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I really don't know what should I say, on this special day.. to a special person to make you feel special. Your friends, readers have already said many things and here I am thinking what to say as many times, I already said all, about my love and passion for this story and your writing.
Let me try to write some more..😉
About my dearest author
There are many people who love you and adore your writing and I am one of them- an ardent reader of this incredibly awesome story, Pale Blue Dot, an avid fan of your awe-inspiring writing, a fanatic admirer of you and your work(whether it's your wonderful imagination of PBD or any OS or the way you used to reply to our comments), everything is just unique.. your style to do anything is unique and I guess that's what attracted me towards you and your work.
Not only PALE BLUE DOT, but every OS you have written is a masterpiece!!
I really adore you as a person.You never let your mind get disturbed in this fancy life(IF), and you know what is important at a time. The reason I am saying this is, your chupke-chupke aana and then dheere se bhag jana..😛😆 ,when you couldn't complete the update..😈 Though many might get angry for this hunar of yours but I like this quality of yours jhanvi di as many times I find myself stuck in this situation when readers asked me to update, I take their request seriously.. No doubt we should.. but sometimes It happened that I stressed myself a lot for this thing when I have other important work to do so that's why I like this thing in you.. I know sometimes you sleep very late for completing the update for us.. , and I love you for that..🤗🤗🤗
About Pale Blue Dot
Such a delightful story with the glorious portrayal of Jalal and Jodha. The reason for my addiction to this story is only and only jalal as I, and needless to say many other girls want to have such a guy in their life.
He is everything, any girl would desire for. He's one of that rare cases who is that foremost boyfriend, on whom his girl would feel proud when she walks with him and would be the best husband, that any girl having him in her life, would feel blessed.
Jodha, she's beautiful, smart and courageous. It's her story, how she managed to survive and finally met a man of her dreams who filled the void of her life, giving her back her lost family, which she yearned for, somewhere in her heart, though she always pretend in front of others that she's fine.
Also, her character teach us some vital lessons of living a life. She's an inspiring character, one of the reasons for that respect I have in my heart, For you.⭐️⭐️⭐️
Her father's words to give respect to people of lower class and the way he gave her and us a very good example of, how we can't change something that we have done wrong in impulsiveness.. so we should think before act or hurting someone.
Gautam-I loved this character more than jodha. I loved the way you portrayed his character. He always guides his lil sis. It's his advice that she should go in architecture. Something very important for teenagers who are yet to decide, what they want to become in life.
Also, the way jodha managed to get normal(though not completely) is commendable.
"Pareshaan aatma😛maina and samyu's mother😆, who used to take tension of their daughters future who doesn't know cooking. These all things looks so natural and I really like each character of this story.😃
Jalal's ex.., his friends, jodha's friends, all these things are just PERFECT and it's fun to read about them(Not about Aliya ofcourse😆).
One more thing, when I read that chapter where jalal went for dinner for the first time, at jo's place. I was surprised because I didn't expect usmaan ji can be a friend of jo's paternal uncle.😛
oops.. Jada bada ho gaya na.. I should stop now..
I just want to say, I love you jhanvi di..🤗..🤗..🤗
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Here is the OS, which I have written on your jo-jalal. Sorry for taking so long to complete this OS and I want to say one thing, it's not my best. I could write quite better than this but due to time constraints and some issues at home,I couldn't give my 100%. Also, you know my imagination is dull 😭😭so sorry for writing this boring piece.
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I Loved You The First Moment I Saw You
1st October 2016, 11:45pm
Adjusting a green coloured pallu of her Peacock Blue Banaras silk Sari,gifted by her man, jodha gave a final glance at herself from top to bottom in a mirror.Letting out a congenial smile at her man's exquisite choice an exuberant woman turned towards her cupboard to take out a large packet as she gave an excitable look to a precious piece she was holding.
A part of her knew that her man would like this first gift of her yet she was feeling twitchy, for, she knew how devilish he could be when it comes to teasing her. Leaning at an almirah, she recalled his words when they were sitting on a swing, after her memorable experience-their first kiss.
