RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63)

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Finally they got married..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved it!

Yup yaar! Finally it happened!

On monday for sure! The next part!

See you

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: karamjeet
Mindblowing update...
finally they married...
loved it...
looking forward for next part...

Thank you dear!

Happy you loved it dear!

Me too looking for to write it! ;-)

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: aishu007
Nice update maithu...
Rishbala got married...
When will madhu come to know who is Rishab..?
Waiting for the next part..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thanks buddy!

She will come to know about it soon dear!

Will my best to be on time from now on!

Thank you once again dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Maithu awesome update.
Loved it.
So finally Rishbala are married and how sweetly RK complimented her indirectly.
Loved the bond Madhu shares with Bittuji.
Madhu is confused as to why RK married her.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you so much for the encouraging words dear!

She will come to know the reason in less than 3 parts for sure!

Hope you like the upcoming parts too!

Thank you once again!

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Superb update dear..

loved it..

rishbala got married..

and ayan is cute lil diamond in their life..

i so loved it..

though some questions is still left unanswered..

and the lurking danger is there..

the Revenge's Arrival..

waiting for the blast..

thankyou so much for pm maithu..

i rely on pms mostly..

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Superb update dear..

loved it..

rishbala got married..

and ayan is cute lil diamond in their life..

i so loved it..

though some questions is still left unanswered..

and the lurking danger is there..

the Revenge's Arrival..

waiting for the blast..

thankyou so much for pm maithu..

i rely on pms mostly..

Thank you so much dear for reading an d liking it!
Glad you loved this part!
Yup the diamond is the one who is going to bring them together.
Ask the questions so I can get to you correctly.
See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Hello buddies!

How are you all?
Hope you all like this part with few momentums in it!

Link to the previous part : Part 10

Happy reading!

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Part 11

"I will take care of Ayan tonight!" Her brother told her as they were in kitchen.
"Huh?" he turned to face him.
"I said I will take care of Ayan tonight!"
"But"
"No but and not! If you really take me as your brother, listen to me!"
Not getting what her brother is talking to her, she just nodded her head.

"All set!" she said as she set the table.
"I'm not feeling hungry! You too have dinner!" her brother said as he excused himself right at the moment when Rishab entered the scene.
"Where is he going?" he questioned as he took his seat.
"He is behaving strange since this evening!" she said as she served him.
"Strange?"
"Hmm!" serving herself "Telling me he will take care of Ayan, asking me to serve you, lying he is not hungry when he didn't have anything since the time he came back from temple." she said as she settled herself.

And he started to laugh hearing her tale.

*** Why is he laughing now? ***

"Yo...you di...didn't get!" he asked in between his laugh.

*** What didn't I get?
By the way he looks good when he laugh! ***

- She is really so cute with this not so understanding face. -

"He wanted us to have our own privacy!" he said after his laugh died.
Hearing his comment, her cheeks turned red.

*** What was the need to tell it now! I'm feeling strange being here now! ***

- I thought her being from foreign -

"I'm not feeling hungry!" trying to get up, collecting her plate.
"Hey! Is it because of what I said?"
"No! Not like that!"
"In that case! Finish what you have in your plate!"
"But"
"You have to!"
Putting the plate on the table, folding her hands over her chest "You can't order me beacuse I'm your wife. When I was working for you, it was okay but not now!" she said.
"In that case, the privacy is indeed needed between you and me!"
"Aren't you ashamed to"
"You have your dinner or let's use the privacy we have!"

*** Oh My God! Is he really serious? ***

"You can't talk to me like this?"
"Sooo To whom should I talk like this?"
"No one!"
"How"
"Can you please keep quiet?" she asked as she couldn't talk to him all these things.
"Dinne"
"If you keep quiet!"
He shrugged his shoulders in response and continued to have his dinner, glancing at her time to time.

