#15 MR. IMPATIENT Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Only you can bring different shades of Neil so successfully! And make us fall in love with him even more than before . Thank u so much for such a cute compliment Khanna house mei pool thi ?_ nahi bhi tha toh kya fark padta hai 😉 Meri story me toh hai 😆

Lol , Avni doesn't allow him to kiss even in his dreams😆No issue , he got what he wanted . Mr. Khanna has his own ways to get what he wants. She just raised his anticipation and desperation successfully moving away after giving a wild Peck😆 Making his hormones go wilder, as if they were not so wild, already 😆 Gosh, what am i even writing. ! 😆

God ! U are not so very innocent . Maine kaha hi ka tha ki mai sharif hu 😉 Writes stuff coated in not so Sharif words ! Withdrawal symptoms😆Neil and his words . Even I wasn't able to understand the whole sentence initially With all the pun intended 😉 isko bolte hai sharafat. Think about below 18's who read such stuffs.! Unke lie thodi sharafat dikhani padti hai 😉

The story started with impatient Mr.Khanna and ended with impatient Mrs.Khanna . Tit for tat !😆Now he was taking advantage of her mehindi clad hands to raise the temperature and desperation by teasing her . At last gave to wifey's demands which was his ultimate aim . To hear that from her mouth . It wasnt actually planned at all, but since i started writing(as planned) it was coming out like Avni has no interest in this adventures and she kept blocking his advancements, which was portraying Neil in not so good way.! So i improvised the planned story and make them equally desparate and impatient for each other, just that Avni was a controlled one, atleast when in public place. 😉 so yeah, it came out with both of their common shades

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Finally in the end we got our quota of different shades of acp Neil Khanna. Hahaaa. It took a lot of efforts and thinking to write one shade story, isslie time lag jata hai.! 2 -3 din toh plot sochne me hi chale jaate hai Loved it. I was unable to control my blush reading this. Great going man. Grace us with these updates quite often. And with all these, i think its all worth it.! Thank u so much buddy.!

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

That was intense and hot! Avni Khanna is indeed an epitome of surprise. Can't wait for next..

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

riya i keep falling in love with ACP khanna all thanks to your writing👏👏 Aww, u never fail to mention about my writing.! Thanknu so much dear

love this so much keeping the sparks alive between this hot couple , naughty tillu and teasing tilli is a treat😉 Ab kya kare, show me toh kuch hota nahi hai, socha story me toh kuch hone de 😉its amazing how you turned the tables😳 Glad to know u enjoyed that part well can't wait for next part besides the shades i am loving the plot you choose👏👏👏 Thank u so much for acknowledging and menrioning that.! Plot decide karne me hi most efforts lagte hai, baki toh writing part toh asani se hojata hai. 😉

much love

safia

Originally posted by: sushfiza

It started wid a romantic incomplete dream .. i am obssesed with starting new story with a dream. 😆 Poor neil how could he resist n that to fr 2days.? Tit for tat . now avni was in the same state as neil was sometimes bfore. ACP Sahab ka charm plus his deadly revenge plans, how can Avni not get a breathless moment HAAAWT e ncounter. Enjoyed reading it. Do write more

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Ri omg its really hawttt.😳 Thank u

Mr.impatient vs mrs.Impatient.👏 Whom do u like more.?

Wow tit for tat hogai. Starting pe neil impatient thi end avni impatient hai.😉 I didnt plan to write that, bus flow me voh idea aagaya 😉

Aww, avni didn't allowed him to kiss her in dream also. Yeh toh bada atyachaar hogai blie munda ke saath. Hahaa 😆 Ab uske dreams hi itne advanced hote hai toh Avni bhi kya karegi 😉

"Withdrawal symptoms" doctor sahiba aap kya likhrahi ho. Mujhe samaj nayi aaya. Then I got understand wat type of symptoms is that. Hahaaha 😆 Bhavnao me beh gai thi mai saf.! 😉 samajh gaya na bus.!

Store room scene was too hot to handle. Temperature bohath high hogai.☺️ Itne me hi.? Fir next me kya hoga 😉

Mehndi ki advantage leli blue munda ne.☺️

Atlast avni ne green signal dedi. Lol Avni toh khud hi taras rahi thi vo kya green signal degi. Neil has his own ways to make her surrender

Awesome one ri. Superb shades. Issmein mrs.khanna ki shade bhi nazar aayi.😉 Thank u so much saf, vaise bhi aag toh 2no taraf lagegi na toh 2no ke shades aaenge

Continue soon eagerly waiting for next update. Will try my best

Originally posted by: srain10

Awesome...

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Wow it was amazing👏👏👏.. Thank u so mich .neil khanna is so imapatient😉😉...its not his fault if wifey will so irrestible what he can do... Bingo.! his plain tortures over avni was awsm😳...loved it... glad to know u enjoyed those parts plz update next shade ...plz make a possesive khanna also plz plz will try my best.!

Originally posted by: Kathy_927

It was effing hot chap dude, I'm yet again in loss

of words. Let me remind you again, I lost on the

count. Avneil are always pure bliss.

Waiting for next shade to be revealed.

With Love

Kathy❤️

Originally posted by: Redrose1208

Awesone one... Thank u so much Jaldi niaklo yeh do din... Sabr nhi hora hamare mature tillu se... Tillu se ya aapse.? 😉

Plz do write a really kinku shade of mr khanna... I am sure it will be so loved.. Thats actually not my forte but i am trying my best in next one. So lets see how it turns out to be. 😉.