"I raised my hand on you, behaved so rude yet you didn't get angry. I thought you would leave this home or stayed aloof after that but you..," looking into his girl's eyes whose eyes were fixed at his face with a faint sweet smile on her face, jalal brushed his thumb on her cheeks.
"But you didn't get angry with me jo, why??", his voice soft as he smiled at her. Confusion yet delight was perceptible on his face which was enough to widen her smile as she kept looking into his eyes.
Swollen lips tempting him to feel them once more, brightening eyes compelling him to compare the shine in those hazel eyes with the moon as his gazed over her right shoulder-at a moon, glowing skin tantalizing him to think whether it's a effect of this moonlight or their kiss.
The thought filled the fascinated man with pride and amusement. Pride-to have this girl in his life, in his home, on his swing right beside him. Amusement-from when his mind started observing nature so dearly?
Lowering his head, the distracted man chuckled whilst her brows knitted in confusion. "God knows what devilish thoughts are making him smile inwardly"
Descrying his furrowed brows, jalal sat straight and she got up. "I am sleepy. It had been a tiring day", she stifled a yawn. "Good night..," she smiled and turned to leave when he held her hand.
"You didn't answer my question yet", a sly smile erupted on his lips as she turned back.
" You know the answer!!", trying hard not to blush, jodha asserted.
" What if I want to hear it from you and not to assume anything obscure"
"Obscure", she raised an eyebrow and he smirked.
Shaking head at his puckishness the sheepish woman resolved to shut her mouth and to leave the place as soon as possible before her impish boss start his wicked tricks on her so jodha again turned back and advanced towards her room when she heard him, "I am waiting to hear your answer. If not today, then I want to hear it on my birthday"
Her feet halted followed by her giggles as she again looked back, at him. Too surprised at his demand and too shy to look into his eyes, at a moment, jodha ran to her room before smiling at him beautifully leaving a well-pleased man behind as he lifted up his foot a little with which he was halting a swing. Reminiscing their first kiss, he opened both arms to the respective corners of a swing as he smiled and smiled broadly.
11:55pm
"Devil!!", she blushed at her man's playfulness and took a deep breath before standing straight. Shifting eyes from a packet in her hand to a clock, she took another deep breath and left to a kitchen.
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Checking time for the tenth time in last five minutes, the eager man was moving to and fro in his room,for,he wanted his girl to wish him first on his special day. Though he knew that she will come to wish him but the wait to get a glimpse of his ladylove on this special night, was hard for the desperate man-his first birthday with her!!
As the clock tickled at12, he heard a knock on his door. His head instinctively turned towards a clock and then to a door.Smiling at a perfect timing of his girl, jalal rushed towards a door and as the avid man opened a door, the smile on his face disrupted as it was replaced by an inscrutable expression.
Decked up in a Peacock Blue Banaras silk Sari gifted by him, jodha was standing at a door. Few tresses were falling on her forehead as she left her long silky hair open. The dark eyeliner and a thin layer of kajal were making her doe-shaped eyes attractive. Lips which look so tempting beneath a layer of pink lipstick were holding an irresistible smile. Enthralled, jalal just looked on.
Feeling shy under his heated gaze, the Self-conscious woman blinked and lowered her head. Smiling sheepishly she raised her head."Happy birthday boss!!", she wished cheerfully.
Her words successfully dragged the captivated man from his reverie as baffled,he blinked. The pink of her lips was fetched on his cheeks as he lowered his head and smiled mystically.
"Thankyou BOB!!", he moved aside smilingly, giving her a way to enter a room. Looking at her fondly in anticipation of getting a warm hug from his girl he stepped forward when his gaze descended to her hands.
A broad smile adorned his face as he looked at the platter she was holding- a black forest cake it was. Smile was not leaving her lips either as she moved towards a couch whilst he followed her. Putting down a cake on a table, she sat beside him and passed a knife.