*** Is it so easy for him to talk like this? ***

- What can she be thinking of me now? -

*** Where will I sleep then if he behaves as he talks? ***

"Lights will be on in our room! Come when you feel like!" he said breaking her out of her thoughtful sphere as he got up to place the plate in the kitchen.

*** Our room? ***

She gulped hearing him.
He laughed internally "See you soon!" and he left from there.

- She is so worked up! -

"You no need to knock the door now!" he said as he put the book he was reading on the side table, to see her changed to a simple saree.
"it has become an habit!"
"Change it then!"

*** He can't again order me! ***

"What if I enter the room when you w" and bit her lip to stop the flow of words that is happening due to her habitual self "Nothing!"
"I see!" he said amused of her act "By the way, do you read books?" he asked wanting to make her comfortable as she was fidgeting with her saree end.
"Hmmm"
"What kind of books?"
"What all seems to interesting!"
"Ahaan!" with a smile "I'm going to continue this book, if you want, you can choose one of your interesting kind of book there!" pointing to the shelves behind the door, making her breath in relief.

*** So! All good! ***

Getting a book of thriller, she checked the room to find a place to settle.
"You can have a place there!" he said pointing at the other end of bed.
"Hmm!"

With their books in hand, and having the awkwardness of sharing the room, they passed more than 1 hour in their respective books before he yawned.
"You sleep if you want!" she told him.
"It's not!"
"Hmmm Can I bring Ayan here?" she asked finally the question she wanted to ask since 1 hour.
"Sure!" he said feeling the awkwardness to reduce between them while she went to get Ayan after replying to 1000s of questions from Bittu.

And the night ended with the newly married couple sharing same bed with Ayan in-between.

And the most awaited day by Rishab came and the evening came even sooner than expected as everyone was busy in their works.
One by one the guests started to appear and as the time Rishab was waiting for came, he got on to the stage that was set outside, in the garden, took the mike and started his speech.

"Hello everyone! Thank you so much for making this event bright with your presence. This party was initially organized for my birthday and the fund event. Now it has one more celebration to add in the list." he turned to his left to find Madhu standing along with Bittu, holding the child "Let me call the special guest of the evening. Mrs. Madhubala Rishab Kundra!" making her gape at him and his guests to talk over the news.
Stilling his eyes on, he motioned Bittu to take the baby from her hand, making her to step on the tiles.

"Here she is!" he said as everyone clapped for the young couple "Sorry for not inviting you all! It all happened suddenly. Thank you for understanding!"
"Wait wait wait!" someone from the crowd came in front, as he got on the stage.
"Happy married life Champ!" he said as he pulled Rishab for a hug.
"Thanks uncle!"
"Happy married life dear!" he wished Madhu as she took his blessing, seeing him to be elder in age, may be around the age of her deceased father.
"He is Uncle Arjun Khanna"
"Family friend!" Mr. Khanna completed "As you didn't invite us for a grand wedding, we would like to witness a memorable moment to be happy. Do you all agree?" he asked turning towards the people as he heard YES to echo in the place "As it is YES from all of us. Why don't you both inaugurate the dance floor with your dance."

*** Dance! With him! In front of everyone! No! ***

"Uncle!" Rishab started as his wife was shaking her head at the old man in front of her "We"
"No excuses! You have to!" Uncle said and everyone clapped to make the couple accept it as Rishab extended his hand for his wife to put hers.

As Rishab took Madhu for the dance floor "Romantic song please!" the uncle said making Madhu's heart to beat faster in anticipation of the future.

*** Please someone help me! ***

"Sorry he said!" as they stood face to face with his right hand taking slowly its place, behind her back while his left hand held her right one "Please!" he said, making her to place her left hand on his shoulder.

As the music begin slowly, the two bodies started to move in sync.

At the same time, two men in their well suited coat entered the mansion and mingled in the party.

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Thank you for reading!
Let me know if there is any mistake in the flow or something as I didn't re-read it!
Leave your COMMENTS and LIKES
See you all soon!

Next part : Part 12

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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