Thankyou! 😃
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Thankyou! 😃
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Thankyou soo much for hitting the like button and commenting. Your likes and comments meant a lot to me. Thank you guys. After getting a positive response I am sure I can update part 1. Give me some time. I'll update it. Do read and let me know. 😳❤️

Love love,
Anila
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Part 1

Aditya (Adi): maa, mein nikal raha hu.

Anjana (Maa): Adi, beta sunn toh..

Adi: Yes maa?? jaldi boliye warna Yash mujhe yahi chod kar chala jayega.

Maa: All the best. Aaj se tere asli college life ka first day shuru ho raha hai. Maan lagake padhna aur utni hi shararat karna, bas itna dhyaan rakhna mujhe junior college k tarah yaha tumhare naye college aana na padhe. Samjha??

Adi: Yes mom!!

Maa: chal abh jaa..byee

Adi smiled n turned to leave when he again came back pecked his mom's cheek, hugged her n left.

Maa: pagaal..

Noor came running out of her room but Adi had left. She rolled her eyes and messaged him.

Noor: "kya bhai, kitni ghai hai aapko. itne jaldi nikal gaye? mujhse mile bhi nai. huh!! aayiye aap ghar dekh lungi aapko. waise, all the best. Bhagwan kare aapko meri bhabhi aaj 1le din hi mil jaaye. ;-) :-P byee."

Adi who was sitting behind Yash on his bike hears his mobile pinged and saw the message.

Adi: "nautanki Noor sahiba, time pr uthati aap toh mil paati apne iss handsome se bhai se. Dhamka rahi hai apne bhai ko?? Chal ate ate tere liye teri favourite ice cream lete aaunga. Hahaha, 1le din?? Jara college ghumne toh de..chal abh tu school k liye ready ho jaa. bye. :)"

Yash: kisse message kar raha hy subhe subhe?

Adi: Nono ko..

Yash: abhi toh ghar se nikla tu. phir bhi message pr baat kar rahe ho? itna pyaaar, mere toh aankhe bhar aayi, tum bhai behen ka pyaar dekh.

Adi: agar zinda college pohuchna hai na toh chup chap teri yeh khatara chala.

Yash: oyye, jaanemaan ko kuch nai bolne ka. Meri first gf hai yaar yeh.

Adi: psttt. pakka,math yaar. chal jaldi, Arjun wait kar raha hoga.

AdiSh reached their new college and saw Arjun sitting under a tree with a book in his hand.

Adi: yeh saala kabhi nai sudhrega. College pohucha nai aur book padhna chalu kar diya isne.

Yash: padhne de padhne de. Arjun k wajah se hi hum dono pass hote hai. Agar yeh bhi humare tarah ho gaya toh...

Adi: chup kar yaar tu.

Yash: arre sahi toh kaha meine..

Adi went n sat besides Arjun and Yash stood there checking out all the girls around them.

Arjun: pure 10 min late ho tum dono.

Yash: aur 10 min me I am sure tune 20 panne (pages) padh liye honge.

Adi smirked while Arjun rolled his eyes.

Adi: chal abh bas kar. kya subhe subhe padhai kar raha hai. band kar isse. Kuch accha karte hai na, 1st day hai apna college me, let's check out some girls...wat say??

Arjun closed his book knowing it was of no use arguing and sighed. Adi joined Yash and Arjun sat there looking at his friends antics.

Yash and Adi where having fun when Adi saw a girl and all the laughter, other people, YaAr got vanished. It was only the girl and him right now. He hadn't seen any beautiful girl like her. She was just perfect. Perfect hair, perfect figure, perfect height, perfect perfect perfect. A large smile came on his face and he couldn't help but stare at her. The girl seemed to be tense about something and a frown had formed on her face, suddenly her phone ranged and the girl gave a small smile, which would have gone unnoticed if Adi hadn't watched her with so much interest. That small smile was enough to make Adi's heart race and suddenly the girl left. Adi was about to go behind her when Arjun stopped him.

Arjun: bhai, kaha jaa raha hy?

Adi: haa?

Yash: theek toh hy na?? ase kise dekh liya tune??

Adi: kisi ko bhi nai yaar..

Yash smiled while Arjun gave him a sly smile indicating he knew what had happened and Adi pouted making Arjun smile.

