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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok, this thing has been in my mind for ONE good year and finally I have penned it down and I am posting it, hope you enjoy it but before you read a few things to be cleared.

1. Viraj and Kabir are not brothers.
2. Vasundara has no past with Gangwals and knows that Kabir is in India for his further work.

Now, Happy Holi and enjoy this day, have a colourful year ahead and enjoy this OS too. šŸ¤—
Not proof read as always😳


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NiBir OS || Holi Hai ||

After saving Chandu from Bhabhiji and her goons, Nisha and Kabir were heading towards Jaipur when they saw Ramesh on a Dhabba, Nisha was happy to see him but Kabir had a doubt in his mind that why was Ramesh here. They approached him and Ramesh was surprised seeing Nisha there, he didn't want to tell her the truth thus he decided to lie to her but Nisha was his daughter and could read his eyes, she gave him her swear and asked him to say the truth.

Giving up Ramesh told her everything, how Dadaji was angry on him for allowing Nisha to go on the trip against his wish, how he was accused and his decision of leaving the house. Knowing the complete truth now Nisha started blaming herself for everything and Ramesh's guilt was doubled now that his daughter was blaming herself for his fault. The father daughter duo shared a hug and consoled each other, Ramesh then looked up at Kabir who was smiling looking at them, he broke the hug and Nisha followed his gaze.

"Nishu, yeh tere saath kya kar raha hai?" Ramesh asked and suddenly noticed the sindoor in her maang, he looked at them completely shocked and then Nisha made him sit on the nearest bench and explained him everything, how they met, the way they saved Chandu and then ended up getting married to each other.

Ramesh had no idea what to say but he was happy that unknowingly Nisha had moved on in her life, he looked at Kabir who was not able to meet eyes with him, seeing the genuineness and innocence on Kabir's face he smiled slightly and called him to them, Kabir like an obedient kid obeyed his command

"Abh jo hogaya so hogaya, agar tum dono mujh se wada karte ho ki jaisa main kahunga tum waisa hi karoge toh hi main tumhe maaf karunga" Ramesh said in a stern voice, Nisha and Kabir looked at each other and then Kabir replied

"Aap jo kahenge vo hum karenge uncle"

"Uncle nahi Papa" Ramesh told him giving them a good surprise, he then continued "Main chahata hun ki tum dono iss shadi ko nibaho" now this statement was a shock to them, Nisha never expected her father to say something like this.

"Papa, aap yeh..." Nisha started to say something but Ramesh stopped her

"Mujhe pe bharosa hai na beta?" he asked and Nisha just nodded her head "Toh main jo keh raha hun vo maan le, mera dil kehta hai ki yehi sab ke liye theek hai" he concluded and patted her head

Nisha looked at Kabir who was expressionless, she called him bringing him out of his trance, Kabir cleared his throat and spoke

"Main yahan aapna career banana aaya hun, main kuch bana chahata hun"

"Jab kisika saath ho toh manzil pana aur aasaan hota hai, hum tumhe kuch bhi karne se rokhenge nahi, balki tumhare har kadam pe tumahra saath denge" Ramesh said as he placed an assuring hand on his shoulder

"Par meri Maa ko iss bare main nahi pata hai" Kabir said

"Main unse baat karta hun, number do unka" Ramesh replied

Kabir hesitantly gave him Vasundara's number, after a ring or two the call was answered

"Namaste main Ramesh Gangwal bol raha hun" Ramesh started but stood up as he got the reply

"Vasu, Kabir tumhara beta hai?" he looked at Kabir in shock who was looking at Nisha and both were completely confused

"Tumhe pata hai tumhare bete ne kya kiya hai?" Ramesh said and told her everything, after having a good conversation with Vasundara he handed the phone to Kabir and asked him to talk to his Mom.

Kabir took the phone but totally scared and confused

"Hum bohut khush hai Kabir, tumhe andaaza bhi hai ki Nisha kiski beti hai? Vo humare purine padosi aur behead ache dost Ramesh ki beti hai, tumne apni zindagi ki sab se haseen galti ki hai iss baar, aur hume iss rishte se koi aitraaz nahi hai, hum jald se jald Jaipur aa rahe hai tumhe aur Nisha ko aashirwaad dene ke liye"

Vasundara said and cut the call all Kabir could do was stand still with his mouth wide open, he looked Ramesh who was smiling at him, Nisha was confused and this made her frustrated

"Koi mujhe bhi batao ki ho kya raha hai?!" she cribbed and Ramesh told her everything

"Abh main tumhe bataun ki tumhe kya karna hai?" Ramesh looked at Nisha and Kabir who give in thinking that this was in their destiny.

