A Swasan FF - Forever You ( chapter 5pg 9) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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so glad that you loved it
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Chapter 5 - Baby let's dance

It was getting more and more difficult for him to control his emotions . He was getting carried away by her smile, laugh, dance in Short everything. He never felt like thus before . He was sure that this was not the sanskar who he thought him to be. Today he was different...

He slowly moved towards and held swara from back... An electric current passed away in swara.. She was not feeling in secured in his arms but a different warmth in her like never before . She turned.. Sanskar pulled swara from her waist... They were really close ... A sensation passed between them.

Sanskar was throughly mesmerized by her beauty. He slowly pushed back one of the strands of her hair behind her ears ...

They were dancing and we're getting close in every passing second ...

It was like a moonlight retreat to them... They were all wet and and their feelings were falling upon each other just like the rain...


It was difficult to control their feelings... They were going with the flow unaware of their acts and relations.. They were about to kiss each other ... They had shut their eyes and swara and sanskar were Almost ready to have their first kiss they were almost mouth to mouth . When something stroke sanskar mind and he pushed her away from him...


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San - sorry .. I'm sorry ...
Sw - it's OK ...
San- it's not OK... U r here in my responsibility.. And me ... I m sorry .. Let's go back home...
Wow.. The mechanic is here plzz ... Jaldi this Kar dijiya GA
Aurora Ghar been dijiya GA
He called Ayaan
Bhai tu Gari leke jldi se aja .. Highway mein I m waiting jldi

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Sanskar (monologue)

Yeh mein kya karne ja raha that... This is not sanskar ... Kya ho gaya hai mujhd thus is not gud... Swara to nasamj hai .. But mein about mein use kya muh dikhauga ... I have done a very wrong thing today ... I can't play with her feelings like this.. She is my friend and she should know that I will never be able to give her wat she wants I can never love anybody. ...


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Swara (monologue)

Kya Hua sanskar ko.. I know that what happened today was not right but i dint know you I m feeling happy ... Whereas I should be guilty.. For me it was something beautiful ... I know I m only here for a month but this is something I will never would like to end... I need to talk to him that he should not feel guilt .. And it's fine was a mistake .. We won't repeat this.. But thus is not the right time to talk I will talk to him tomorrow...

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These two heart unaware of there real feelings were fighting with there heartsz.. Let's see wat happens
Edited by trisha09 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
trisha,wow awesome update dear👏👏
I just loved their rain dance a lot😛😛
Pls do continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

trisha,wow awesome update dear👏👏

I just loved their rain dance a lot😛😛
Pls do continue soon😊

thanx ya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved this part trisha. Wen they both realise their feelings
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2
Wow dear...
Awesome update...
So swara made coffee for sanskar...
Aww sanskar shouted on her...
But loved there coffee date...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Part-2

Wow dear...
Awesome update...
So swara made coffee for sanskar...
Aww sanskar shouted on her...
But loved there coffee date...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm

I hv written till chap 5.. U can read them .. Thanks by the way
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-3
Wow dear...
It's awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Do continue
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Just now read all parts in a one go..
Its a Awesome story..loved it..
Update soon..nd pm me plz 😊

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