Life is still beautiful with you Prem Heer SS (Chapter 13 on page 27)

Posted: 7 years ago
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Prem Heer SS

Life is still beautiful with you

This story started after episode 386 where Ash proposed Prem to come in her house if he wanted her to withdraw sexual harassment case against him. But we all saw it was not Prem but it was Heer who went to meet Ash. My SS starts from that moment.

Chapter 1:

After hearing the calling bells , Ash opened the door in a mind. She was feeling victorious in her mind. In her mind today would be a very special night for her. Today her desire would be fulfilled by her Prem. Today she would claim Prem as her man. Heer would have no choice other than sharing Prem with her.

But all her happy thoughts were blown away when she saw it was Heer who was waiting for her at the other side of the door.

"Tum yaha kar rahi ho, Prem kaha hain? A furious Ashlesha asked Heer.

"Mere dil main hain, tumhe jo kutch bhi kehana mujhe keh sakti ho kyunki mujh me aur Prem main koi farak nahi hain. A confident Heer replied.

" To tum ye kahe rahe ho tum me aur Prem me koi farak nahi hain , iss ka maine hain jo sukh mujhe Prem de sakta tha wo tum bhi de sakti ho. Ash told Heer in a teasing voice.

Soon Ash started to move her hands slowly on Heer's hair and then slowly touched her face with her fingers. Heer felt numbed at that weird behavior of Heer. Then something in her brain clicked and she got alarmed and strongly pushed Ash away from Heer.

"Ashlesha Balwant Maan aaj tune sari hadde par kar di , ye tu kya karni ki koshish kar rahi thi mere saat. Tu bhul chooki hain main ek shadi shuda aurat hu aur mujh pe sirf Prem ka haq hain thik waisi jaisi ki Prem par meri haq hain. Tu iss baat ko bhi bhul choki hain ki main teri didi hu, mujh se aisi hadkart karti hue tujhe bilkul bhi sharam nahi ayei. Heer shouted at Ashlesha. Heer was feeling deeply disgusted at her cousin's behavior.

Ash laughed loudly at Heer reaction.

"Gussa kyun kar rahi ho Heer , tumne ei to kahi thi tum me aur Prem koi fadak nahi hain. Iss ka matlab to ye hi hua na ki jo sukh mujhe Prem de sakti thi wo tum de sakti ho. Lekin tumhe gabrahne ki koi jarurat nahi. Main uss type ki ladki nahi hu, main straight hu . Main to bas tumhare saat majak kar rahi thi aur tumhe ye ahesas delani ki koshish kar rahi thi ki tum aur Prem ek nahi ho mere liye. Tum dono me zamin asman ki farak hain. Jo sukh mujhe Prem de sakti hain, wo tum kabhi bhi mujhe nahi de sakti ho. Ashlesha told Heer in a clam voice.

"Tumhara mazak bhi tumhari tara disgusting hain, to ye tha tumhara proposal Prem ke liye. Heer was feeling angry. She was already angry at Ash for trying to blackmail her husband. Now after seeing what was the planning of Ash for her Prem made her blood boil? She was feeling like breaking every bones of her cousin's body.

"Tum jiss ko disgusting keha rahi hu, wo to ek hakikat hain, har insan ka kutch physical desire hote hain Heer.

"Ha samaj gayi tujhe jarurat hain. Lekin main tujh se pooch thi hu iss duniya main cororo ladke hain, phir bhi kyun tu meri Prem ki pitche padi hui hain? Heer asked Ash in an angry voice.

"Ha duniya main kororo ladke hain, lekin uss me Prem jaisa khas ladka bahut kam hain. Hazoro main ek hain Prem. Aur mujhe aise hi aadmi ka payar chaiye hain mera payash bujha ne ke liye. Ash clamly told Heer.

"Payar jabardasti ya blackmail kar ke nahi pa ja sakta hain Ash. Ye to do insan ka dilo ka bandhan hota hain un dono ka aatma ka Milan hoti hain aur isi payar ki rishta shaddi jaise pavitra bandhan se aur bhi agae badte te hain. Pati patni ka payar sirf tan ka nahi hoti hain Ash iss payar ka rishta ruho ki hoti hain. Aapni jibon ki har sukh dukh pati patni ko ek dusre se jodti hain. Heer told Ash in a passionate voice.

"Mujhe tumhari ye rishto ka bashan sunne main koi interest nahi hain, Agar Prem ne meri shart nahi mana to o saat saal ke liye andar chala jayega. Aur issi tara tum dono ki Prem Kahani ka the end hogayi hogi. Ash taunted Heer.

"Jo Prem kahani bhagwan ne likha hain oos prem kahani ko koi khatam nahi kar sakti hain MS. Ashlesha Maan. Aur saat saal to kya hamare maut ki baad bhi hamari prem kahani zinda rahegi. Judayi sirf jism ko hota hain, dilo aur aatma ka nahi . Both Heer and Ash got surprised after hearing Prem's voice. They saw Prem was standing on door with Harman.

"Prem tum yaha? A surprised Heer asked her husband. She did not wait for any reply she rushed to Prem's arm and hug him tightly . Prem hugged her back.

