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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Very emotional update.
Loved Madhu n her parents bond..
But d end was heart breaking..
Who is that young man..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

Glad you loved the bonding of Madhu with her parents.

It's fate that this Madhu lost her parents.

Young man? Next part ;-)

Thank you dear for reading!

Continue reading!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

unress..
thats a very teary update..
teary cause of the end part..
u brought tears to my eyes..!
madhu is being reffered here..
she had a happily family..
she was herself very lovely & happy go lucky girl..
but the last scenes was too horrid..
seeing the white sheets !
@and a young man approached her uncle too..
guessing who it can be...😳

thanks fr pm maithu !

I agree dear!

It's really sad that she is not being herself anymore!

Oh my dear, you got attached to her! All the happy parts will be there soon.

Well the young man will be present in the next part!

So let's see then who he is! ;-)

Thanks a lot for reading and liking!

Keep on reading!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Superb update
Eagerly waiting for next update

Thank you so much dear!

Will update on time! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: harini_
Awesome update,
Madhu was a happy girl,
loved her bonding with her parents and Roma,
whom padmini selected as her son-in-law,is he Rk,
last part is so sad felt bad for Madhu she lost her parents,
who is that young man,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much buddy!

Yeah dear! The happy go lucky girl is now the sad and sorrow filled one!

All your queries have answers in the upcoming parts!

Stay tuned!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Superb update

Thank you 😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: aishu007
Nice update maithu.. Painful too..
Madhu told rk about her identity.. Does he know who is she..??

What happened to madhu's parents.. How did they die..??
Who kidnapped her..??
Lot of questions..

Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you dear!

He knows her or not, it will be known when he opens his mouth.

Well all your questions have answers in less than 2-3 updates!

Hope you can wait until then!

Thank you once again!

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 6 years ago

#187

Nice and emotional update

So finally Decided to let him Know her past

Her Bonding with her family was so cute

And they were arranging her Marriage

Is the groom rk?

I wish it was him

And omg...that's really sorrowful for her to see her family dead and to be an orphan

Waiting to know how she got into the grasp if her captivators

Please update soon

Thanks for pm

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Nice and emotional update
So finally Decided to let him Know her past
Her Bonding with her family was so cute
And they were arranging her Marriage
Is the groom rk?
I wish it was him
And omg...that's really sorrowful for her to see her family dead and to be an orphan
Waiting to know how she got into the grasp if her captivators
Please update soon
Thanks for pm

Hey dear!
Thank you so much for this lovely comment!
Yeah! Finally he is going to know her past!
Glad you liked her bonding with her family!
Well you will know the rest of her past in few minutes!
See you soon!
Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 6 years ago

#189

Hello buddies!

Here is the next part!
You will have replies to few of your questions and you can get even more questions than before after reading this.
So I let you choose comments or tomatoes at the end then! ;-)

Link to the previous part: Part 5

Happy reading!

*******

Part 6

***** HER PAST CONTINUES *****

"Dad!" getting Madhu's uncle's attention, the young man continued what he came to say "Police are here to enquire!"
"Hmm" turning towards his son "I'm coming!"
Nodding his head he left from there as the old man neared Madhu and went on his knees.
Putting his hand on her head "Dear! Please try to be strong."
She raised her sorrowful eyes with brimming tears "Maaa Paaa" are the words she repeated again and again as she cleared her eyes with tears of losing her parents.

*** Dad! Mom! Why did you leave your lovely daughter alone in this world? Why did you leave your Madhu? She needs you! You both! Why did you send me to study in aboard? I would have stayed here with you and now you both would have been with me! We three would have been as happy as always! Why did you leave me? ***

Her question filled thought and sorrow filled heart stopped her own pity as she spotted 2 police officers leave the place.
Brushing the unwanted thoughts as she thought to ask her uncle later, she got up and went towards her parents to learn that she can't even see their faces, as she fall on the floor, near her parents bodies as tears started their work.

~~~~~

"Madhu dear! At least drink this milk! You need to be strong now! You need to be able to get along with what is presenting in front of you!"
Wiping her tears, she lifted her head from the pillow over her lap.
This is where she is since her parents got buried.
Alone! In the dark space!

"Police!" she said as she gained her composure.
"Police?" her uncle questioned.
"This morning! I saw them!" she said slowly in her low voice.
"Oh!" turning and putting the glass on the side table, he again faced her "They came to confirm us that the car brake failed and that the lorry which entered the car is on a not existing person. They couldn't catch the driver but the found half empty alcohol bottle in his place."
Her tears started to flow as soon as she started to imagine the scene.

*** Why is this world so cruel?
My parents didn't do any wrong to anyone!
Do you really exist god? Do you? ***

"No dear! Be strong!" he said patting her "Everything will be fine!" taking the glass and passing it to her "Drink this and take rest!" he said as he got up and left.

~~~~~

That night, she fell asleep rewinding her beautiful past.
As the time strike around 1 and as the sleep got replaced by thirst, she stirred in her sleep and got up to take water.

