RiKara THREE SHOT- Tera Hone Laga Hoon- SHOT TWO Updated Pg 6

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Thank you @pt311288 and @MyLoveIsMyLife for reading and appreciating the prologue 🤗

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Superb concept
First backstory
And then romance

Omkara is being so caring
Confused with his feelings
Gauri too in the same boat
She is nervous as hell
In Omkara's presence

Awesome precap
Jealous Ri n caring-kara
Will it be Riddhima or Ishana
Whom will they meet at lunch

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM

Thank you Vrinda 🤗 you manged to summarize it perfectly

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: KashishJ
Interesting Prologue , Pari.
Looking forward for next chapter.
About precap -CareKara seems pleasing but jealousKara is more enticing. Do include Jealous Omkaara, would love to see the Khaddoos O to turn green with envy 😉

Thank you Kashish 😳 About this update i had preplanned all of it so no JealousKara here but i will compose something soon in which Omkara ka Jala kata dil is being seasoned with Namak ishq ka 😉

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nandita123
thanks for the pm aparajta.
Just Loving your version of RiKara. the way you describe them is simply amazing. this is soo romantic 😳cant wait to read further. update soon and pm me.
-Nandita ❤️

Thank you Nandita 😃 ... your comment makes me so happy ... this was the reaction i was expecting 😳 ... yeah i am sending you a message 🤗

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awww the prologue was superb yar...after yesterday's episode in the show i really don't have any hope...again he is going to blame her for now leaving...
but your story is too refreshing yar...waiting for the next update

Ayushi 🤗

About bail budhhi Singh Oberoi, let him be 😆 and for the prologue... thank you very much 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Just wow ... The prologue is fantastic 😳...
The Saree scene, The neck rash, the stumbling, the everything ☺️
This is so romantic ...Gauri is so shying away right now ... Om seems upfront ... Let's see what the story is about 😉...
Waiting for the lunch date!

Pooru 🤗 shukriya shukriya ... read on the lunch date 😳

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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Hi Aparajitha!

Just finished reading the hilarious backstory, the prologue and first shot. Really like where you're going with the story and am eager to read more.

The cutting and clearly dominating Gauri was spectacular... hope to see more of her in the future!

Thanks for the shoutout... I'm glad you like my writing enough to put me in the sort of august company you did. 😳

Hope to read more amazing work from you soon!

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Hi Aparajitha!
Just finished reading the hilarious backstory, the prologue and first shot. Really like where you're going with the story and am eager to read more.

The cutting and clearly dominating Gauri was spectacular... hope to see more of her in the future!

Thanks for the shoutout... I'm glad you like my writing enough to put me in the sort of august company you did. 😳

Hope to read more amazing work from you soon!

Hey @writergenie🤗

I am so happy ... You like my work 😃

This is a supposed normal day of RiKara life with realizations and then the hearty rhythm follows... Om having realized only now that his wife can be such a lioness

I don't know if it was a shout out or not ... But you genuinely deserve it 😳

Will try and update the next part tommorow