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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Lovely chapter

Ouch yog had to go to hospital as janvi was serious
But Anika was upset as yog didn't answer to her proposal
I like father daughter part
Anika's dad understand anika very well
Ouch Anika planned to leave yog if he won't love her
Poor she felt sad as yog didn't come to puja
Thank god he came in time at home
Finally yog & Anika confront each other
Wow their romance lovely
Continue plz


Thanks dear glad you liked it
True Yog being a doctor has his set of duties
Yes Anika was upset and confused as Yog Left without a word about her confession
It was required for Anika wanted mental peace and Girish was the one who could give her at this point of time
But obvious any self respecting lady will do the same
Yes finally Yog arrived on time and things got cleared between them
True finally they become one in every sense
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

lovely update yaar
thanks for the pm


Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
MARVELLOUS DIII
ITS FANTASTIC LOVED IT ..
THANKS FOR PM AND SORRY FOR LATE
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naazrt

MARVELLOUS DIII

ITS FANTASTIC LOVED IT ..
THANKS FOR PM AND SORRY FOR LATE


Thanks dear glad you liked it
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing chapter dear, sorry for not having been regular with my reading. Happy New Year btw! Also, amazing choice for new characters - love them <3
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Amazing chapter dear, sorry for not having been regular with my reading. Happy New Year btw! Also, amazing choice for new characters - love them <3


Thanks Shree dear glad you liked it
Wish you a happy & prosperous new year too
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha

Ani, after venting out everything in the spur of the moment, realised that she has spoken a bit too much this time, the much awaited confession took place but definitely not in a SPECIAL way that she herself had planned to do and most importantly instead of strengthening their bond, it made the entire relationship more complicated.


Thus she stood there amidst a pool of uncertainty and dilemma that what course her life was going to take henceforth. That her confession came out coz of her pangs of jealousy and insecurities, made her ashamed. Its as if her love stood shallow in front of yog's unconditional one.

Yog on the other hand was probably taken aback at the sudden outburst. Its not that he was unknown to ani's day by day escalating feelings for him and it was only a matter of time that she would have spoken her heart out but the way it happened rendered him speechless. Moreover, jhanvi's condition did no good to the situation and being the responsible doc he had to run.

Loved the entire convo b/w ani and girish and i must thank u di for exiting her mother for the timebeing as she needed the exclusive pampering of girish today when she decided to turn up at his place. Truly, parents r incomparable when it comes to lending support unconditionally and unquestioningly.

Oh ani decided to keep the fast. Its gud and she did all the needful. Yog's not answering her back troubled her big times and her voice message reflected her emotions and inner turmoil beautifully. She was so disturbed that she even hallucinated about yog's presence. Ani's dreaming only increased the suspense that whether yog will come or not...

He he finally the dutiful and loving husband did turn up and omg he was restless coz of ani's emotional message. Even the tensed situation too started easing up when both ani and yog got involved in their "dil se dil tak" chat. Their entire convo was very nicely written di. It wasn't cheesy yet ornamental, not straight forward still straight from the heart. As if the time stood still so that the love birds can enjoy and live the moments completely.

What ever took place afterwards was passionate, sensual & gratifying with its subtlety increasing its beauty manyfold. The lines in b/w were also very congruent with the situation. I am thankful to u di that u chose not to run into any sort of mushiness and thus i would like to refrain myself from using such adjectives like "hot", "bold" etc for the 2nd part of the story. It was so delicate and pure.

It was all together a beautiful update with the lovely couple finding their way to each other's hearts at last with all misunderstandings having sorted and insecurities being flushed away. The next dawn will be a one of togetherness and come with a promise to cherish each other till their last breath. Thanks for pm di and sorry for being late.


Thanks Utsha dear glad you liked it so much

Love you lots for your critical appreciation 🤗

True after getting out of her anger trance she realized that what all se had spoken to him, but it was high time that she should have spoken to Yog about her feelings ... definitely it was not the best way & time to confess love but her feelings & her emotions were pure. Yes situation got bit complicated due to her sudden outburst & it all went for a toss, her confession has to be a special one but all got ruined in haste & anger.

Anika was uncertain that what made Yog stop today from reciprocating back to her confession ... was it Jaanvi's condition, his anger or something else. True her confession come out of jealousy & insecurities & she regretted stepping back every time when Yog took his step forward to her after things were clear between them. She understood that Yog love is unconditional really she felt herself very small in front of his love.

Yog would have said something in affirmation there itself but duty bind him he is a Doctor & a friend too. Such things can wait but death cannot so he left to save Jaanvi. To be true Yes Yog went speechless for a while as the thing he wanted to hear from so long was in front of him. He knew Anika well that she loves him but for lady like her speaking those 3 tender words after breaking the wall of her shyness & hitches will not be that easy & the way they got married was also a key factor here. 😳😳

Girish & Anika are support to each other ... Daughter is quite close to her dad even at times Fathers could pamper their daughters better than mothers. Support of parents is rally valuable unconditional & very hard to find as children are inseparable parts of their life.😊

Anika decided to keep fast as she loved Yog and it was her first Karwachauth . She was in dilemma after what happened she was continuously trying to find out what is Yog's outlook but unfortunately Yog was busy & couldn't answer her. Her voice message was reflecting her pain & regret . Se was disturbed due t Yog's quietness this time, her hallucinations & imagination were all because of her love.