"Theek hai phir main jaisa kahunga tumhe waisa hi karna hoga" Ramesh said as he explained them his plan and having no other choice both of them agreed to it.

They took a cab and headed towards their house, seeing Ramesh there everyone was delighted and angry, he went to Dadaji and apologised for his mistake and also told them that he had gone to bring Nisha back as he didn't wish to go against his father and wanted to rectify his mistake. Dadaji smiled at him slightly and forgive him.

"Mujhe aaplogon ko kisi aur se bhi milana hai" he called Kabir ahead and introduced him to everyone

"Yeh Kabir has Vasu ka beta, mujhe kuch dino pehle Vasu ka phone aaya tha ki uska beta Jaipur aa raha hai, aur vo chahti hai ki Nisha aur Kabir ki shadi ho jaye" he concluded and looked at everyone's expressions trying to read them.

There was silence everywhere and Nisha was hell scared, so was Kabir, after a few minutes Dadaji gave them a big smile and said

"Vasu ka phone abhi aaya tha, ussne bataya hume ki Kabir ne use kaha hai ki vo Nisha se mil chukka hai, aur usse Nisha pasand bhi hai, vo do din baad wapas aa rahi hai unki sagai ki rasam puri karne ke liye"

Hearing this everyone started to rejoice and celebrate, Dadaji asked Nisha to take Kabir to his room and she obeyed his order.

Once inside the room they both sat on the bed and looked at each other

"Abh?" Nisha asked as she looked at Kabir who gave her a wicked smile

"Abh shadi ki hai, nibhani toh padegi" he winked at her and she angrily hit his arm

"Yaar Nisha, tu destiny main believe karti hai?" he asked her and she nodded her head affirmatively "Toh bas yeh soch ki yehi humari destiny hai" he concluded as he placed his hand on her hand and for the first time Nisha didn't object him touching her, Kabir smiled slightly

They heard the door open and saw the entire gang of cousins there with a huge smile plastered on their faces

"Kabir, yeh mere cousins hai" Nisha introduced each of them to him one by one and they all welcomed him

"Kabir Jiju kal holi hai aap chaloge humare saath" Jwala asked excitedly and Kabir without wasting a second said yes, after chatting for a while they all retired to their rooms.

Next day after wishing the family and taking blessings from everyone the cousins left to play Holi with Kabir, once they reached there they roamed here and there, everyone got mingled with their friends and Nisha was left alone with Kabir.

"Tujhe pata hai Nisha, yeh meri pehli Holi hai" Kabir said excitedly

"Wahan kabhi Holi nahi manayi kya tune?" Nisha asked

"Koi hota hi nahi tha wahan saath main" Kabir replied sadly

"Koi baat nahi iss baar main hun na" Nisha said and he instantly smiled, she took some colour and applied on his face and Kabir did the same.

They both were giggling and laughing when suddenly Nisha stopped saying anything and just looked in one direction, Kabir followed her gaze and saw Viraj standing on the stage.

He slightly patted her shoulder and Nisha looked at him. He asked her through his eyes if she was ok and she nodded her head with a small smile on her face. He pulled her in a side hug and that very moment Viraj saw them. His blood boiled in anger, he gave a small speech and kept looking at Nisha who was busy talking to Kabir.

After a while Kabir was roaming here and there when he saw Sukku and Bunty trying to aim a water balloon at Viraj, he tried stopping them but failed as they threw it already and it accidently fell on Buaji, Viraj saw Kabir in the place and assumed him to be the culprit, Kabir too didn't try to defend himself as he knew that Sukku and Bunty would end up in trouble.

Viraj walked to him angrily but Nisha came and stood next to Kabir, adding fuel to the fire in Viraj's heart. He warned Kabir and left from there, Sukku and Bunty apologised to Kabir who forgive them easily.

"Chalo tum logon ko asli Holi khelna sikhata hun" he winked at Nisha who smiled at him as he went along with her cousins.

The music played and Kabir swayed with it...

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe mari toh bole re zamana kharabhi ho gai...

Mere aang raja jo tera rang laga toh seedhi saadhi chori sharabhi ho gai...

Soon he was joined in by Kriti and the rest of the gang except Nisha

Itna maza kyun aaraha hai, tune hawa main bhaang milaya...