Smiling at her, he was ready to cut the cake when she interrupted. "wait.. wait.." Patting her forehead , she quickly put a candle beside a cake whilst amused,he chuckled at his girl's antics. "Make a wish..", leaning down she lit up a candle.
Moving back,her shoulder brushed against his and jodha swallowed, trying not to show the effect of his proximity on her face. He kept mum, shifting his gaze from their shoulders to her face and gave her an amused look which was enough for a wise woman to comprehend that she failed terribly to hide the effect of his proximity on her face. Smirking at her diffidence, he decided to put his girl out of her misery as looking at her, he blew out the candle.
"May you get everything you desire for..", she whispered softly, looking at him.
"I have everything I desired for..", came his instant reply.
Apprehending the meaning of his words, the delighted woman couldn't help but blush whilst he chuckled at her sheepishness and put his arm around her shoulders as he made her to hold a knife and forward their hands. Bewildered and enchanted by his gesture, she turned her face to him.Their faces an inch apart as she smiled into his eyes. Giving an affectionate smile to his love,jalal gestured with head to proceed.
After both fed each other with a piece of a cake, he held her both hands before turning towards her.
" You are looking so so beautiful in this saree jo. Thankyou for wearing this, on this day", his voice soft and she smiled with downcast eyes,unable to look into his intense eyes. His words made her blush as well as delighted, for,she could perceive the happiness in his eyes.
" Seems this saree is designed for you only. Thankyou for this Precious gift, sweetheart"
"Sweetheart!! I didn't know this word would sound so majestic till I heard it from you."
"You filled the emptiness in me.. Thankyou for coming into my life,meenu", saying this softly he gently placed a kiss on her hands which he was holding,firmly.
Enthralled and touched by his adoration, the impassioned woman managed to gulp back her tears. "Thanks to you for this priceless gift jalal.", she began with a soft smile. "You know what it means to me. Thankyou for the care and affection you showered me with" Raising head she looked into his eyes "The belongingness that I mis..", she choked and a lone tear followed which she was holding back since a while. Holding her face gently, jalal brushed away that tear with his thumb and she shook head.Wiping tears quickly she gave him the broadest of smiles.
" Don't you want to see your gift?", she chirped and he was taken aback by a sudden change in her mood.
" oh..I thought this was my gift", he gesticulated with eyes at a saree she was wearing and she giggled.
Getting up she rushed towards a door while curious,jalal frowned with sheer delight. His phone beeped and he smiled reading his friend's wishes. Wishes which were not seemed to be a birthday wishes but ,of after wedding.
A slam on a door disrupted the gruntled man as he flipped back his head and found his girl coming to him holding a large packet in her hands. "What's this?, moving to her he casted an inquisitive glimpse at a packet.
She forward her hands and he took the packet. "Open it..", her voice excited as well as edgy at the same time. He could see the nervousness on her face so he held her hand and moving to a bed he made her sit. Placing himself beside her he grinned at her while unwrapping the gift ,assuring her with eyes that he would love her first gift. As soon he unwrapped the gift, he first joyously knitted brows at the present and then blinked in bewilderment and that's it!!
Holding his gift with both hands, he gazed at it with wide eyes. Not in his dreams he had thought of such a gift from his girl. It was a sketch in a large frame which she had made.The sketch had her father and mother seated in front row and jodha standing behind them at the center.
A man to her left who had his right hand around her shoulder was her brother,Gautam and the other man to her right, had his left hand on her waist-It's me!! Fondly brushing thumb on the sketch, jalal smiled faintly.
"How beautifully and simply she conveyed her feelings" Gazing at the frame with unblinkable eyes, jalal smiled in gratification.
" That day,on my parents wedding anniversary ... when you came in office and asked to show you a sketch..", she began with downcast eyes. Her voice low and he looked up.
