#15 MR. IMPATIENT Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!! - Page 2

Ri omg its really hawttt.😳

Originally posted by: darsh333

Mahn!!!!i had a naughty smile while reading the ff☺️😳 So glad to know, my story is the reason for it

Just just loved it!!!😃 Thank u so much

It began with impatient neil khanna and ended with an impatient avni neil khanna😳 Hahaa 😆 That was not an initial idea, it was last minuite improvisation. 😉

The definition of withdrawal symptoms!riya you reminded of the substance abuse chapters of forensic and pharmc😆 Hahhaaa 😆 i told u i cant get the doc out of my head. Well, i used it in total different context here 😉

So neil took a revenge😳if avni left neil's lips swollen..then at the end he left her in the same way☺️ Yes, if Wifey is being naughty, how can he lag behind 😉

Never expected the beginning to be a dream😆 Tbh, i expected that coming.! I have this weired obssesion of starting with a dream, sorry cant help it 😆

The temperatures are soaring girl😳

So this is a must say thing..you have very well penned down such intimate scenes with such a beauty that doesn't make it look awkward and at the same time manages to bring that naughty smile on our faces😳😊this is the power of a writer!and you are blessed to have this riya!👏 Awww, that definately is the cutest thing i have ever heard, feel like framing it and hang in my wall 😆 Thank u so much for saying that

And between what is with this 2 days??i don't remember anything about it. This is actually a continuation of last one. In last chap i told that Avni will be living in Neela's house as being ladki wale till DD-Sunheri Marriage. That was a 7 day affair. Here we are on a day before their marriage, so basically 2 days till the time Avni is away from Neil, thats where all his frustration, impatience, absteneince and withdrawal symptoms are coming from 😉

Poor sunehri and dd..it is their marriage and they are not even seen in the scene😆 😆 Imagine they are busy in themselves. Well that was just to give the marriage feels.

This was a looong one and full of avneil in it😃update the next part soon! Next part is going to even more interesting with naughty Mr amd Mrs Khanna 😉

Thank u so much dear.!
I am so glad u enjoyed the story.!
Will try to put up next part soon.!
Much love.!

Originally posted by: Brightglow

Res Riii😃

Will be waiting, patiently.!

Originally posted by: __pohu__

Your crafts are always a pleasure to read Riya👏

Brilliantly Penned!!

It was really hawt❤️

Awww, so sweet of u to say that.!
Thank u so very much dear.!
Means a lot to me.!
Keep reading.!

Originally posted by: Nairagoenka2606

It was awsmmm👏👏

Plzz upload the next part asap

Thank u so much.!
Will try my best.!

Wow it was amazing 👏👏👏...neil khanna is so imapatient 😉😉...its not his fault if wifey will so irrestible what he can do...his plain tortures over avni was awsm😳...loved it...plz update next shade ...plz make a possesive khanna also plz plz

It was effing hot chap dude, I'm yet again in loss

Heya Riya ! Hope u r doing well :)
This Shade was superb ! Believe me when i say this I eagerly wait for this particular series everytime which i m sure many of us do since we all are in love with ACP Neil Khanna and u only make us Love him even more by highlighting his character's different layers ! U do full justice to his each shade and never fail to amaze me with ur ideas and i really really Love u for this ! I always wonder how it struck u to start this series...i have never come across any such FF which is dedicated to discover and unlayer each shade of a particular Character !! I think this out-of-the box idea -to start something like this let alone doing full justice to it - is in itself a great achievement ! That is why it always stands out from other FF's for me and i always look forward to read this ! A big hug to u for giving us this Lovely FF and writing it with so much dedication !
Coming to this particular one... I loved it to the bits ! The beginning held me confused since it was a continuation and i was wondering how did Avni and he were in the same room 😆 Then it came - it was our Impatient khanna's dream 😆 Poor guy was not even able to sleep in his room...Can he get any more Cuter than this ;)
The whole tease and revenge game was fun ! And the description of the scene in Avneil's room was cute ! Now i won't get into details(already the comment is becoming a story LOL ) ...but would definitely like to highlight two things here which i absolutely loved :-
I loved how Avni's Impatience and longing was also highlighted along with Neil's in this continuation( although she was suppressing it and being more mature for the right reasons ) it added more flavour to the story !
I really appreciate how the intimacy was blended in the story . It never appeared awkward or uncomfortable or out of the place . U wrote those scenes gracefully !! Writing such scenes boldly and in a mature manner is one thing but Very few writers pull off such scenes with such grace and still keep the thing ( emotions and spark) there and i m personally very fond of this quality ! I really mean it when i say this -And u r one such writer who writes aesthetically and ur writing style is so pleasing !! Lots of Love to u !!
Everytime i decide to keep my comment short and efficient rather than long and boring ...i end up like this 😛
Thanks for the update and the fact that it is going to be continued in the next shade as well makes me even more excited..!! Would be waiting patiently unlike Imaptient Mr. & Mrs. Khanna 😉 Like u say Patience is a virtue ( i loved that revenge scene where u used this dialogue when Neil gave that back to her) but don't take too Long !! Stay Blessed !

Awesone one... Jaldi niaklo yeh do din... Sabr nhi hora hamare mature tillu se...