Originally posted by: utsha
Ani, after venting out everything in the spur of the moment, realised that she has spoken a bit too much this time, the much awaited confession took place but definitely not in a SPECIAL way that she herself had planned to do and most importantly instead of strengthening their bond, it made the entire relationship more complicated.
Thus she stood there amidst a pool of uncertainty and dilemma that what course her life was going to take henceforth. That her confession came out coz of her pangs of jealousy and insecurities, made her ashamed. Its as if her love stood shallow in front of yog's unconditional one.
Yog on the other hand was probably taken aback at the sudden outburst. Its not that he was unknown to ani's day by day escalating feelings for him and it was only a matter of time that she would have spoken her heart out but the way it happened rendered him speechless. Moreover, jhanvi's condition did no good to the situation and being the responsible doc he had to run.
Loved the entire convo b/w ani and girish and i must thank u di for exiting her mother for the timebeing as she needed the exclusive pampering of girish today when she decided to turn up at his place. Truly, parents r incomparable when it comes to lending support unconditionally and unquestioningly.
Oh ani decided to keep the fast. Its gud and she did all the needful. Yog's not answering her back troubled her big times and her voice message reflected her emotions and inner turmoil beautifully. She was so disturbed that she even hallucinated about yog's presence. Ani's dreaming only increased the suspense that whether yog will come or not...
He he finally the dutiful and loving husband did turn up and omg he was restless coz of ani's emotional message. Even the tensed situation too started easing up when both ani and yog got involved in their "dil se dil tak" chat. Their entire convo was very nicely written di. It wasn't cheesy yet ornamental, not straight forward still straight from the heart. As if the time stood still so that the love birds can enjoy and live the moments completely.
What ever took place afterwards was passionate, sensual & gratifying with its subtlety increasing its beauty manyfold. The lines in b/w were also very congruent with the situation. I am thankful to u di that u chose not to run into any sort of mushiness and thus i would like to refrain myself from using such adjectives like "hot", "bold" etc for the 2nd part of the story. It was so delicate and pure.
It was all together a beautiful update with the lovely couple finding their way to each other's hearts at last with all misunderstandings having sorted and insecurities being flushed away. The next dawn will be a one of togetherness and come with a promise to cherish each other till their last breath. Thanks for pm di and sorry for being late.
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