Getting up from her bed as no water was there in the bottle by her side table, she excited her room.

"But Papa, what if"
"Nothing will happen!" hearing the voice covered with alcohol through the tinny window on the side of the room she passed, her steps halted with her ear going more attentively after hearing her parents name "If only Padmini accepted to convince that Malik to get her daughter married to you!"
"Papa! What was the need to do that? I could have talked to Cha"

*** What are they talking about?
What did uncle wanted to do with me?
Why me marrying Sultan?
What did Mom and Dad say? ***

Her head exploded with questions as she felt a bit dizzy, so held the flower vase stand by her side.

"No Sultan!" a small break "When she comes to India, they were planning to make her meet that guy! He will also be back from his America project at that time."

*** What am I doing listening to uncle's conversation?
Should I?
May be I can know my parents last wish and do what they wanted to do! ***

"What does he has that I didn't Dad?" Sultan questioned.
A laugh echoed in the room "Now he has nothing! That"

***** PRESENT *****

With the loud cry of the small kid in the room, Madhu came out of her past as she hurried her steps towards Ayan.
Taking in her hands, she settled on the bed, with his milk bottle that she kept in the bottle heating machine and started to cocoon her while the man who was listening to her story went back to his past.

***** HIS PAST *****

"Yeah Dad! Meeting finished and deal completed!" he announced over the conference call.
"Good job my son! I sometimes feel like you are my elder son and not your brother Mukund!" giving a look to his elder son Mukund who is widely smiling at him as Rishab shook his head as a pleasant smile crossed his lips.
"Dad! I will be coming to India next week as I have to attend my friend, Jake's wedding here."
"One more week! We wanted to discuss to you about our new collaboration with CB Group of companies!"
And Mukund coughed glancing at his father with a 'I know everything!' look.

"Dad! Bro is there naa! You can manage!"
"Okay son! Enjoy your one week! Then you have to be here on time as you have a surprise for you!"
"Haan bro! Malik"
"You come first! We will talk later!" his father cut his brother's word.

- What is going on there?
What does Malik uncle have to do with it?
He is real a good man. Met him only once as I was staying aboard and doing projects outside of India.
But that one meeting with him was so fruitful.
And what surprise Dad is talking about?
Anyways! There is one whole week to enjoy!
Then I can know! -

"Ok Dad! Okay bro! See you!"

~~~~~

"Yeah Maa! Packed bags and everything!"
"Okay my Sweety!"
"Maa! How many time need I to remind you that I'm grown up now and Sweety makes me feel like a girl." Rishab said making a face.
"Grown up but don't want to marry! Responsible but not ready to take responsibilities. Hard working but only when it comes to business! You are something my Sweety!" a lady voice.
"Oh no bhabi(sister-in-law)! You are my friend first then dil of that house!"
"Nope! I'm first this beautiful family's daughter and then your friend Trishna!" she smiled.

"Okay son! We need to leave now! We are going to meet Malik bhai(brother) and Padmini behen(sister)!"
"Okay Maa! Carry on! I will be landing tomorrow by this time."
"Okay Sweety!" his mother.
"Okay dear brother-in-law! Come soon! A lot to talk and Ayan is also missing you!"
"By the way where is Ayan?" he questioned.
"He is sleeping and having fever, so Deepali is taking care of him. We will be back soon, so no worries!"
"You also going?" he question Trishna.
"Ahaan woh hmm"
"Padmini bhen wanted to have a family dinner, so we are all going. If you were here, you would also join us!" his mother filled him with information.
"Shall we go?" he heard his father's voice.
"Ahaan we are coming!" his mother replied "Okay Sweety! Bye!"
"See you Maa!"
"See you!" his SIL.

- How I wish to be there now? -

He thought as he cut the call, picking his bag, he quit his flat to reach airport.

***** PRESENT *****

"He slept!" she said putting the young little boy in his place and at the same time bringing the man out of his old place, old thoughts even before he could come up to the saddest part of his life.

Clearing his throat "Who was the person you were going to marry?"
"I don't know!"
"Didn't you hear any name from them?"
"Hmmhmm" she shook her head.
"Then what did you hear?"
"That..that.." her hands giving massage to each other, her face sweating.
"That?"
"They killed them!" falling on the floor as tears broke the barriers "They killed all of them!" pulling her legs together, hiding her faces "They killed my parents!" in between her sobs "They killed his parents!" and her cries hid her words "They killed his family too!" making him alert on her words.
"When did it happen?" he asked.
She was in her own world of sorrows so he repeated his question until he got to know what he wanted.

The date when his life changed.
The date where all went out of reach.
The date which changed his world and words.

Her words changed his demur.
Her words changed his view.
Her words are changing his life.

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Thank you buddies for reading!
Let me have your COMMENTS and hit the LIKE if this part deserves it!
Thank you!
Well I will update the next part by the end of this week!
See you all soon!

Next part : Part 7

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 6 years ago

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