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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for your comment Sana.
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wow v emotional dialogues. So sweet. It's how we wanted to see them in show 😆 and it never happened 😕

Well you are the magician and you made it happen for us. 👏 Glad to have PH talking to each other again and became friendly and understanding instead of wallowing in guilt 😕 This is very refreshing.

Prem's punishment is fab 😆 Heer so cutely agrees aw - well she's a doll.

Ash is in for a big surprise huh. hmmm
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS


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wow v emotional dialogues. So sweet. It's how we wanted to see them in show 😆 and it never happened 😕

Well you are the magician and you made it happen for us. 👏 Glad to have PH talking to each other again and became friendly and understanding instead of wallowing in guilt 😕 This is very refreshing.

Prem's punishment is fab 😆 Heer so cutely agrees aw - well she's a doll.

Ash is in for a big surprise huh. hmmm

Thanks for the compliment.
Prem Heer will continue to support each other in this story.
Ash will have little presence in the story for next few chapters but after that who knows.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing update
love it
you are anazing writer
thanks for the pm
Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: tarannum6

amazing update
love it
you are anazing writer
thanks for the pm

Thanks for liking the chapter.
Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Life is still beautiful with you

Chapter 4:

Heer resting herdr head on Prem's shoulder.

"Heer, tumhe pata hain aaj mera zindegi mein ek anokha din hein. Aaj mere dil se ek boj door ho gaya. Aaj se pahele mere dil mein hamesha ye baat chubddti thi ki aanjane mein sahi mein tumhari alwa kisi aur ladki ke karib gaya. Mein aaj bhi khud ko puri tara se maaf nahi kar payi thi. Lekin aaj jab mujhe pata laga ki aisa kutch nahi hua tab mein tumhe bata nahi sakta kitna kushi mehasos kar rahi ho. " Prem told Heer.

" Prem mujhe bhi accha laga ki sari galat femhi door hogayi . Aur mein jhoot nahi bolungi Prem, mujhe iss bat se alag hi kushi lag rahi ki mein tumhari zindegi mein pahela aur akhiri ladki ho. Mein tumse bahut payar karti hu Prem, tum sirf meri ho. Heer passionately told her husband.

"Janti hu Heer mujhe tumhari ye possessive side bahut accha laga. Tum meri zindegi ka paheli aur akhiri manjil ho Heer. Mera payar sirf tumhari liye hein aur mein ye bhi janta hu ki jistara mein sirf tumhara hu. Ussi tara tum bhi sirf mera ho. Prem kissed on Heer's forehead.

"Prem hamari zindegi mein aab koi galat feimi ko hum barne nahi denge. Heer told Prem.

"Galat feimi ka toodna bahut zoori hein zindegi mein. Zaisi ki pichle bish saal se mera ek galat feimi thi ki mera ek maa hein. Prem told Heer.

Heer could clearly sense that, Prem was deeply hurt by Gayetri's action. She once again felt her anger towards Gayetri. She could not imagine that, her step mother in law would engage herself in such disgusting behavior. Heer could no longer deny that, Mrs. Gayetri Juneja was a direct enemy of their love story.

Heer decided that, she would not let anyone to mess with their love story. She would not show kindness towards those people who were very cruel to her and Prem. She knew that, Prem was feeling pain, but she believed that with her love she could heal the scar of Prem.

"Prem mein bhi unki bartab se hairan hu, pichle chay saat saal se unki behavior pura badal gayi hein,

Lekin job hi ho Prem aab jab hume unka saachayi ka pata chal gayi to hum ek saat unke saamna karenge aur unko koi aur mauka nahi doongi jaise wo hamare rishte mein darar dal da sakhe. Heer told Prem in a determined voice.

"Ha Heer tum sahi bol rahi ho, aab hum unne to kiya kisiko bhi koi mauka nahi doonga hamare rishte mein darar dal nein ki. Kaal kaura chauth ghar mein ek utsab ki halat hein, agar aaj mein unka samna kiya to mein khud bhi nahi janta hu mein kya karoonga, ghar ka mahal jaroor kharap ho jayega. Galti unki hein lekin iss ki asar sab ka mopod pe padega. Kaal kaura chauth aur uske baat court ka case mit jaye tab hum sabko unki saachayi ki bare mein batayenge. Lekin ek baat to saaf aab mera aur Mrs. Gayetri Juneja ka bitch koi rishta nahi hein. Prem told her in a determined voice.

In Juneja Mansion:

Harman reached into house, and everyone was surprised to see him alone.

"Harman Prem bhaiya kaha hein ? Maya asked him.

"Prem bhaiya Heer ka saat mein hein, wo dono hamare hotel mein hein, bhaiya ne kaha wo bhabhi se kutch ekele pal bitna chahte hein. Harman replied.

"Hayee mera bhai kitna romantic hein . Kulraj remarked.