Dugnaa nasah kyun cha raha hai, aankhon se meetha tune khilaya...

Ho teri malmal ki kurta gulabi ho gai...

Maanchali chal kaise nawaabi ho gai toh...

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe mari toh seedhi saadhi chori sharabhi hogai...

Jeans pehenke jo tune mara thuka toh latto padosan ki Bhabhi ho gai...

Nisha looked at them and laughed, Viraj who was seeing her was really frustrated with the fact that she was so happy without him.

Kabir came to Nisha and tried making her dance but she refused and was about to go when he caught her hand and sang...

Teri kalai hai, haaton main aai hai... maine maroda toh lagti malai hai...

He smirked and Nisha stamped his foot continuing the song further...

Mehenga padega yeh caska malai ka, upvaas karne main teri bhalai hai...

Kabir looked at her giving her an impressed look as he took her in the centre and continued...

Ho bindaaiyaa teri mehtaabi ho gai, dil ke armaanon main behisabhi ho gai toh...

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari, toh seedhi saadhi chori sharabhi ho gai...

Haa jeans pehan ke jo tune mara thumka toh latto padosan ki Bhabhi ho gai...

Seeing Nisha dance with Kabir, Viraj's anger was at its peak and he couldn't take it anymore, Kabir came to Nisha and hugged her from back

Ho, kyun no vacancy ki hoothon pe gaali hai, jab ki tere dil ka karma toh khali hai...

Nisha turned back and looked at him, she pointed her finger towards him and continued

Mujhko pata hai re kya chahta hai tu, boli bhajan teri, niyaat kawali hai...

Kabir sat on his knees placing his hand on his heart as he continued...

Zulmi yeh haazir jawabi hogai, tu toh har tale ki aaj chabbi ho gai toh...

Balam pichkari, jo tune mujhe mari toh seedhi saadhi chori sharabhi ho gai...

Jeans pehaan ke jo tune mara thumka toh latto padosan ki Bhabhi ho gai...

Haan bole re zamaana kharabhi hogai...

Kabir pulled Nisha in a hug as the song ended and that was it for Viraj, he left the place the very moment without informing everyone.

Nisha smiled as she broke the hug and thanked Kabir

"Teri khushi ke liye kuch bhi Wifey" he winked at her and pulled her in a hug which was later converted into a group hug as the cousins to came to them and Kabir asked them too to join in.

"Happy Holi.." they screamed and threw the colours in the air as they smiled looking at each other.

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star.angel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Niya such a lovely os šŸ‘
Ramesh convinced vasu 😲
Vo padosi thaay 😲
So they accepted 😳
Loved ga scene 😳
Holi was superb šŸ˜‰
Virus jealous šŸ˜†
Nibir solo cute 😳 😳 😳
Loved ittt 😃
Happy holi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wish it would have happened in the show !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os niya šŸ‘
Viraj jealous 🤣
Ramesh-vasu best friend šŸ˜†
Nibir 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os bhabhi... happy holi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res... Let me read first šŸ˜†

--Unres--

Done readingšŸ˜†
Firstly Happy Holi Niyu šŸ¤— Idk how many times I have wished you šŸ˜†
This was so cute 😳
The way Ramesh told lie to the family šŸ˜›
Viru fir se J Ho Gaya 🤣 Not negatively but actually Viraj or TSM to be precise looks very cute with anger/jealousy on his nose šŸ˜†
I loved the whole song sequence... The way you fit the lyrics accordingly... Aww it was so sweet...
Then the group hug.. It made me nostalgic.. How much I miss the show 😳
I enjoyed reading it Niyu .. A lot šŸ˜†
Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely os..
ramesh n vasu-frnds
n nibir' marriage was accepted for gud..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os šŸ‘
Loved the dance sequence superb šŸ‘šŸ¼ 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy Holi Niyu šŸ¤—
thanku fr pm
kya mast os tha
with a clean end
maza aya padhne me
and my favrt song u added
khushi double ho gai
can't stop humming
Balam pichkari šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: star.angel

Niya such a lovely os šŸ‘
Ramesh convinced vasu 😲
Vo padosi thaay 😲
So they accepted 😳
Loved ga scene 😳
Holi was superb šŸ˜‰
Virus jealous šŸ˜†
Nibir solo cute 😳 😳 😳
Loved ittt 😃
Happy holi

Thank you so much😃

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