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Viji, my dear dear sister,
First of all a tight 🤗for the dedication darling, I so adore this one and the fact that it is dedicated to me among a few well deserving others is so...so...overwhelming! Thank you so very very much!
Then, let me confess I read this five times already and will be going back for another read as soon as I finish commenting, just for the sake of soaking up my memory further with the warm sweetness of the entire text. Marvelous wording, just pure magic it is!❤️😳
So Varun Sanskar Maheshwari makes an appearance again. I love that kid, your words have made him a cute, walking portrait in my imagination, with a combination of both Swara and Sanskar's features. Then here, instead of being the lovely baby we remember him being, he is a cute kid, curious to know more about his Mother and father's love story.
The pregnant Swara and Sanskar missing her too much part was too good. He was so, moody that his family was alarmed, then the part where the lady next door noticed him entering the house and came pounding on Gadodias' door! Then Shekar about to beat the thief who entered his daughter's room, all that made such a hilarious image in my mind.
Then after all, Shekar and Shomi were love birds themselves. They do understand how desperate their children are getting. Loved them for letting Sanskar take Swara without much teasing. Poor guy had it, in the time he spent away from his precious wife.
Then Varun again, all ready to hear a bedtime story! Oh, he is one wise kid, who knows how childish his parents can get sometimes. I guess Sanskar reading in that deep, pleasant voice of his would be a sight to behold
Then the part where you said about Varun's painting talent😆 It is true, parents always consider their children to be super duper talented!
Then the past,
So this was where Toska lead. Let's keep that kiss out of the way, or else I might not be able to comment and will keep going all starry eyed and blushing☺️ It was perfect!
So Swara was finally accepted in to the Maheshwari house formally, and what a scene that was. Sanskar truly wanted to be the prince of her dreams right? Bless him, Swara is one fortunate girl. So she accepts that he is better than any dream she might have had.⭐️
I guess you know, how much I love those Sindoor, Mangalsutra scenes.😳 They leave you with a deep profound feeling about the love they share, the vows being exchanged and promises being made. I have said this before, it is always a perfect closing whenever these two are concerned. And this one here was the best you wrote on that context till now, wow! It was truly a master piece!
Then back to Varun,
His confusion about his parents having two anniversary celebrations is cleared and Swara...gosh! She wants to tell him about a third one too. Hold your horses Mrs. Maheshwari, have mercy on that poor kid! 😊
Then Varun the wise understands his parents needs space now and makes his exit. God, I love that kid more...if that is even possible! I'm sure not only the features but he has inherited his father's sharp wit as well.😃
Never enjoyed a one shot more. Love you for writing this...well I already love you loads but this is extra specially for this one shot!🤗
Saku