RiKara THREE SHOT- Tera Hone Laga Hoon- SHOT TWO Updated Pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Ohh pari darling...🤗🤗 let me first say the thanks for the pm dear...👍🏼👍🏼
Either ur backstory or to ur prologue or to the 1st shot it was superb and hilarious dear.. 👏👏
Wen am reading ur backstory na I was just keep laughing out loud that my mom and sis gave me an look aise" pagal hogay hain kya".. But I ignored it.. 😃😃
Next while reading ur prologue na I started to roll in my bed due to my uncontrollable laughter which it results to make an crack on my head...😉
And ur 1st shot what to say dear gauri,om and riddhima that results to make us see the side of an over possessive patni roop .. . And her fierce yet protective nature for omkara...
Waiting for ur next shot to see the possessiveRi and caringKara...
Pari keep writing dear... just waiting for ur next pm...😛😛
Sorry for commenting late sweetie...
Love u so much dear...❤️🤗🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Aparajita2210

Thank you Kashish 😳 About this update i had preplanned all of it so no JealousKara here but i will compose something soon in which Omkara ka Jala kata dil is being seasoned with Namak ishq ka 😉


Nice one Pari. Gauri to Sherni nikeli👏
Eagerly waiting for Omkara ka Jala kata dil being seasoned with Namak ishq ka. 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
I knew it
They would meet Riddhima or Ishana

Awww this was so romantic
Love seeing Romantic-kara
Be it breakfast pool or lunch

Gauri handled Riddhima well
Even Omkara was shocked
Got to see new side of Gauri
A jealous-Ri

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
What do you think you are doing girl ??? Making me insane for an ambulance 😆 I am at least going to need limbu and soda after being RiKaraholic this time ...

The breakfast table ... Jug jug jiyo Om puttar ... Bhagwaan tumhaare jaisa pati sabko de ... Teen Golu Molu cute Micro Mini sized RiKara mile tumhe 😉

The pool ... They so much deserved it ... I felt strongly after Shivika spent their romantic moments in the pool. Even Om lives in Oberoi Mansion ... Its good of you that you remember that even he has the pool 😆

I was just imagining the lunch time jab Ridhima ne maari entriyaan ... Om ke dil mein baji khatre ki ghantiyaan

I loved Gauri ... All jealous and attacking ... This is so contrary to the way Gauri recepts ... Omkara needs concept clearance 😆

I loved the way she just fired at Ridhima and the car scene was a perfect icing on the cake ...

This Gauri is simply perfect ... So much in love ... Not admitting it, forget confessing it ... But at the same time she puts up a show like this 🥳

I am looking forward to the RomanticKara .. He must be busy planning the Date night Hugh 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb enjoyed reading it
Edited by magss24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its a fantastic one...so nice to read another angle on rikara...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Hi guys 🤗

I am not able to reply to comments because IndiaForums is calling me a spammer, will try and reply soon.😆

Having a terrible internet connection ... will not be able to send messages .

Update hai laayi re Pari

SHOT TWO


Aakhon Se Chhu Loon ... Ke Baahein Tarasti Hain

Dil Ne Pukara Hain Haan

Ab Toh Chalein Aao ...

It was a breezy evening ... the day was happy, she realized while rubbing her eyes after she had just inclined into the head rest of her bed wanting her "5minutes more of sleep. She had rested the whole afternoon and right now ... he was not here, she very well knew ... No humming of Songs, No ruffled papers, No smell of fresh paint ... genuinely not him but it was his warmth that made her contented, tucked in between the sheets with the perfect air conditioning temperature... but what was she doing in the room ??? She recalls dozing off on the sofa ... Omkara obviously her brain knocked ... but why was she wearing his shirt???

Your clothes are too complicated for me Gauri!!! Buttons here, zip there ... fitting to be adjusted almost everywhere... Omkara had exaggerated looking at her apparel once ... And now she hid half her face ... in her palm reminiscing the good old memory standing in front of the mirror. Dear husband needs some tutoring with the fitting of your dresses Gauri! Her brain reminded ... he can very well help himself, chuckled her heart as she embraced herself engulfing the traces of Old spice.

It was actually not the first time, he often made her change into his shirt ... every time herself not being able to be familiar with how aptly he does it. It had had to be the TiredRi like that of today, The UnwellRi of last week or the most extreme case ... The Accidently DrunkRi ... his touch always being so mind-controlled and compliant that she was never able to comprehend it. Looking at the big red and black checkered shirt which had become a dress for her ... she could not help complimenting herself ... You absolutely look better Mrs. ... trying to mimic Om's mannerisms.

