RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Hello buddies!

So here is the new story!

Posting now the sneak peak.

The 1st part will be out in the starting of October.

Hope you all like this story and support me as you supported my other stories.

Will be sending PMs to all those who like this post and are in my buddy list(if not yet, add me :-) OK!)

Zarir

A Urdu word with meaning:

A person of Intelligence

A person who is Easy to Love

Let the breeze pass through you to make you feel it.

Let the time pass with you to make you know it.

Let the love pass along you to make you understand it.

Let the life pass by you to make you hold it.

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Index

Sneak-Peak
Part 1
Part 2

Question Poll

Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8A
Part 8B
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12

Your Opinions!
Part 13

Part 14 A
Part 14 B
Part 15

Thank you note

Epilogue - Jackpot

Thanks for reading.

See you!

Love you all

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Sneak-Peak

"How is she Doctor?"

"She is fine! Need rest and energy."

...

Holding the girl in his hands, he makes his way towards a room while his servant stands rooted to ground seeing a girl in his brother/chief's hands.

"Bittu! Call our family doctor immediately!"

...

"What's your name?"

"A...Anjali!"

"Hmmm" turning the page of the magazine he is reading "Where are you from? Where should I leave you?"

"I... An orphan!" and her hands started to tremble recalling those unlucky days.

...

Hearing the cry of the baby, she ran out of he kitchen and made her way towards the room.

With each approching step, the cry got louder and louder.

Opening the door, she stepped in to see a new lady in her late twenties, with a cute baby on her lap with a baby bottle in her right hand.

...

"Where is Ayan?" he ask her as he settles on the sofa.

"He stayed with Anjali ji, Chief."

"And what you are doing then?" he asked loosening his tie.

- Maithili

(Please no quote, only replies! Sorry for not sending PMs)

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Maithu congrats on the new story.

Interesting start.

Continue soon.

Waiting for the update.

In advance thanks for the PM

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for the new story,
Nice sneak-peak,
waiting for the story to unfold,
continue soon

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice SP maithu..

Waiting for the update..

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

congratulations for new story
interesting sneakpeak

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

congo for the new story..
great start.. the sneak peak

seemed merge..
not sure.. though..
will wait for the reAl update..
thankyou

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5522

@5522

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice sneak peak
Seem that it is merged
So waiting for real story to unfold
But where is my Madhu and who is this Anjali???
So Anjali is a orphan so sad but a girl of late 20s with a baby is it Madhu???its just my weired guessing since I couldn't see my madhu's name in this so I just guessed
So by now there is chief ie my rk then Bittuji then anjali(whoever she is I don't want her near rk if she is not Madhu even though she is a orphan or whatever she is because Iam very possessive about my Rishbala ) 😊 and then a baby( ok so who is this baby)
Oh so there is many questions that only you can answer by your updates
So 1st teaser was awesome waiting for more trailors 😃
Continue fast

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Maithu congrats on the new story.
Interesting start.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the update.
In advance thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you find it interesting!

Hope the story too will be like this!

Thanks a lot!