RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

unres..

Superb update dear !!
loved it..
the equations is solved now..
madhu is anjali..
and guess.. something drastic had happened..
she is still In grip of her nightmareish facts..
oh.. darn ! rk got to know of it.. but full things is yet to revealed..

awesome.. loved it..
thanks for Pm maithu !!!

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you loved it!
Yup a small equation is solved! A lot more to come! LOL
For sure he is going to be demanding to know full truth!
So let's see what happens!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan
Superb update dear. Wow anjali was madhu and now rk finds the truth and what will happen?. Eagerly waiting for the next part dear...

Thank you buddy!
What will happen next! Get explanation I thing as he got to know she lied on his face again!
Updating soon dear!
Thank you once again!
Keep on reading!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: karamjeet
Interesting update s...
totally loved it all..
looking forward for next part...

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you loved it!
Will update soon!
See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#164

Hello!

Sorry for the late update!
As said earlier, I was a bit busy and I'm still but with the small effort I could, I wrote the next part.
Hope you all like!
You might be needing eggs and tomatoes in the end!
So be prepared ;-)

Link to the previous part: Part 4

Happy reading!

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Part 5

*** What am I going to do now? ***

Getting fully awake, she not only by her nightmare but also thanks to his presence.

- Can she be? No! I thought! -

His thoughts were all bit and pieces as her name rolled in his tongue making her freeze in her spot, conforming her of him knowing everything!

*** What all did I say?
Oh god! Please help me!
He will think I lied again while I didn't lied again but it's the half the lie I told in 1st place. ***

"Who are you?" he asked finding his voice.
"Huh?" her eyes searching something to hold on.
"I heard everything Miss. Madhu!"

And her head hung low as tears treated to get out.
"Answer me! Who are you?" he enquired
With tear brimming eyes, she choked her name "Madhubala Malik"

- She is the one. I need to confirm it!
If she is then why was she running like a mad, in that state, no food?
Who could have kidnapped her? -

"I want to know everything! No more lies!" making himself strong, he demanded her.

"I was in London when my life changed without my knowledge." with tears sliding from her eyes, she turned her back to him as she neared the window as her past came in front of her.

***** HER PAST *****

"Ahaan Mommy! Everything is ready for my first day internship!"
"Oh my dear Padmini! I'm here in London since 5 years and you are treating me as a small kid of 5 years!" Putting her free hand on her hips "And moreover, you and Mister Malik has sent a body guard with me! So no tension please!" turned to her left as she heard footstep halting and lifting her head, her eyes met her body guard, her caretaker, her well-wisher, her Mausi(Aunt) that's what she call her. Standing there, smiling at this young girl calling their parents' names as if they are her kids and she is their mother.
"Don't worry my dear young Padmini, I will call you with due respect as Mataji in front of your Son-in-law! Ohay?" marching towards her mausi "I will talk later! If you want to chit chat, talk with your dearie Roma! See you! Love you!" kissing on the phone, she handed the phone to her mausi, along with a peek on the cheek before running from there, taking her bag.

~~~~~

"Malik! Tell your wife to behave! Else I will not talk with her!" folding her hands over her chest, facing her lappy as on the other side, a couple was sitting with man smiling widely at his daughter whereas his wife, turned to the side, making faces.
"You two are behaving like kids!"
"I'm not!" he hear from lappy and from his wife at the same time, making him laugh.
"Hate you Malik!" Madhu
"Love you my dear!" her father
"Ask your wife to stop searching a way to send me out of home! Else I will cancel my next month flight ticket!"
"Ok Ok Cool down! I will talk with her. Last time we saw you was when you started working after finishing you internship! That too 7 months back! So you need to come here!" her father with affection visible in eyes and voice.
"He is a good match for her! Instead of supporting me, your wife, you are"
"I know what I'm doing!" Malik cut in, assuring his wife.
"Mister Malik ! Do your romance out of this camera!" making her mother shy while his father was shaking his head "I'm going to sleep! See you!"
"See you!" both her parents
"And don't forget Mr. & Mrs. Malik that whoever that man is, if I see him step in our home in the name of marrying me, I will cut his throat there itself!" winking at her gaping parents, she cut the call to see an amused mausi there.

"You are still behaving like a teenager! Poor son-in-law!" Roma.
Getting out of her bed "Oh oh! Why are you all bent on to send me to that stranger's house?" hugging her.
"He is a good boy your parents told. And moreover he is your father's"
"Nope! No more words" closing her mausi's mouth "I don't want to hear anything about him!" removing her hand "I want to stay with you all for few more months and years and then let's see!"
"But dear"
"Please No!" closing her ears, she went back to her bed "Time to sleep!" pulling the quilt over her, she closed the outer world contact "Don't smile!" she said in a warning tone at her smiling mausi as she herself was smiling for an unknown reason.

