#15 MR. IMPATIENT Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!!

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Very HOT! Loved it!

Thank u so much! 😉

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darsh333

@darsh333

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Posted: 7 years ago

Mahn!!!!i had a naughty smile while reading the ff☺️😳

Just just loved it!!!😃

It began with impatient neil khanna and ended with an impatient avni neil khanna😳

The definition of withdrawal symptoms!riya you reminded of the substance abuse chapters of forensic and pharmc😆

So neil took a revenge😳if avni left neil's lips swollen..then at the end he left her in the same way☺️

Never expected the beginning to be a dream😆

The temperatures are soaring girl😳

So this is a must say thing..you have very well penned down such intimate scenes with such a beauty that doesn't make it look awkward and at the same time manages to bring that naughty smile on our faces😳😊this is the power of a writer!and you are blessed to have this riya!👏

And between what is with this 2 days??i don't remember anything about it.

Poor sunehri and dd..it is their marriage and they are not even seen in the scene😆

This was a looong one and full of avneil in it😃update the next part soon!

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
loved it

Thank u buddy.! 😊

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Kaiina

@Kaina.Ain

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Posted: 7 years ago

Your crafts are always a pleasure to read Riya 👏

Brilliantly Penned!!

It was really hawt ❤️

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Nairagoenka2606

@Nairagoenka2606

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

It was awsmmm👏👏

Plzz upload the next part asap

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Only you can bring different shades of Neil so successfully! And make us fall in love with him even more than before . Khanna house mei pool thi ?_

Lol , Avni doesn't allow him to kiss even in his dreams 😆 No issue , he got what he wanted . She just raised his anticipation and desperation successfully moving away after giving a wild Peck 😆

God ! U are not so very innocent . Writes stuff coated in not so Sharif words ! Withdrawal symptoms 😆 Neil and his words . Even I wasn't able to understand the whole sentence initially .

The story started with impatient Mr.Khanna and ended with impatient Mrs.Khanna . Tit for tat ! 😆 Now he was taking advantage of her mehindi clad hands to raise the temperature and desperation by teasing her . At last gave to wifey's demands which was his ultimate aim . To hear that from her mouth .

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

Finally in the end we got our quota of different shades of acp Neil Khanna. Loved it. I was unable to control my blush reading this. Great going man. Grace us with these updates quite often.

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

That was intense and hot! Avni Khanna is indeed an epitome of surprise. Can't wait for next..

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

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riya i keep falling in love with ACP khanna all thanks to your writing 👏👏

love this so much keeping the sparks alive between this hot couple , naughty tillu and teasing tilli is a treat 😉 its amazing how you turned the tables 😳 well can't wait for next part besides the shades i am loving the plot you choose 👏👏👏

much love

safia

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