joy,hope and belief(ardhika/nesam os updated)part 1 23/12 pg 22

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I Found You



An 8-year old boy is playing in the garden with his ball..suddenly while playing his ball slips from his hand,it rolls and goes into the forest...the boy in search of the ball goes into the dark forest...he finds himself in the middle of the forest..he dint realise that in search of his favourite ball he had come a long way...soon darkness covered the sky and it started to cover the forest...the boy got scared of the darkness around him...he started to run away from that darkness,but couldn't find a way out..the darkness chased him...he looked back at the darkness,got more scared and ran as fast as he could...but the darkness caught him...he struggled hard to free himself from the darkness,but all his efforts were in vain...the darkness dragged him and took him to the darkest world...

15 years passed...

The boy had become a man...he got adapted to the darkness...the darkness was his life...but one day far away he saw a small ray of light through the forest...it took his interest..he wanted to know what it was..so he decided to go near that light to find what it is...but each time he tried to go the darkness stopped him and said that its ur imagination, a lie and m the truth..but his desire grew...he wanted to know what that was ..he wanted to catch it,feel it...he neglected all the things said by darkness and went to see what that was...he went near that ray of light...but was scared to touch it...he thought 'what vil happen to me if i touch it'...but he let go of all the fear and finally put his hand in that light..nothing happened to him...he smiled a bit..then after a lot of hesitation he stood in front of that light...he could feel the light ,the warmth...with this he closed his eyes in joy...

The man woke...it was his dream...he looked beside him...his hand was held tightly by the person (his better half)who slept next to him...he looked at her lovingly,he caressed her hair for a while..

Soon the girl sensed something in her sleep and she too woke up...she looked at him...

"Arjun u r awake...what happened?..did u see a bad dream again"asked radhika his wife..

"No..It was a good dream..I found happiness in the end..so it was a good dream" said arjun

Radhika confused asked "what did u find in the end?"

Arjun replied "you,I found u.."

Radhika in a sweet voice "arjun"

Radhika smiled and asked him to sleep..arjun nodded and lay down on bed..

He looked at her and smiled..he held her hand tightly and slept...


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really nice...a very nice one shot...

if possible write more one shots, its easy to read...n we knw d start n end easily..n we vl get more stories...


thanks...
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Thanks @artee,lavanya...

Wil try to write such one shot stories..I jus thought about it y day while we wer discussing about light and dark in AT..
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Fantastic short story!!!

me like very much! 👏
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battu.
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loved it Rose,...
Really Awesome OS dear,...

Please continue posting such OS dear,...

& i like ur FF too,...u,me n bonzo,...
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Thank u renu and battu...

Renu vil try to write such os...m happy u liked u,me and bonzo..
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awh it was beautifulll.. :) you need to write more stories!!
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Wow what a wonderful story,it was so awesome,pls do keep writing a lot.
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@ niki,huma and rerose...thnk u guys..

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