Inside classroom.

Zoya was sitting along with Pooja.

Zoya: Allah ka lakh lakh shukar hai aapne hume call kiya. Hum toh darr hi gaye the yeh soch kar k kahi hum late toh nai na ho gaye pehle hi din.

Pooja: chill kar yaar..mein hu na..kyu tension leti hai. waise tujhe late kyu hua??

Zoya: ami ko office chodna tha. Toh pehle unhe drop kiya aur phir yaha aye. Humara calculation galat ho gaya. Khair, abhi tak prof nai aye.

Pooja: hmmm.

Zoya: kya hmmm?

Pooja: Zoya, abh hum college me hai. Toh please yeh sadu sadu types math rehna.

Zoya: Pooja aap jaante hai...

Pooja: okay baba okay, sorry!! chal abh mood theek karale. prof ate hi honge.

Zoya smiled.

In canteen...

Aditya and Yash had made Arjun bunk his 1st lec. Arjun had got different class and AdiSh where in different class. This was for the 1st tym they where been separated. Adi didn't liked it and didn't let Arjun go.

Arjun: Adi bas 6 ghante ki baat hai.

Adi: exactly 6 ghante Arjun..

Yash: ek kaam karte hai, baat karke dekhte hai Princi se kya pata maan jaaye buddha..

Arjun: nai, dekho kyu khamakha ate ate hi pange lena..its okay. kar lenge yaar manage.

Adi: Arjun, tu..

Arjun: mein lec k liye jaa raha hu..1st lec k baad milte hai.

Adi: hmm...

Arjun left while Adi stared at the coffee in front of him. Yash knew Adi was angry and decided to stay quite.

Adi got up and left followed by Yash. They decided to sit in the lec and as soon as they entered their class they saw Arjun sitting on the first bench and writing down something. Adi rushed inside and sat besides him. Yash smirked.

Adi: tu yaha? teri class toh woh wali hai na..??

Arjun: nai toh, meri class yahi hai..

Adi: matlab?? abhi thode der pehle toh..

Yash: tujhe kya laga? tang sirf tu hi khich sakta hai??

Arjun started to laugh and Adi looked utterly shocked, he got up from his place and ran behind Yash and Arjun who had ran away long back..

Yash to save himself entered the classroom which was in front of him. Aditya saw him n ran inside, to their luck the prof had still not arrived.

Adi: abh bol, abh jaha jayega tu?? haa?? mere saath majaak kiya?? apne baap k saath??

Yash: bhai mein toh bas asehi..Ar..ar..Arjun ka saath de raha tha..haa, yeh saara plan Arjun ka hi tha..

Arjun who was hiding in the sane classroom stood up.

Arjun: hatt saale jhoot kyu bol raha hy? Adi meine kuch nai kiya, plan iska tha..

Adi gave them a look and was about to punch Yash when Yash pushed him n ran away..Adi was about to fall when someone caught him at the right moment. He stood up and thanked the person.

Adi: oh thanks!

Person: no problem

Adi: waise, m Adi. Aditya Hooda

Person: Mahi. Mahi Singh

Adi smiled and was about to leave when he saw "her". This time she was staring at him. Adi looked at her n winked and her expression were priceless. He smirked and left.

Zoya: yah Allah kitna ghatiya insaan hai. ase koi kisi ladki ko dekh aankh maarta hai kya??

Mahi who was standing near Zoya looked at her n smiled.

Mahi: chodo na, bevakuf hy samajh kar chod do..

Zoya gave a faint smile.

Mahi: waise mein Mahi.

Pooja: mein Pooja aur yeh Zoya.

Mahi smiled n sat behind Pooja-Zoya.

Whike Zoya looked lost this was the first time a guy had winked at her, shock would be an understatement, she was scared, she was angry. All she hoped was not to see Aditya Hooda again. Aditya was super happy, "she" was on his floor only their classrooms where different. He was genuinely happy and was hoping to see her again ASAP, why he wondered? ..

Part 1 ends here. Hope you guys liked it. Kindly hit the like button n comment. ignore spelling n grammatical mistakes. Thank you.
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Amazing
Loved it
Adi in love already
Beautifully written
Update soon
Thanks for the pm

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