The Cursed News... A Ram-Mila OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Saga of Ramayana is a big ocean, I am just trying to bring out a drop of emotions through this OS.
It's a fiction and doesn't intent to hurt any feelings.

The bond of Ram-Lakshman and Lakshman-Urmila is not hidden from any of you... This OS simply portrays the reaction of Ram and Urmila when they wud have got the most cursed news of life... After Lakshman's leave news of his death.

This OS will be in two parts..

If interested please hit like and oblige with your critical reviews. Ur healthy recommendations are highly welcomed!

~Mohini

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am very interested Mohini 👏👏
Count me in 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mohini i am very much interested !!!!! 😃

Since in SKR, no one was aware of Lakshman's death till the end of the show !! 😭 🤢

I would love to read this OS because through this way , i want to see Ram-Urmila reaction !!! 😳

Please update fast , i can't wait !!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

I am very interested Mohini 👏👏

Count me in 😳

Thanks di !
Updating soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1

Mohini i am very much interested !!!!! 😃

Since in SKR, no one was aware of Lakshman's death till the end of the show !! 😭 🤢

I would love to read this OS because through this way , i want to see Ram-Urmila reaction !!! 😳

Please update fast , i can't wait !!! 😳


I know dear, that's a big reason for this OS ;)
Thanks for supporting!

Updating soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1



Shri Ram was deep in Meditation, Suddenly He felt suffocation for a second and opened His eyes which were swollen red.

"Lakshman!!" trembled His voice...
"I hope you are not in any Danger my dear"

He went in the corridor to find a solution for His restlessness.

"Maharaj... Maharaj!"

A servant came shouting to Ram with a man having teary eyes.

"What's the matter, Sainik?" asked Ram, His voice was trying to be normal but neither His mind nor His heart was in peace.
Ram frowned at the man.

The man fall on His feet... Sobbing badly all he uttered was a bad news... very bad news 😔

"O Lord! when I was returning from the jungle after getting wood, I saw Prince Lakshman" he narrated...
"He was in white clothes and was heading towards Saryu river. I got little shocked, I was not knowing anything about the mishap that took place yesterday. I followed him to ask whether he needed any kind of help, but --- bu--" his voice broke.

"But what!?! what happened. tell me at once" Ram shouted, He bent down crying and asked "please tell me... what happened"

"Lakshman ji went deep inside the river and held his breathe till he was visible" the man completed with all the power he had.

"NO!" "NO, my Lakshman!!"
Shri Ram was crestfallen... somewhere deep inside xHe knew it, Lakshman's last words echoed in His ears...
"FOR ME, Without you life is nothing Bhaiya"

Ram walked away from there. But as soon as He heard the servant moving towards Urmila to inform her.

"You all may leave, no need to inform anyone."
Ram said coldly.




Precap: Ram heads to Urmila's room... She was talking to Lakshman's painting... Ram puts a garland on the painting and cries badly... Urmila shocked.




Edited by ..Dharma_dasi.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mohini di , it is too beautiful !!! ❤️
Just love that part when Ram felt something was wrong!! 😭 ❤️
Ram-Lakshman were two bodies but one soul , so how will Ram not feel about his lakhan laal !!! ❤️
Ram's reaction on hearing Lakshman's death was 😭 👏
Short yet too beautifully described Ram's feelings !!!! 👏
Lakshman's dialouge was so true !!! 😭 😭
Waiting to read next part , please update fast, want to read Urmila's feeling too 😃 , also loved the scene in which ram put garland on lakshman's painting, something different ! 😭 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing part Mohini😃
Edited by Nonie12345 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a painful OS! Brings tears to your eyes!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Such a painful OS! Brings tears to your eyes!

I agree Radhe...

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