RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63) - Page 25

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update.

Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

Thank you dear!
Glad you loved it!
Hope u like the upcoming parts too.
Will be back soon with a new part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice update maithu..

Rk proposed her..

I think there is some reason behind that..
Will she accept it..??

Waiting for the next update..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you so much buddy!
Happy that you find it nice!
Yup yaar! He directly proposed.

We will know about the reason he has if he has one soon.
Let's see her turmoil in the next part lol
Will update soon! Thanks once again dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!

Here is the 2nd part as promised here!
Link to the previous part:
Part 8A

Happy reading!

*****

Part 8B

*** Did I heard it clearly? ***

- Did I ask something wrong? -

Looking at him with her big orbs, she realized that she doesn't hate him but respect him.

*** How can he ask this?
Is he pitying me?
Is he doing this for some other reasons?
What if I don't accept?
Will he ask me to get out of here?
Ayan? ***

- Why thinking so much?
Is she feeling I'm asking this for profit?
Is she thinking I doing this for her belongings?
What if she doesn't accept?
Will she stay here now or will go out of here?
And Ayan? -

"Take two days' time! We will talk then!" he said feeling she needed time.

*** Two days?
Will it be enough?
He didn't say why and what made him ask me for marriage!
Should I ask? ***

"But!"
"Where is Ayan?"
Hearing Ayan, her concentration went from his proposal to his question "In room sleeping!"
"I will take him with me tonight!"

*** Is he showing me what will happen if I don't accept? ***

- She will be free to think about the marriage now! -

"He might wake up in the middle of the night." she said as he got up.
Smiling at her "I can take care of him for tonight!"

*** He is for sure taking care to make me feel the loneliness again without Ayan.
What is the need to take him away from me?
He needs to understand! ***

Getting up from her place "He is already sleeping!"
"Don't worry!" and he left from there without glancing at her.

*** He is so stubborn! ***

- Hope she says yes so I can get hands on those bas***ds! -

Tossing and turning on her bed, she felt void without Ayan, her only companion since months by her side.

"Why does he need to take Ayan?" getting up and sitting.
Taking the water bottle from her side table "I thought him to be a good person but now, I feel like seeing someone else! Not even giving me a reason! I'm sure, he is not proposing me out of love! What else can it be? If only I was the old Madhu, he would have been dead by now!" taking a sip "Poor Ayan! He has got a papa like him!" putting back the bottle. And getting back under the quilt "What are the consequences I will face if I say no?"

He on the other side, went to think on of the consequences of his question.
- She might want to get out of the house! -

"He might ask me to get out!"

- She might call me all bad words! -

"He might think I'm head weighted!"

- She might not consider Ayan! -

"He might not think about Ayan!"

Turning on her left "What can be the consequences if I accept?"

- I will have one more person to take care of! -

"He might feel I accepted for his money!"

- She will be helpful for my plan! -

"He will even not consider about my family!"

Turning on her right.

"What can be the reason he is asking?"

- To give you what you deserve and fulfil our parents' wish! -

"I can't see anything! Why can't he tell with words?"

- Hope she agrees! -

And he drifted to sleep while she tried all her best to sleep until tiredness overtook her.

And the events of the next day, made her feel more and more uncomfortable around him.

In the morning when he wanted to take Ayan from her, his hand accidently touched her hand, making her feel things she haven't felt before. Even not when it happened previously.

In evening, when he asked her to let Ayan with him, Ayan made the effort to go with his "Maaa", that's how he calls her.
And there Rishab made her heart skip a beat by his comment "Ask your Maa to be your Maa forever."
And as a reply, Ayan giggled "Maaa" singing along with it, making her to get out of his room immediately.

And the second day arrived as he expected but no reactions from her left anything to him.

- Should I ask her or let herself talk to me? -

Finishing his breakfast, he got and left for work.

- Let her come and talk herself! -

Was all he could think as he exited the mansion?

*** Why didn't he ask anything?
May be forgot?
No way! ***

As the evening came, and Rishab came back from work.
She made her way towards his room along with Ayan.

Getting the permission to enter, she got in to find in his sports pant and sleeveless tee-shirt.

"Yes?"
"Ayan wanted to say to his Papa that his Maa is ready to stay here for him and not for anything else." she said.

*****

Thanks for reading!
How was it?
Hope it wasn't boring!
Let me know your thoughts through LIKE and COMMENT!
Thank you!

Next part: Part 9

See you!

- Maithili


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Posted: 7 years ago
does that mean she accepted his proposal?
Edited by Hend_Refai - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update maithu...
Their thoughts part was funny... Both have opposite thoughts..lol..

Rk want to punish the culprits behind their parents death & also want to give madhu a happy life.. That's why he proposed her..
She accepted at last..

Waiting for the next part..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey awesome update..read both parts..
So rk proposed madhu coz she is the girl his parents chosen for him..
And madhu also agreed waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 8A
Nice update
They hide from each other to avoid the awkwardness
I like rks frankness...direct shot...great rk
Going to read 8,B
thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 8B
Awesome update
I like Thier trail of thoughts
It's awesome
And both are worried for ayaan
At last she said yes...
Please update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Their trail of thoughts both are different in thinking except for Ayaan
Hope they get to know that they were supposed to get married to each other
Madhu accepted the proposal.
Thanks for the PM dear

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