Fixing her eyes at a floor, she wiggled her fingers, " That day I hide this sketch from you jalal and..", getting no response from the other side, she hesitantly raised her eyes and to her disconcert, he didn't even cast a glance at her. His face was impassive and eyes fixed on a frame, for, something on that sketch caught his attention.
A part of his cried on descrying the title she had written above a sketch, "UTOPIA" at a same time, a part of him was feeling outstanding on discerning a dark line on that title.
"She cut the title", "UTOPIA now, as if she find her family in me.How innocently she said it all with just one gesture that how deeply she's in love with me."
Overwhelmed with her innocence, jalal felt blessed, to have her in his life.Though she was expecting a teasing look or a broad smile from him but the sight she bestowed with was beyond her imagination, for, she caught a lone tear travelling down his cheek.
Too shocked to see tears in his eyes, the smile on her face diminished instantly. "jalal..", she whispered but wasn't given a chance to say anything further ,for ,the man beside her squashed her chest against his, reveling in her arms. Flabbergasted by his sudden act, jodha took a moment to decipher what had happened to him. Getting an answer from herself, the enchanted woman closed eyes before circling her arms around him. A very soft, faint smile flirted with her lips,while adjusting head a little more, at her neck he placed a wet kiss.Startled, she flinched inside his well built body. The wetness of his cold lips on her neck aroused her passion for him and as he started nibbling her skin, her passion escalated!!
Not able to succumb the need which had rooted inside her with his impetuous act jodha grasped her man,closing her eyes tighter.Discerning her weakness at a moment, jalal imprisoned her petite form more tightly into his masculine frame.
"I LOVE YOU IDIOT", he whispered in her ears and her eyes wide open.
"What?? He said that!! Did he really say that??"
Too stupefied to react and too chuffed to contain her happiness within, the exhilarated woman took her own sweet time to believe that her man really said those three magical words.
"Now I understand why people says magical words" Her lips broke into a gleeful smile as she softly moved her hands on his back-only to proliferate his yearning,For Her.
Suddenly she felt his hand travelling delicately down at her back. A cold shiver ran down her spine as she was feeling his fingers moving over the knobs of her spine towards her waist and as his hand reached her bare skin, jodha moaned within. Her grip on him becoming tighter as he let his fingers skim across her waist. "Skin against skin.. oh my my.. someone stop him before I.."
Like he listened her insight, his hand moved up and this time rested on her face as he gently parted from her. Holding her face fondly, he placed a soft kiss on her forehead and with closed eyes, she savoured the touch of his rough lips on her soft skin.
"My love!! With every gesture you are making me fall for you more. Why you love me so much?", jodha smiled.
Didn't dare to meet eyes with him, she kept her eyes closed and he smiled at her reticence. "Open your eyes jo", he tucked few locks that were falling on her face behind her ear.
Smiling sheepishly, she shook head and the amused man chuckled.
"Ok if you are not going to open your eyes then I..", stepping forward he again lessened the distance between them. Perceiving his face near hers, the troubled woman furrowed her brows.
Tilting head he was looking at her lips while moving towards the tempting side when she opened her eyes. A winning smile erupted on his lips and she squinted at him. Irked by his smile, she glared at him but it was a mere vague attempt as she couldn't restrain her blush bestowing a triumphant expression on him.
Pressing lips not to laugh, she turned her face aside and he came closer. Giving him a look, she pushed a man lighty and swiftly advanced towards a door.
Grinning at her, he shouted from behind "I am still waiting for an answer" making a halt on her feet as she gleefully frowned. "He still remember our conversation. How stubborn he is."
Turning back she smiled at him and anticipated he raised brows in glee.
"After five minutes, In a garden.. I will be waiting for you", saying this she ran out of a room, leaving an inquisitive man behind as he smiled broadly.
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"What she's upto?", glancing around the garden jalal looked for his girl. "I wanted to hear those words from her but here I ended up in saying those words first", shaking head in rue he walked to a fountain when a sound of anklets caught his attention. So eager to get a glimpse of his love, he swiftly turned his head to a direction from where the sound had come but to his disappointment he found no one.