"Ha di romantic hona to koi inse jane,par hamari Heer bhabhi kam romantic nahi hein. Preet commented.

" Accha hua undono ko thoda time milega ek dusre se baat karne ke liye, Harman table mein jake khale, bookh laga hoga tujhe. Gayetri told Harman.

Harman was deeply disturbed after seeing his mother's disgusting behavior in the video, he felt like telling everyone about her action, her every words were looking like fake to him.

But, Harman control himself as he realized why Prem forbade him to say anything about Gayetri.

"Nahi maa mujhe bookh nahi hein abhi mein baad mein kha loonga. After saying that, Harman left his room.

After reaching his room, Harman got himself lost in deep thought. He again played the dvd that was given by Ash. He again every word that were uttered by his mother and he once again realized that there was a side of his mother, which was unknown to him until today.

In Juneja Hotel:

"Prem tum iss waqt kyun kha rahe ho? Heer was obviously surprised to see Prem was eating in that period time. Therefore, she asked him.

"Aisai, bookh lagh raha tha, accha ye bataon tum kyun kha rahi ho iss waqt? Prem asked her.

"Prem tum jante ho kaal kaura chauth hain, iss liye mein aisi kar rahi ho. Lekin tum.., ek minute kohi tum mere liye brauth to nahi rakh rahe ho? Heer asked him in a romantic voice.

"Wah, lag rahe hein mere saat reheke tum bhi intelligent hogayi ho, mere sangat ka accha impact pari tum par. Prem tried to deflect the topic.

"Prem mein pahele se smart hoon, aur tum topic ghrau maat, Prem tumhe brauth rakhne ki koi jarurat nahi, tum aram karo. Heer told him in a sweet voice.

"Accha ye baat hain, dekho Heer tum kaal brauth kyun rakh rahi ho, mere lambhe umar ke liye na, to batao agar mein lambhe waqt tak zinda raha to mere jeevan saathi ko bhi to zinda rehene chaiye lambe waqt tak, iss liye mein brauth rakh raha ho tumhare lambe umar ke liye.

Heer tumhe aab samaj nela chayiye ki mein koi mahan nahi hu, mere brauth rakhne ne ke piche bahut hi bara selfish reason hein. Prem cupped Heer's face after telling her that.

Heer once again touched by Prem's depth of love towards for her. She once again thanked god for selecting Prem as her partner.

"Mein jaroor pichle janam mein koi bari acchi kam kiyi thi, jis liye bhagwan ne tumhe chuna mere liye, mein nahi janti thi koi kissi se itna payar kar sakte hein. Mere bass bhagwan se ek hi gujarish hein ki wo hume zindegi ki har raho pe ek rahe. Heer rested her head on Prem's shoulder after expressing her thought.

"Heer mujhe ye lagta hein ki hamahre ye saat sirf iss janam ki nahi hein, Heer insan ka sharer mar jata hein, lekin unki aatma rehe jata hein, hum dono ko attma ka rishta hein jo kabhi nahi toot sakte hein. Heer , bhagwan ne hum dono ko banaya ek doosre ke liye, aur mujhe pura yakeen hein iss liye hum dono kabhi alag nahi honge. Prem kissed Heer's forhead after saying that.

"Prem ek saal pahele bhi mere zindegi mein koi rang nahi thi, lekin aab lag rahi hein zindegi kitni hasin hein, thank you Prem mere zindegi mein aane ke liye. Heer told him.

"Heer yaad hein ek waqt tumne hein mujhe kahi thi, hum dono kabhi nahi mile the kyunki hum dono hamesha saat thein, to iss liye thank you maat bolo.

Heer aab 2017 hein , jab mein teen ager tha tab mein Harry potter para tha. Uss mein agar insan dementor naam ki creature darwa attacked hua tab insan ek zinda lash ban jate hein kyunki usski aatma kho jate hein. Heer sirf sharer hone se koi insan zinda nahi rahete hein, insan ke zinda rehene ke liye unki aatma bhi jaroori hein . Tum mere aatma ki zinda rahene ka wajah ho.

Heer kyun na hum koi doorse ghoor aye jaha pein sirf hum dono aur hamare chahat honge. " Prem suggested.

"Ha Chahat ke winter vacation hote hein hum ja sakte hein, lekin kaha jaooge? Heer asked Prem.

"Rajasthan. Prem replied her.

Chapter end

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Lovely update too good
I loved it and amazing dialogue
Waiting for next part
Update soon
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Awesome Lovely update too good

I loved it and amazing dialogue
Waiting for next part
Update soon

Thanks for the comment, you are one of my regular readers and I really appreciate that.
In next part their will be some drama, I hope you will like that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update with beautiful dialogues
Love it
Waiting for next part
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

Amazing update with beautiful dialogues

Love it
Waiting for next part

Thanks for your comments. I will try soon.

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