Why did you change??? it felt nice Om grumbled as Gauri was beating eggs for the cookie dough on the kitchen counter. Oh my Darling Om, I will never mind wearing your clothes to put up a show waltzing around the mansion but that has to be just for you... not for the housekeeping staff, the gardening staff or Khannaji ... I don't want them to feel nice. Gauri spoke in a jiffy. Taken a little aback by her such common sense and sensibility... he acknowledged ... she was so right.

Having said that Gauri was constantly praying to Shankarji that Om does not try and confine her into his romantic flavors this time ... she wanted to concentrate only on one flavor ... ALMONDS!!! Those too only of the cookie dough blend. He came to enclose her, his palms tracing her body line but this time just to tickle the wits out of that petite form.. Her bones being besieged in a different manner altogether this time, she gave up bursting her heart out into the jovial laughter and in no time he was swaying her in his arms around the kitchen. Such laughter was happiness for him. He knew Ridhima must have been really stressful for her and so this was the remedy. What do you want Omakara? She tried to speak huffing air when her tummy started aching. CHAI! He made himself obvious...

She stepped into his studio with his all-time-favorite cup of Glucose biscuit infused tea but he seemed nowhere in sight. What caught her attention was this new painting of his ... he had just started she could tell ... the plain red paint still damp ... she was trying to decipher of what he was doing this time when his red acrylic smeared hands were happy to make a canvas out of her. With the fingers doing it right painting over his favorite beauty spot from the shoulder to reach the carving of her chest and his left hand tracing down her left arm for their fingers to interweave ... her defeated self found solace in his firm posture ... her senses vanishing in those emotions ... she vulnerably smiled. This was the OMKARA EFFECT. Her breathe choked a lump in her throat when he finally desired ... I need more of such ideas from you Gauri ...

As the day approached towards its end and moonlight illuminated the sky ... Om was happy ... This day had been exquisitely good for him ... With Shivaay not being there, there was no fuming in the name of Anika, With Rudra not being there, there were no silly jokes ... Pinky was not shouting crap for the so called sake of her son, Jahnvi was happy ... the place felt more peaceful ... Omkara had just finished an important project way before its deadline and today he was able to see an absolutely different side of his wife ... What else could he have asked for?

But wait! What is Gauri trying to do in front of Tia's room? If she wants to talk .. she can simply go and talk ! Why is she peeping through the key hole. What's on her mind? What do you think you are doing Gauri.. MadKara mumbled at her ... she tried to shhh him but he was dragging her back to their room.

Why was she chanting your name ??? she cross questioned his raised brow ... how many times do I need to tell you that OM cannot be a proper noun in this world and I cannot copyright it. For heaven's sake Gauri she was meditating, Om argued as the atmosphere heating up.

What was she doing??? Trying to send you reki's this time? I am going to make sure that she ties you a rakhi this rakshabandhan ! Gauri was blabbering carelessly. You don't need to lose your cool Gauri ... she is just a friend ... for your kind information meditation is a relaxation technique! Don't you think you know more than necessary about "HER relaxation techniques ... she was behaving hasty ... Om just helplessly hit his head

Tia was wearing a black nightie... was she planning to do black magic? Gauri again voiced her stupid opinion. From where was does she get the brain to say something like this ... Omkara's boggling mind now about to blast. There was this desperate need to shut her up immediately. Do you know black magic ? he tried hard to make some sense out of this discussion but she naively nodded a no... Does she know black magic??? Omkara sounding an octave higher. I don't know ... came her uncomfortable reply ... then you don't have to blabber Gauri. Omkara tried to calm down

I saw it on the TV show ABLA SUHAAGAN ... she feebly tried to explain, a witch was doing black magic on the hero and he became a mosquito. Oh My Dear God! She wasn't going to stop, was she ? Omkara so wanted to go and bang his head in the wall. His wife has been watching crap on TV !!! she needs a psychiatrist! Even Gauri had become solid sodium in this room's air now ...

You again took away my dibbi of Vaseline for your soft pastel shading didn't you? She shot at him like a raging canon fussing through his cupboard of all his paint boxes. He understood where this was going. ILLOGICAL ARGUMENT. Even he was going crazy but this had to stop, right now!

She turned back after checking his whole cupboard and there he stood with folded arms ... not just him even his eyesight detaining her. Stood amidst the two open doors of his considerably small cupboard in front of him, She was now trapped with no choice...

One heck of a weird little woman aren't you ... GAURI OMKARA SINGH OBEROI!!! he did not want to sound loud but she was angered... YOU she poked him, ALL BECAUSE OF YOU... OMKARA SINGH OBEROI... Handsome as hell that you are... the so evident blessing of Shankarji to the female kind of Homo sapiens to drool ... I am trying to save you from every kind of cunning woman in this sphere from the beginning of the day and you call me little!!!

