Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18
Heya Riya ! Hope u r doing well :) Heya, i am fine.! Hearing from u after a long long long time.
This Shade was superb ! Believe me when i say this I eagerly wait for this particular series everytime which i m sure many of us do since we all are in love with ACP Neil Khanna and u only make us Love him even more by highlighting his character's different layers ! U do full justice to his each shade and never fail to amaze me with ur ideas and i really really Love u for this ! Awww, thay was really sweet of u to say and believe that.! Though i am seeing a persistent downfall in response to this FF but still some comments like this help me to go.! I always try to write something new, and thats how go in search for new ideas I always wonder how it struck u to start this series...i have never come across any such FF which is dedicated to discover and unlayer each shade of a particular Character !! I think this out-of-the box idea -to start something like this let alone doing full justice to it - is in itself a great achievement ! That is why it always stands out from other FF's for me and i always look forward to read this ! A big hug to u for giving us this Lovely FF and writing it with so much dedication ! Omg, now u are really making me grin and blush.! Well, i myself wonder how this idea struck me, but it just happened. Maybe this is the result of my love and liking for a Perfect ML and much loved character that has imprinted its effect on my heart, Mr. Neil Khanna.!
Coming to this particular one... I loved it to the bits ! The beginning held me confused since it was a continuation and i was wondering how did Avni and he were in the same room 😆 Then it came - it was our Impatient khanna's dream 😆 Poor guy was not even able to sleep in his room...Can he get any more Cuter than this ;) Yes, i can make him more cute 😉 hahaa 😆 I knew readers will be left confused, then they will go back and read again.! Blame my eternal obssesion of starting some new write up's with a dream 😆 i still cant get over it 😉
The whole tease and revenge game was fun ! And the description of the scene in Avneil's room was cute ! Now i won't get into details(already the comment is becoming a story LOL ) ...but would definitely like to highlight two things here which i absolutely loved :- So glad to know u enjoyed those parts.! I never planned a revenge story, it just happened in a flow then later i realise, this is a better read than what i planned
I loved how Avni's Impatience and longing was also highlighted along with Neil's in this continuation( although she was suppressing it and being more mature for the right reasons ) it added more flavour to the story ! Thank u for pointing that out.! Since they equally love each other, and are equally facing fhe side effects of little separation so their Impatience to express that has to be equal too. Right.?
I really appreciate how the intimacy was blended in the story . It never appeared awkward or uncomfortable or out of the place . U wrote those scenes gracefully !! Writing such scenes boldly and in a mature manner is one thing but Very few writers pull off such scenes with such grace and still keep the thing ( emotions and spark) there and i m personally very fond of this quality ! Awww, That really warmed up my heart to the T. This was something i wanted to hear, i was expecting a feedback on this, so thank u so much. Writing mature aspects are never my forte but still i try new things since i didnt want to limit my writing, it was new atgempt and i am so glad it came out well.! Cant thank u enough for this I really mean it when i say this -And u r one such writer who writes aesthetically and ur writing style is so pleasing !! Lots of Love to u !! i am blushing harder now.! Thank u so much for all ur beautiful words.! They mean the world to me.
Everytime i decide to keep my comment short and efficient rather than long and boring ...i end up like this 😛 I love it, like this only 😉
Thanks for the update and the fact that it is going to be continued in the next shade as well makes me even more excited..!! It is always my pleasure, In next we are going to take things a notch higher.! 😉 Would be waiting patiently unlike Imaptient Mr. & Mrs. Khanna 😉 Like u say Patience is a virtue ( i loved that revenge scene where u used this dialogue when Neil gave that back to her) but don't take too Long !! Stay Blessed ! So glad to know that u have enjoyed this part thoroughly. Nah i will be back soon 😉
Hey Amayra,
Thank u so much dear for ur deatiled and heartwarming response.!
That really means a lot to me, and i hope u know that.!
Keep reading and appreciating.!
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