RiKara THREE SHOT- Tera Hone Laga Hoon- SHOT TWO Updated Pg 6 - Page 5

Originally posted by: manopriya24

Wow pari... that's an amazing update dear...😛

Yeh gauri bhi na yaar she is so sweet and I liked her possessiveness...🥳🥳

Gauri's insecurities and jealousy towards other female kind was hilarious...🤣

Especially the scene that she was peeping in through key hole of tia's room and questioning omkara was my fav one...

Overall an amazing shot dear... try to update the next shot so soon as am waiting for it...😳

Love u dear...🤗🤗

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Superb update

After Riddhima now Tia

Gauri is so funny n cute

That she is 😳

Omkara sure has tough time

With everyone around them

With the kind of husband he is ... That is bound to happen😆

Gauri was jealous of Tia for taking Om's name

She was just meditating 🤣

Gauri thought she was doing black magic

Even her brain is tortured by Indian daily soaps 🤣

Omkara had tough time handling her

She was sad that he thinks she is tiny

Was she praising him or what

I think praising only

You are thinking the right way 😉

God Rudra has awesome timming

Omkara literally hid her 🤣

NOT NOW..poor Rudra

He is the one bearing all the brunt 😆

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

For sure

Originally posted by: magss24

Wow that was an amazing update.. The best part was when gauri feeling if she had to survive on milo or complan 🤣.. It actually reminds me of myself when I drank complan for years to increase my height.. 😆.. So when they are going to kiss waiting for it

Originally posted by: Nandita123

I am in love with your 3 shots. This was just beautiful. You are an amazing writer dear. Everything is just so perfect.Continue the great work.

With love

Nandita

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

What are you girl? Hermoine grenger 😆 such disciplined and dedicated magician ... I love the way you play with your words ... Making all of them seem so easy going ... I loved every bit of it. Right from her checkered shirt waltzing to the kitchen laughter to the mohe rang do laal moment. I loved the way she was just behaving maniacal with all Tia ranting and ohh my my every time he amazes me without fail ... Such die hard romantic but tho controlled ... I loved all his reflexes 😆

And heyy did she say black magic and mosquitoes 😆 Om is having the time of his life 😆 I am so much in love with the Possessive Ri ... You know these CVS should hire you and pay lump some to show case such drunk in love RiKara ... Continue soon ... Eagerly waiting to know how does it feel like to kiss or to not kiss 😳

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it yar...

you have a way of using words...

its a simple story but it's beautiful..