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Aiswarya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#241

Nice update maithu..

Rk proposed her..

I think there is some reason behind that..

Will she accept it..??

Waiting for the next update..

Update soon..

Thanks for the pm..

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: ananya2010
No beating around the bush by RK he directly proposed her, Madhu is still shocked.
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Waiting to know what will be Madhu's decision.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Hehehe That's this RK style. Lol

Going directly for what he wants without giving any information.

Thank you dear for reading and liking.

Glad u loved this part.

See u soon with the next part.

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg
lovely but very small update waiting for next

Thank you for reading and liking it!

Just wanted to update it a little big, so cut it in 2 parts.

So the next part will be also around or more longer than this.

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Superb but short update
Pls update fast eager to know madhu answer

Thank you for reading dear.

Happy that u find this superb.

With an earlier update, hope the next part looks a bit longer ;-)

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai
Wow
Wonderful update but small one

He proposed her
will he tell her that he is the one her parents choose for her?

Thank you so much buddy!

Next part will be a bit longer.

He just went direct to the point hehehe

For sure she will know that he is tge person her parenta choose but when I don't know

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Rishabh asked hercthe question but has not introduced himself.
How will Madhu react?

Her reaction will be in the next part.

And RK just didn' beat around the bushes. We r getting to see RK now only LOL

Thanks for reading!

Hope u like the next part.

Keep on reading.

See u soon.

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

Thank you dear!

Glad you loved it!

Hope u like the upcoming parts too.

Will be back soon with a new part.

:-)

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: aishu007
Nice update maithu..
Rk proposed her..

I think there is some reason behind that..
Will she accept it..??

Waiting for the next update..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you so much buddy!

Happy that you find it nice!

Yup yaar! He directly proposed.

We will know about the reason he has if he has one soon.

Let's see her turmoil in the next part lol

Will update soon! Thanks once again dear!

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Superb update

Thank you dear!

:-)

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Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago

#250

Hello!

Here is the 2nd part as promised here!
Link to the previous part: Part 8A

Happy reading!

*****

Part 8B

*** Did I heard it clearly? ***

- Did I ask something wrong? -

Looking at him with her big orbs, she realized that she doesn't hate him but respect him.

*** How can he ask this?
Is he pitying me?
Is he doing this for some other reasons?
What if I don't accept?
Will he ask me to get out of here?
Ayan? ***

- Why thinking so much?
Is she feeling I'm asking this for profit?
Is she thinking I doing this for her belongings?
What if she doesn't accept?
Will she stay here now or will go out of here?
And Ayan? -

"Take two days' time! We will talk then!" he said feeling she needed time.

*** Two days?
Will it be enough?
He didn't say why and what made him ask me for marriage!
Should I ask? ***

"But!"
"Where is Ayan?"
Hearing Ayan, her concentration went from his proposal to his question "In room sleeping!"
"I will take him with me tonight!"

*** Is he showing me what will happen if I don't accept? ***

- She will be free to think about the marriage now! -

"He might wake up in the middle of the night." she said as he got up.
Smiling at her "I can take care of him for tonight!"

*** He is for sure taking care to make me feel the loneliness again without Ayan.
What is the need to take him away from me?
He needs to understand! ***

Getting up from her place "He is already sleeping!"
"Don't worry!" and he left from there without glancing at her.

*** He is so stubborn! ***

- Hope she says yes so I can get hands on those bas***ds! -

Tossing and turning on her bed, she felt void without Ayan, her only companion since months by her side.

"Why does he need to take Ayan?" getting up and sitting.
Taking the water bottle from her side table "I thought him to be a good person but now, I feel like seeing someone else! Not even giving me a reason! I'm sure, he is not proposing me out of love! What else can it be? If only I was the old Madhu, he would have been dead by now!" taking a sip "Poor Ayan! He has got a papa like him!" putting back the bottle. And getting back under the quilt "What are the consequences I will face if I say no?"

He on the other side, went to think on of the consequences of his question.
- She might want to get out of the house! -

"He might ask me to get out!"

- She might call me all bad words! -

"He might think I'm head weighted!"

- She might not consider Ayan! -

"He might not think about Ayan!"

Turning on her left "What can be the consequences if I accept?"

- I will have one more person to take care of! -

"He might feel I accepted for his money!"

- She will be helpful for my plan! -

"He will even not consider about my family!"

Turning on her right.

"What can be the reason he is asking?"

- To give you what you deserve and fulfil our parents' wish! -

"I can't see anything! Why can't he tell with words?"

- Hope she agrees! -

And he drifted to sleep while she tried all her best to sleep until tiredness overtook her.

And the events of the next day, made her feel more and more uncomfortable around him.

In the morning when he wanted to take Ayan from her, his hand accidently touched her hand, making her feel things she haven't felt before. Even not when it happened previously.

In evening, when he asked her to let Ayan with him, Ayan made the effort to go with his "Maaa", that's how he calls her.
And there Rishab made her heart skip a beat by his comment "Ask your Maa to be your Maa forever."
And as a reply, Ayan giggled "Maaa" singing along with it, making her to get out of his room immediately.

And the second day arrived as he expected but no reactions from her left anything to him.

- Should I ask her or let herself talk to me? -

Finishing his breakfast, he got and left for work.

- Let her come and talk herself! -

Was all he could think as he exited the mansion?

*** Why didn't he ask anything?
May be forgot?
No way! ***

As the evening came, and Rishab came back from work.
She made her way towards his room along with Ayan.

Getting the permission to enter, she got in to find in his sports pant and sleeveless tee-shirt.

"Yes?"
"Ayan wanted to say to his Papa that his Maa is ready to stay here for him and not for anything else." she said.

*****

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Next part: Part 9

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- Maithili

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