Omkara was amazed! What was she exactly trying to do to him? Flattering; Accusing he did not know but he was sure that she was shouting. I am not that little, I know all my sizes well ... she raised her hand not wanting him to speak. Even I do know ... all of them... he reassured tightening the belt of her night silk. From being closer, she was closest to him now, the same hand quiescent on his chest now ... near his heart beat.

Gauri, you are my mom's daughter-in-law, you are my wife, you are the mother of my three babies and no one can take that away from you ... he confessed with such vigor in his hold. But right now, her heart was growing madly fanatical in the moment she heard THREE BABIES! This man is seriously planning to make three babies out of me??? She hiccupped and was expecting a moment from him out of this situation. It could have been if not at all interrupted by ...

"O, where is Gauri bhabhi?

Obedient to his reflexes, it was now his grip seizing her wrist in the small of her back forcing her into his chest, all worked upon and chiseled but warm and affectionate ... she was melting. Being such receptive, Omkara so knew that she is not going to utter a word.

"What happened Rudra? Why are you searching for her? Even I don't know where she is? "Turning his head Om spoke to Rudra at his actor best.

"O I am very hungry and I desperately need something sweet "Rudra explain rubbing his tummy.

"She baked some cookies in the evening ... go help yourself Om trying hard to send him away but even Rudra was not giving up... " O I don't want cookies ... I need halwa, suji ka halwa Rudra imagined licking his lips...

Omkara had had it enough for now... he began shouting " NOT NOW RUDRA, JUST GO AWAY and sadly Rudra had to go away.

What was he thinking? That I am going to let my wife go away right now for the sake of his supid halwa ... he was noting for his mental self only to realize that she ad began to punch him in the chest...

I am here; your brother was not able to see me. See I became invisible for him now! I am so tiny; what the hell am I supposed to do? Survive on Bourn vita, Milo or Complan! She started making faces about to sob and that's when his finger almost ripping her chin enforced her to look up ... into his eyes ...

HARZ HI KYA HAI

TUM NAZAR UTHAKAR BAAT KARO

MAIN SARR JHUKAKAR SUNUNGA

That was it! He surely knew how to keep his woman in control. Being able to hear the rasp in her breathing, He could feel the nerves leaping off her in invisible sparks. Her body frame forgetting that it is existing to support her. She could so powerfully feel the heat emanating from his muscular torso. The slight hint of his cologne overlying his outdoorsy male scent was becoming torturous now. Her tongue froze in the roof of her mouth as she looked at him ... those eyes so dark and intense like rich chocolate and lips which seem so lusciously sensual now. That sharp and strong jaw which gave him that "Don't mess with me air. "Beautiful is what he said to his woman who was deprived of the power of speech now.

Time stood still. The room had become so quite that they were able to feel each other breathing. Her hands curved into his shoulders and his caressing her back. With one sincere glance in those dark eyes, she was able to feel like the warmest and deepest of amber fading in her own self. It was in that terrifically energizing moment that she stood exhilarated by the breathe taking symmetry of his face. All her defenses had collapsed long ago. As the passage of blood through her veins was slow and thickening. Breathe being dragged through her tight throat. She helplessly wondered ... how would it feel like to kiss him?

Baahon Mein Daalein Baahein Baahein

Baahon Ka Jaise Haar Hua

Toh Kyon Naa Main Bhi Keh doon Keh doon

Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua ...



Even though I very well know that now I will have to run for life, away far away from that bull dozer of yours but this composition particularly has taken a lot of effort from me ... response is awaited! 😃

Edited by Aparajita2210 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Wow pari... that's an amazing update dear...😛
Yeh gauri bhi na yaar she is so sweet and I liked her possessiveness...🥳🥳
Gauri's insecurities and jealousy towards other female kind was hilarious...🤣
Especially the scene that she was peeping in through key hole of tia's room and questioning omkara was my fav one...
Overall an amazing shot dear... try to update the next shot so soon as am waiting for it...😳
Love u dear...🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Superb update
After Riddhima now Tia
Gauri is so funny n cute

Omkara sure has tough time
With everyone around them

Gauri was jealous of Tia for taking Om's name
She was just meditating 🤣
Gauri thought she was doing black magic

Omkara had tough time handling her
She was sad that he thinks she is tiny
Was she praising him or what
I think praising only

God Rudra has awesome timming
Omkara literally hid her 🤣
NOT NOW..poor Rudra

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow that was an amazing update.. The best part was when gauri feeling if she had to survive on milo or complan 🤣.. It actually reminds me of myself when I drank complan for years to increase my height.. 😆.. So when they are going to kiss waiting for it

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