"Mujhe pata chala kit um Ashlesha ki ghar me ayi ho. Mujhe dart ha ye pagal aurat tumhare saat kutch kar na bhaite iss liye main Harman ka saat yaha aya. Main tumhe ya batana chata hu ki humara case main jeet nischit hain. Prem confidently told ash.

"Aapne aap ko jutha dilasa dena bandh karo Prem , mere sharat maan ne ke siva tumhare pass koi aur rasta nahi hain. Ash told Heer.

"Nahi , tum galat ho Ash, dekho ye raha DNA report jis main saff saff ye kheta ki Sneha Prem bhaiya ka beti nahi hain. Aur hum ye bhi jan gaye ki Sneha tumhari bhi beti nahi hain. Hamara shak sahi that um jaroor Sneha ka ashram se utha kar le ayi ho. Harman remarked.

Ash was stunned after learning that her falsehood got caught. She was furious because of that as it would surely weakend her case.

"Kyun Ashlesha sacchayi samne ayi to tumhara juban pe tala lag gayi . Itna shocked feel maat karo, kyunki tumhare liye hamare pass aur ek surprise hain. " After telling this Prem moved towards Tv set and DVD player and then he opened the DVD player and put the DVD.

Everyone, shifted their focus on tv and they saw how Ash was trying to hug Prem from behind, how she was yelling like crazy and mentioning how much desire she felt for Prem. They also saw how Prem prevent her every moves. How he clearly told Ash that, He only belonged to his Heer and shouted at Ash for trying to touch her. They saw how Ash was trying to enforce herself on Prem in the sofa. They also saw how Prem pushed away Ash from him and how Ash got hit in her head. At last, they saw how Prem kicked Ashlesha out of Juneja house.

After seeing that, Heer felt so much pride for her Prem, she felt for her Prem . According to her it again showed the bond they share between them. She felt her hatred for Ashlesha got increased more as she saw her to harass her Prem.

"Ashlesha aab tum acche tara se samaj gayi hogi ki iss video footage aur DNA report kafi hain bhayia ko bekosur sabbit karne ke liye. Aur ha hamare pas iss sabooto ki aur bhi das copy hai, iss liye iss report ko farne aur dvd ko damage kar bhi lo tab bhi tum nahi bachogi. Harman smirked.

"Dekh liya Ashlesha bhagwan hamesha sacchayi ka saat deta hain. Iss video ko dekhne ne ke baat mere dil me tumhare liye nafrat aur bhi bad gayi, ye kaisi harkat thi , tumne Maan pariwar ka izzat mitte me mila di. Tumhara liye Prem tumhari jisam ki bhookh mitani ki jariya he aur meri liye Prem meri aatma ki sathi hain, humara payar aur rishta ko tum jaisi insan jitna bhi koshish kare tod nahi sakti hain. Hamara saat janam ka hain. Heer told Ash and she was about to leave Ash house with Prem and Harman but she stopped when Ash spoke.

"Rook jao tum log , mera bas bhi kutch hain tum logo ko dekhane ke liye.

End of chapter 1

Index

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Omg Wow amazing ch 1
So riveting like a novel 😆 I enjoyed the back and forth confrontation of Heer vs Ash 😲
It's exactly like I'm show - you're amazing in writing out the scenes wow wow I 👏

Harman and Prem came as surprise - I lob this 😃 woohoo
Also evidence are spot on!

Now what does Ash has to say I wonder *thinking*
Excited for next ch 😃
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Omg Wow amazing ch 1
So riveting like a novel 😆 I enjoyed the back and forth confrontation of Heer vs Ash 😲
It's exactly like I'm show - you're amazing in writing out the scenes wow wow I 👏

Harman and Prem came as surprise - I lob this 😃 woohoo
Also evidence are spot on!

Now what does Ash has to say I wonder *thinking*
Excited for next ch 😃

Thanks for commenting. You are one of my most regular reader.
Next chapter will be updated after 3-4 days.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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woww :o amazing
awosome start
and superb dailouges
love Heer ❤️
heer ke sceans with ash awosome hai
Ash ke bhe dailouges awosome hai
love
premeer ❤️
cant wait to read next part
thanks for them PM :)
Posted: 7 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: tarannum6

woww :o amazing
awosome start
and superb dailouges
love Heer ❤️
heer ke sceans with ash awosome hai
Ash ke bhe dailouges awosome hai
love
premeer ❤️
cant wait to read next part
thanks for them PM :)

Thanks for your long review.
There will be more Prem and Heer in this ff in next chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
You are a wonderful writer
Awesome start the first chapter written so well
The confrontation betw ash and heer was awesome
Love the dailouges and prem entry with Herman
Curious to know what happen next
Waiting for next part
Posted: 7 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

You are a wonderful writer

Awesome start the first chapter written so well
The confrontation betw ash and heer was awesome
Love the dailouges and prem entry with Herman
Curious to know what happen next
Waiting for next part

Thanks for the compliment.
You will see more Prem and Heer in next chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
Wow another ff from you
Awesome the convo between ash and heer was awesome
Hmmm prem entry with herman wonder what ash have to show them


Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

Wow another ff from you

Awesome the convo between ash and heer was awesome
Hmmm prem entry with herman wonder what ash have to show them


Yes, nowadays I am finding new ideas to write on Prem Heer.
Ash will certainly show something interesting.

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