~~~~~

"Hello!"
"How are you dear?"
"Uncle!" closing her work post, getting up "I'm good uncle! How are you? Why is your voice so low?"
Adjusting his voice "Nothing dear! It's just you need to come immediately to India. I have got our private jet ready! Your superior is aware of your need here, so all you need to do is"
"Uncle!" She cut in "What happened uncle?"
"Nothing dear!" taking a break "Your Roma mausi is needed to go to her son's place in Dubai. So she has already left after transferring your needed things to our jet."
"Oh" is all she could say.

*** Why didn't she even give me a call?
Might be really urgent.
Hope all is good with her! ***

"And! You need to get out of your work now, so that you can be here on time!"
"But uncle, Dad and Mom"
"You will see them here!"
"But"
BEEP BEEP BEEP

*** Why this sudden changing? I have 2 more weeks! Dad! ***

Entering her father's name on her phone and pressing the call button, all she got is phone switched off message and the same repeated on her mother's number.
Redialing her uncle's number, she got the call to be engaged before her network got low, point by point.

*** I need to go! May be something No NO Need to think positive and positive only. ***

~~~~~

"Where are Mom and Dad, uncle?" she asked restlessly for n-th time since she got out of her private jet.
"Please wait Madhu!" is all she got in reply since then.

As they approached her gigantesque mansion, her eyes scanned all around her to find lot of people with sadness visible in their eyes.

*** Something! God! Please say something! Say all is good! ***

As the car stopped, she hurriedly got out of the car and ran to the entrance of her home to see her happy family to be bundled in white sheets.
All her hopes got crushed as she slid holding the main door to the ground as her uncle saw her helplessly when a young man approached him.

*******

Thank you so much buddies!
Do you think you all need the prepared eggs and tomatoes to launch on me or not?
Let me know it through your COMMENTS and if you liked it, hit the LIKE button!
Sorry for the short update and making you all hang on there with her past.
It will finish in the next part soon.

Next part on: Part 6

Thank you!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#165

OMG

Sad update but it will show us her past and why she is scared all the time

but who is the young man they were talking about

is he RK?

Edited by Hend_Refai - 7 years ago

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5522

@5522

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Posted: 7 years ago

#166

It was a sad update

Madhu was a very chirpy and bubbly girl

Is the young man who padmini want to select as her son in law is it rk?

Waiting for her complete past

Thanks for pm

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 7 years ago

#167

Maithu emotional update.

Madhu and her parents bond is so sweet and adorable.

Malik's are no more.

Who is that young man.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

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Posted: 7 years ago

#168

Very emotional update.

Loved Madhu n her parents bond..

But d end was heart breaking..

Who is that young man..

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for d pm:)

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

me first..
res !

unress..
thats a very teary update..
teary cause of the end part..
u brought tears to my eyes..!
madhu is being reffered here..
she had a happily family..
she was herself very lovely & happy go lucky girl..
but the last scenes was too horrid..
seeing the white sheets !
@and a young man approached her uncle too..
guessing who it can be...😳

thanks fr pm maithu !