RiKara THREE SHOT- Tera Hone Laga Hoon- SHOT TWO Updated Pg 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So to begin with I have to admit that I have stalked this forum insanely reading every possible story coming from the prolific writers here which has made me fall in love with RiKara even more. Some of my favorites being @Yayni, @WriterGenie, @Sakura, @FayeMia, @Escape & @KashishJ. Being a vivid reader in the company of some spoilt literature brats that I have to live in my routine life, I know the amount of energy and effort any composition can demand from a writer's heart and soul albeit the hectic schedules studies and work. For all the attempts these magicians have made, I want to thank them from the bottom of my heart for making RiKara more authentic and so I present to you a RiKara composition to all the writers of the forum as a token of love.🤗

BACKSTORY

Assuming that Svetlana has landed in jail first of all this whole Kali Thakur crap needs to be dealt with, why not do it in a tellymasala way to satisfy all the TRP aunties, even though they are couch potatoes who love to watch the tasteless chewing gum drama again and again, respect to the elders!

Let's do it this way. Omkara although being angry with Gauri is letting her dwell in her heart which Gauri is least aware about because his kind of love is just self confessed right now, Gauri being Gauri disappears from his life as was their deal but without uttering a word... without taking a penny. Omakara all guilty, frustrated, infuriated decides not to find her. It was their fate, he concludes but with pain in his heart. Okay so Gauri deserves his repentance; let's give it three episodes after she left. *RiKara Fandom planning to organize a party, trying to contact Anika*

But the celebration only after the heroine is found. Where is she? How is she? What is she doing? DHOOMTANANANANANANA DHOOMTANANANANANANA DHOOMTANANANANANANA DHOOMTANANANANANANA ... . *viewers checking their blood pressure levels* One episode dedicated, her voice present in the precap. Very right were the forumwasis assumptions... this chirraiyya had flown back to her cage... BAREILLY, In the next next episode everyone found out but only after watching20 minutes of Kali Thakur's malicious dialougebaazi and dirty dancing! The Friday episode was over but heyy wait Saturday was a MahaEpisode!

Its weekend time & so arguing with the family members, the viewers snatch the TV remotes anxiously wanting to watch the episode... what is going to happen??? THUDUM THUDUM THUDUM THUDUM... there was not a reliable spoiler this week!!! And now begins the Episode while mom is arguing to watch some reality show but who really cares in such an extreme HEART-IN-MOUTH situation. Heyy wait whats going on? serious FHAT THE WUCK!!!

Omkara is again trapped in this painted golden cage... when did he reach Bareilly? What was he doing there? It was not just him, even Rudra was trapped. And this time it was his gigantic pet Anaconda!!! BLAHH!!! The Naagins needed some competition. Tej shared a drink with Kali smiling cunningly and to the thunderstrucking horror that it had become... this time it was Jahnvi who was all chained, trapped, beaten and dragged. Not to forget Priyanka tied over a giant pot of boiling acid. Rudra and Omkara screaming helplessly. Listen up young man, I strike a deal with your father or I take your mom for me and my brother to gorge on, I kill your brother or I take your sister for us. Or should I kill you...and willingly take your wife, Kali offered to Om...

GAURI!!! This bas***d has entrapped her also??? AGAIN! His heart reminded him... he was so wrong rather she was so right, always right. It was his fault... He committed the crime...*viewer sighing relief, finally he knows* KILL ME he accepted. Kali pointing a rifle against Omkara... god knows where is the damn Anaconda??? With a single tear in his eye comes the bullet to rip his chest at a snail's pace, Faster is her shriek ... OMKAARAAA... faces turning towards Gauri, chained even she was... running down the staircase... in a quest to protect him ... SHE TOOK THE BULLET!!! Shivaay and Anika entering with cops.

GAAUURRIII!!! The episode ended...

*sister yelling, I TOLD YOU SO!*

The hospital week next, it was a treat... spoiler in the afternoon episode in the evening. With Gauri being admitted then Omkara begging in front of her Shankarji after which she was in a critical condition for one episode... slipping into coma the very next... Omkara had turned into this roaring lion yelling at her to come to life... HIS LIFE... finally at the end of the Friday episode ... her feeble voice lcalled OM like breathing just to take his name...*Forumwasis sending box of chocolates to all the well wishers across all the forums*

The week that followed had Om apologizing, repenting, being regretfully penitent to his woman after her Almost into death experience. Gauri being Gauri forgives him by the Friday... *NO GAURI NO! Fandom shouts...*

Oh god I am having a good headache after typing all this... I don't know how the story is going to go... this is just my wild imagination, now that we can come to the point... It is about Omkara who is coming back to his original self, to his personality, to his art, to life, to his wife. In this moment, that is what matters. I want RiKara as a happy drenched-in-love couple which can only happen after all mess is cleared, atleast in my head.