Soon he heard a melodious voice and flabbergasted,he frowned.
Ee velalo neevu em chestu vuntaavo
What would you be doing at this moment
Anukuntuvuntaanu prathi nimishamu nenu
Is what I keep thinking every second
As he listened her words, his lips curled into a winsome smile. " My Meenu.."
Naa gunde enaado cheyi jaari poyindi
I have lost the control over my heart
Nee needa ga maari naa vaipu raanandi
It has turned into a shadow of yours and is reluctant to come back to me
Dooraana vuntune em maaya chesaavo
Even though you are far from me...your magic is all over me
"What a smart way to fulfil my wish.. My cunning jo", he shook head in amusement, adoring the love and affection she had for him while relishing the lyrics and the way she chose to convey her feelings, in her melodious voice.
|| Ee velalo ||
Nadi reyilo neevu...nidaraina raaneevu
Even when it's past midnight...you wouldn't let me sleep
As she continued with the song, suddenly a smile on his face got lessened as a strange feeling wrinkled his forehead.
Gadipedelaa kaalamu(2)
How can I spend the days this way?
"This song.. This Voice.. I have heard this before.. but.. where??",knitting brows he spent few moments in contemplation.
Pagalaina kaasepu...pani chesuko neevu
During the day...you wouldn't let me work on anything
Nee meedane dhyaanamu (2)
My mind is filled with you
She moved towards him with a winsome smile adorning her face and he finally got to see her petite form,advancing towards him. Leaving his cogitation, jalal smiled at his girl.
Ye vaipu choostunnaa...nee roope thochindi
Where ever I look...I can only see your image
Holding a broad smile of unfeigned delight, jalal started moving towards her whilst she kept singing, stepping towards him with her eyes fixed downwards.
Nuvvu kaaka veredi...kanipinchanantondi
Nothing else seems to appear before me except you
Looking up, she glimpsed at him as he stood in front of her just 4 steps away now. Gazing at her,Jalal smiled pleasantly.
Ee indrajaalanni...
This magic..
"Ouch..", a shrill cry left her lips and his eyes widened in alarm. Rushing to her, jalal curved his hand around her shoulders, "What happen jo?
Looking down, he espied a thorn in her feet as she lifted her left foot. "Come..", lifting her in his arms he moved to a wooden bench placed near a fountain as he made her sit..
"Sshh..", she hissed in pain. Strained-face, he looked at her with concern. Holding her feet gently, he pulled out a thorn and gently brushed his thumb over the spot when a black mole beneath the first toe on her foot caught his attention. Smiling on recalling the cute incident when he got to know about her little secret in a hotel room, jalal gently brushed his thumb on a familiar dot. Feeling a tingling sensation with his touch,jodha backed off her foot a little but he was not in a mood to leave as heedless of her reaction, he stared at her mole for a while.
Suddenly his grip on her foot loosened, eyebrows rose rapidly for a split second and then drop again, eyes widened in bewilderment and mouth dropped open.
"Jalal..", she called.
But the pensive man didn't react for he recollected the incident when he first saw this "amazing dot." Slowly, his mind started recalling all the incidents of that day IN GOA.
"Same song... Same Voice... Same thorn??", his lips broke into an amused smile. "Did we meet before I joined Regal?", jodha's words at a hotel on their first lunch date flashed across his mind.
" I don't believe this.. Is this true?? Really??.. so this means.. that girl was my jo??", forgetting her presence completely, he grinned some more-her foot still in his hands.
"Jalal..", this time her voice was louder than before which successfully dragged him out of his introspection.
"Jalal.. where are you lost?", little annoyance was perceptible in her tone and he looked up.
The delighted brown eyes met with the confused hazel eyes.
"Do you know me?" His face contorted into a devious grin whilst her face creased into a muddled frown.
"ee indrajalanni, neevena chesindi? (Is that you who did this magic to me?)", He laughed his delight.
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