Finally Yog made it on time & after seeing Anika's condition on return made him bit stunned he realized that all had impacted Anika gravely. Finally when Yog made her realize that he loves her then situation became much lighter. Their chat was purely "Dil Se Dil Tak" one means straight from the heart & such conversations are not cheesy they are real pure & beautiful so I kept the way I feel it should be simple but impactful; & finally they find the way to each other's heart. 😳😳

Yes their moments were passionate & sensual but I was not sure as might be in flow of writing it had gone over the top.😕😕 But I think keeping in mind the characters the mushiness was not at all required neither Hot & bold was required it has to be delicate & pure like Yog & Anika. Even Yog regretted at their sudden closeness as he knew Anika is still to get comfortable with him.😳😳

True finally all the walls of insecurities & misunderstandings are melted & true love won over all odds. True not just the next dawn but every morning of life will be as beautiful to cherish for ever as love & relationships are to be cherished for life time 😊😊

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --GOLD--


Thanks Utsha dear glad you liked it so much

Love you lots for your critical appreciation 🤗

True after getting out of her anger trance she realized that what all se had spoken to him, but it was high time that she should have spoken to Yog about her feelings ... definitely it was not the best way & time to confess love but her feelings & her emotions were pure. Yes situation got bit complicated due to her sudden outburst & it all went for a toss, her confession has to be a special one but all got ruined in haste & anger.

Anika was uncertain that what made Yog stop today from reciprocating back to her confession ... was it Jaanvi's condition, his anger or something else. True her confession come out of jealousy & insecurities & she regretted stepping back every time when Yog took his step forward to her after things were clear between them. She understood that Yog love is unconditional really she felt herself very small in front of his love.

Yog would have said something in affirmation there itself but duty bind him he is a Doctor & a friend too. Such things can wait but death cannot so he left to save Jaanvi. To be true Yes Yog went speechless for a while as the thing he wanted to hear from so long was in front of him. He knew Anika well that she loves him but for lady like her speaking those 3 tender words after breaking the wall of her shyness & hitches will not be that easy & the way they got married was also a key factor here. 😳😳

Girish & Anika are support to each other ... Daughter is quite close to her dad even at times Fathers could pamper their daughters better than mothers. Support of parents is rally valuable unconditional & very hard to find as children are inseparable parts of their life.😊

Anika decided to keep fast as she loved Yog and it was her first Karwachauth . She was in dilemma after what happened she was continuously trying to find out what is Yog's outlook but unfortunately Yog was busy & couldn't answer her. Her voice message was reflecting her pain & regret . Se was disturbed due t Yog's quietness this time, her hallucinations & imagination were all because of her love.

Finally Yog made it on time & after seeing Anika's condition on return made him bit stunned he realized that all had impacted Anika gravely. Finally when Yog made her realize that he loves her then situation became much lighter. Their chat was purely "Dil Se Dil Tak" one means straight from the heart & such conversations are not cheesy they are real pure & beautiful so I kept the way I feel it should be simple but impactful; & finally they find the way to each other's heart. 😳😳

Yes their moments were passionate & sensual but I was not sure as might be in flow of writing it had gone over the top.😕😕 But I think keeping in mind the characters the mushiness was not at all required neither Hot & bold was required it has to be delicate & pure like Yog & Anika. Even Yog regretted at their sudden closeness as he knew Anika is still to get comfortable with him.😳😳

True finally all the walls of insecurities & misunderstandings are melted & true love won over all odds. True not just the next dawn but every morning of life will be as beautiful to cherish for ever as love & relationships are to be cherished for life time 😊😊

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊


This is one of the best replies to my comment di.
And i just loved it. Coz along with the updt it clearly reflected ur pov regarding human emotions and love which r quite congruent with mine. It was an elegant reply di.
I really feel honoured every time u write back in answer to my comments though knowing very well that u do that for everyone and i will disclose a secret today. I keep on waiting for ur replies with an eagerness just like i do for ur updates.
As if ur replies complete my writings and dono milke ek saath had ek update ko justify karti hai.
Its gives me an undefined pleasure sending time comprehending what u will come up each time against my replies.
And last but not at all the least I LOVE U TOO DI , LOOOTSSS & LOOOADSSS.
Edited by utsha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha



This is one of the best replies to my comment di.
And i just loved it. Coz along with the updt it clearly reflected ur pov regarding human emotions and love which r quite congruent with mine. It was an elegant reply di.
I really feel honoured every time u write back in answer to my comments though knowing very well that u do that for everyone and i will disclose a secret today. I keep on waiting for ur replies with an eagerness just like i do for ur updates.
As if ur replies complete my writings and dono milke ek saath had ek update ko justify karti hai.
Its gives me an undefined pleasure sending time comprehending what u will come up each time against my replies.
And last but not at all the least I LOVE U TOO DI , LOOOTSSS & LOOOADSSS.


Thanks dear glad you loved my reply
Well yes I have certain POVs & I am really happy that you too admire them
Dear yes I reply to everyone ... But very few readers like you provoke me to write more
To be honest even I too wait comment from readers like you & it gives immense pleasure when all turns positive
Keep me giving your valuable comments and suggestions they mean a lot to me
Keep writing and commenting ... With lots of love
Goldie 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update,loved it...thnx 4 pm

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