PROLOGUE coming up guys!😉

I know I cannot escape your juttis, shoes, sandals or chappals... they are most welcome ... the size is 6 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX
PROLOGUE Pg 1
SHOT ONE Pg 3
Edited by Aparajita2210 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola guys,🤗

To begin with, for the last and final time I want to say that whatever my previous back story update was, it was the absolute clutter in my head because of the unqualified non sense going on in RiKara life... in the name of marriage and family... and that was how I chose to vent out my frustration... I have desperately waited for RiKara to be at ease since the evolution of mankind! But the writers seem to never want them to be happy so when I decide to become the writer... the first thing I wanted to do is clean and clear all the Kali crap ... just wanted to have some peace of mind😆

Chalo ab bohot bakbak ho gayi... lets come to the point... This is the story about one life that Rikara share... Its way ahead from a point when he should seek forgiveness, repent and be remorseful. I have had enough... I really don't want to get into it now.🥱

The heart breaking fact is, the creative team who put their stakes high at RiKara to begin a spin off are the ones wanting us to hate them. I move on to flaunt RiKara the way they deserve... the way we deserve. And so I present to you a piece of my mind... TERA HONE LAGA HOON...

PROLOGUE

A warm, cozy and comfortable morning it was, rather early. His hands threw into duvet... to the wrinkled bed spread and some cushions against his head. Where is she? And now forcefully he opened his eyes but just to beg some mercy from her shankarji. She looked fresh; having bathed with some of her favorite exotic oils... the room was aromatic. With a safety pins pressed against her lips, she struggled with the pleats of her saree, it was not every day that she wore sarees but he liked her that way.

It was now the hook of that backless blouse taking away all her effort. 3 minutes to be precise and then he came to her rescue with a slight touch in her soaked skin she held her breathe. Is this man ever going to realize the kind of effort it takes for me to stand firm? The voice in her mind. You look good, he complimented... her chest was swift and stomach hollow. She leaned against her dressing table trying to get hold of nothing but the mirror and then fell some of her nail paint bottles and even the frame arranged with all her bangles, knowingly... unknowingly when he had gone away to freshen up.

DID I JUST DO THAT AGAIN??? He rumbled when she was changing the bed sheet. It was exactly the moment when he towered her, his palm shifting her hair, fingers touching the nape of her neck, feeling it... caressing it... it was just two nights before that her waistline had succumbed to the rigidity of his hold and now... ARE YOU PLANNING TO STRANGLE HER NECK??? His brain scolded... I AM SORRY he said politely and all she wanted that the earth tore apart to just swallow her. Iced up in that moment... she was not able to utter a word.

Shifting re shifting her focus she was working... quite recklessly. Now even the cushions, the clothes, the paintings... the room... very well knew the condition of her heart. GAURI... he asked buttoning up his shirt... he had had enough, she did not want to look at him... continuing with arranging the book shelf and the fresh flowers she responded... continuously moving around the room stumbling in chairs ... she caught hold of the window.

He did not want to talk, she was not paying attention. The scattered pens and pencils were obviously a priority! It was after a good time cross of five minutes that he caught her Off guard ... opening the window. The wall and him, suddenly caged she was... W-H-A-T-? finally she has mustered the courage to speak... with the breathe taking smile of his... all he wanted to ask... LUNCH AT 1???

UPCOMING JealousRi ; CaringKara

So guys please let me know how did you feel about the beginning with a RiKaralicious morning. Comments eagerly awaited!😳

Every kind of feedback is welcome and this time if you are planning to throw eggs ... get me some bread also😆

Edited by Aparajita2210 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all, loved this name, is it ur original name
And yes v do have an amazing set of writers here, I really began loving rikara thru these stories...


I'm really waiting for ur story, please do pm also when u update

Btw, that story line was just wow...
I was literally laughing very high reading this.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

First of all, loved this name, is it ur original name

And yes v do have an amazing set of writers here, I really began loving rikara thru these stories...


I'm really waiting for ur story, please do pm also when u update

Btw, that story line was just wow...
I was literally laughing very high reading this.



Hi Shradhha, 🤗
Yeah this is my name ... Even I like it a lot...
About the prologue update ... I will do it tommorow morning ... Will PM you for sure ...
The whole three shot is very different than this high voltage current back story... This was just the frustration leveling up in my head ... And about laughing ... Agar tumhara padh ke aisa haal ho raha hai toh socho mera likhte like kya haal ho raha hoga ... It has taken me one extra hour...😆
PS- I am just going and accepting your buddy request!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its seems too hilarious yar...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Its seems too hilarious yar...

😆😆😆 The actual three shot is totally different ... This is just my brain frustrated with previous episodes versus my heart which can never stop chanting RiKara RiKara... Ohh this this the fruit I have to bear 😆... I am glad you enjoyed it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Its seems too hilarious yar...

I love your signature
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a new Rikara story! WOW... but more dhamaakedaar is the back story .. baap re baap... kitna sahi audience connect pakda hai... cvs ki dukhti dukhti rag pe haath rakh diya 🤣
oh my mata this is a nut cracker... every god damn word of it😆 so true in deed...
your shot is not like this😲 just waiting for i know whatever it is it will turn out to be good...
update soon 😉
but i cant seriously believe someone actually wrote this... so accurate🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just wow-- your back story is simply amazing. This exactly the type of story line I have been waiting to see but looks like your FF is what I have to satisfy my brain that's craving for Rikara. Please continue soon. hugs

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