RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63)

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan
I read all the parts but i couldn't give separate comment for each part dear. I am really sorry for being so late...It was an awesome love story dear. From madhu's past rk findout that their parents chooses madhu for him so he wanted to marry madhu and also to punish the criminals. Rishbala's love scenes are awesome dear and i liked ayan very much. He is so cute and the little family was so loving. At last the end roma was died but she killed that criminal. Sultan also died in a car accident. Finally rishbala and their cute baby ayan lived happily. The ending was superb dear...

Heee

Thank you for all the likes and taking your time to complete this story

And no pbm if you couldn't comment each part seperately

So happy that you enjoyed the story

and liked their cute moment alongside Ayan

Thank you so much once again dear🤗

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#462

Hello!

Well!

I didn't think about doing an epilogue for this one but as I started to write the epilogue of Orenda last week, my evil mind said : Why to write two stories when you mingle everything in one!

Then I asked myself how come a student-teacher story mingled with a business profile story?

And there I got the answer that even in Zarir, our hero was teaching and guiding his love, his wife and she in her turn will guide and teach others. So there I got the idea of making it one!

Hope you all like it!

Here is the link : Epilogue - Jackpot

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago