joy,hope and belief(ardhika/nesam os updated)part 1 23/12 pg 22

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rosel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

@gardenteddy,rainbowpearls and mysticriver thnk you...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

it was really good n a bit emotional.u made me cry. plz update d next part soon .i m waiting wen dey will meet.

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rosel

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thnk you shruthi...the meeting and confession vil be same as the mmz last episode..i might add some extra lines...i vil update the next/last part soon...most probably on friday...

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lovv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

its nice...

i liked d way, they both question-answered d letter radhika left...

i liked d memories part...

nice OS...

Edited by lovv - 10 years ago

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rosel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Love is not doing great things ,instead it is about small things you do..a cup of coffee,a rose,an "I love you",a "thank you" is what they crave for..

SAY

After taking off the blanket off night,the sun starts rising from top of the mountain,the wind blows carrying the last traces of cold night,shimmering dew drops on grass,countless flower buds starts blossoming,the birds tweet each other and welcome a new day...

Arjun is driving along with sam to hrisikesh...he remembers radhika..

"sir,this song(showing a CD) is my favourite,will you listen.."

Arjun smiles and turns on the FM...

Soona soona mann ka aangan
Dhunde payal ki who chann chann
Sooni sooni mann ki sargam
Dhunde geet tere humdum

The sun gleams through the window,a ray of light falls on radhika's face disturbing her sleep..she finally opens her eyes and tries to adjust her eyes to the brigtness..and finally she gets up..she gets up to find the emptiness in her life,2 weeks had passed but arjun's memories dint fade away..she got used to this lonely life..but today her heart was at peace..
She stands up from her bed,goes near the window and opens it..the cool wind blows around her , it sang a new song...she hears the birds chirping,they said her heart about someone's arrival..her heart felt a wave like feeling..the feeling was not the same which she felt since past 2 weeks..it was new..she stood there calmly for few minutes...

Mann mein shyaam ho ya sawera
Laga teri yaadon ka dera
Tune bandhan kyon ye toda
Tune kahe ko mu moda
Kaho na kaho na
Kaho na

Arjun is driving along with sam,his longing was comin to an end today..2 weeks of emptiness was comin to an end..everything seemed new to him..but there was a little hesitation in his eyes..all the moments with radhika flash infront of him..finally his searching was over...

Radhika gets ready and comes downstairs...dilip and ankush had left for work..mala and dadaji wer sitting on sofa and were having a conversation..radhika comes near them..

Radhika:ma..i want to go out..can i?

Mala hesitates a bit and thinks for a while..

Dadaji:let her go mala,she would feel better if she goes out and gets some fresh air..

Mala(after some hesitation):okay go..but come back before evening..

Radhika smiles gently and leaves...

She comes out,takes an auto...after few minutes of ride she reaches gurdwara..she gets down from the auto,pays him and goes in..she covers her heard with dupatta,removes her slippers and places it at the shoe rack,washes her feet and hands and enters the main hall..she bows down to guru granth sahib,touching the floor with her forehead..she in a low voice prays "give me the strength to face reality"..she sits there for a while..she feels calm and peaceful..

Phool phool bhawara dole
Mann main goonje teri yaad

After some hours she leaves from there,takes an auto..while nearing the bridge look out,she asks the auto driver to stop,pays him and goes near it..she looks at the sea..she remembers all those moments spent with arjun,arjun's voice echoes around her..she closes her eyes and lets all arjun's memories flow..

Baagh main papiha bole
Pihu pihu piyu kaha

Arjun reaches hrishikesh,he sees a board "welcome to hrisikesh"..he sees it,smiles and remembers radhika...
Radhika strongly feels arjun's presence,her heart becomes restless,she opens her eyes,a tear escapes her eye...
In a heavy and breathless tone she wisphers "SIR" she sighs,wipes her tears and walks back home...

Kaise thame phir tera daaman?
Kaise meheke mann ka ye aangan?
Kaise bhoole preet teri saajan?
kaise bandhe tota ye bandhan?
Kaho na kaho na
Kaho na

Arjun is driving on the roads..he looks at gurdwara and stops the
car..sam who was sleeping gets awakened..she rubs her eyes and looks around..

Sam:what happened arjun?y did u stop here..

Arjun looks at gurdwara,sam sees him lookin at gurdwara..she smiles..

Arjun:sam..i will be back in few minutes..
Sam nods in agreement..and says him to go,while she sits in the car...

He gets down from the SUV,goes towards the gurdwara...as he goes inside,he feels radhika presence,he sees her walking beside him with her head covered with duppatta,she smiles at him,arjun too smiles at her..when he tries to hold her hand..she disappears..he gets sad and walks forward...he takes his kerchief and covers his head..removes his shoes,washes his hands and feet and goes inside..enters the main hall,he bows down to guru granth sahib,touching the floor with her forehead..sits there..

After some minutes,in low voice prays and says "give me the strength and courage to face radhika today.."

He sits there for some minutes,takes the Prasad and leaves..

After some minutes of drive,he reaches the bridge parks his SUV there,as he gets down he gets radhika's scent,he feels her presence there..slowly he walks towards the bridge and stands there..
Sam comes towards him and stands beside him..

"will radhika forgive us" arjun asked lookin at sam

"how many times will you ask this question,arjun..yes she will forgive us.."replied sam with a sweet smile,but from within sam too was sad and felt guilty..she remembers her conversation with neil..

(sam is packing her bag to leave for hrishikesh,she looks guilty and tensed..neil sees her sad..

Neil(gentle smile):what happened..u still worried about..

Sam(worried):I don't know how I will face her..what I did to her was very wrong..

Neil(smile):u still don't know our chashni,the moment she sees you,she will hug u..

Sam:neil...will she forgive me..

Neil:she will...she is our chashni..dont worry...she will forgive you..)

Sam smiles and looks at the sea..

While arjun was standing there a myriad of emotions flooded him..he was happy that he was finally meeting radhika,but sad cos of the pain he caused her..his mind flooded with a lot of questions,

"how will I face her?
How will she react?
Will she forgive me?
Will I be able to mend our relation?"

Arjun and sam stood there for few minutes..arjun takes his phone and calls dadaji..
After talking to dadaji,he takes sam along and drive to radhika's house..

Radhika's house:

Mala(worried):y should I not worry papaji..firstly you have called them without even informing choti..and now we don't know whether radhika will agree or not..

Radhika(puzzled):for what will I say no ma..

Dadaji and mala get tensed and worried seeing radhika,dadji tries to make an excuse..

Dadaji(worried):ahh..actually..your mom was worried about cleaning my ears,she was telling that dilip has gone out,my ear is not clean,so m having some problem in hearing,so I said her that wen choti will come she will clean my ears..

He shows her an ear bud and asks "will you do,will you clean"..

Radhika who knows dadaji's tactics,realizes that he is lying and looks at mala..

Radhika:tell me mom..for what you are worrying about..

Mala(hesitant):Choti.someone is coming to see you today..

Phool phool bhawara dole
Mann main goonje teri yaad
Baagh main papiha bole
Pihu pihu piyu kaha

Its night,

Radhika's room,

Radhika(impatient):I don't want to get married ma..i don't want to see anyone

Mala:choti..someday you have to settle down,built your own home..

Radhika:a home made of love ma..it cant be made by brick or rock..please you go from here ma and tell them that I don't want to meet them..

Mala(stubborn):when they will come,you tell them yourself..if you are stubborn,m your mother..

Baagh main papiha bole
Pihu pihu piyu kaha

Arjun reaches radhika's house...he gets down from his SUV..looks at her house..his legs begin to tremble as he takes each step towards her house..he reaches the door and after lot of hesitation he rings the bell...

Door bell rings,mala and radhika both hear the door bell,

Mala:they have come,now silently come down..

Mala leaves the room...

Radhika:I wont come ma..i cant love someone else..

Radhika gets upset and remembers all those moments spent with arjun...she closes her eyes and arjun's memory starts flooding...

Mala opens the door and welcomes arjun and sam...he enters their house..

Baagh main papiha bole
Pihu pihu piyu kaha

Breeze flows around her room ,it scatters the papers around the room,radhika opens her eyes..she looks at the room,bends down and starts picking the papers that wer blown by the breeze..

Arjun touches mala and dadaji's feet and greets them...arjun's eyes are impatiently searching for radhika..dadaji sees him searching for radhika..

"Arjun,you might have stopped your legs from moving but you cant stop your eyes from searching..go arjun radhika is upstairs.." dadaji says with a warm smile

"yes arjun,first go and meet her,then you can talk to us" mala said with a smile
Arjun blushes a bit ,looks at them and leaves..his heartbeat increases as he takes each and every step..finally he reaches her room..he stands outside her room..after calming himself he goes inside her room..

Arjun enters the room and looks at radhika..he stood there for a while..he finally saw her..

(khwaaishon pe likhi music plays)

Radhika who is picking up the papers blown by the breeze,senses someone..she thinks that its mala..

Radhika(deep sad tone): ma I wont come..please go from here..i don't want to meet anyone,please leave me in my own state..

Arjun looks at radhika longingly,he smiles and slowly walks towards her..

Khwaaishon pe likhi dil ki yeh arziyaan,kaisi yeh manmarziyaan
Daastan ek nayi khwaabon pe saji,bekaid manmarziyaan

Caught in a myriad of emotions running through him,He slowly walks towards radhika,his wait was over,he looked at her with longing eyes..all he wanted was to hug radhika..he wanted to hug her...
He keeps his head against her,radhika feels his presence and closes her eyes,her heart beats faster...he keeps his hands on her shoulders...the papers in radhika's hand slowly slips and falls...he ran his down her arms,taking hers as he leaned his head and touch hers..he crossed her arms and embraced her.

Daastan ikk nayeee...
Nafraton mein milli tu mujhe iss tarah,dil yeh samabal na saka
Teri baton mein hai aajab sa nasha,badli yeh manmarziyaan..

He hugged her from behind,locked her in his arms gently..he leaned forward and inhaled the smell of her hair,caressed her hair and slowly with his fingers tucked her hair behind...radhika eyes still closed,she was scared to open her eyes,whatif it was a dream again.. ..slowly his face came down such that his lips wer almost grazing her ears

"your life is like these blank papers Radhika,you are incomplete without ink of love..." arjun slowly whispered

Radhika slowly raised her eyes,after few seconds turns and looks at arjun in disbelief...arjun smiles looking at her..

Daastan ikk nayeee...

Radhika looks puzzled,it was real,arjun was standing infront of her..he sees her mangalsutra and sindoor and smiles..

"y don't you get married?" arjun calmly asked

Radhika comes out of her trance..she looks down and replies..

"ahh...sir..that's what I was thinking...someone is coming to see me today" replied radhika with hesitation

"and you wer goin like this..with someone else signs" asked arjun

Radhika stammers and replied "I was goin to remove it sir"

"remove..remove and give it to me" said arjun,he smiles and is about to remove it..

Radhika holds her mangalsutra and turns..she gets sad..

"sir..why have you come here" asked radhika in painful voice..

"I have come to take what's mine" replied arjun

Radhika gets teary eyed,tears choked her voice,she in a deep tone says
"sir,you will get a lot of mangalsutra in Mumbai,please you go from here.."

Arjun looks at her..holds her arm gently and moves her..he looks at her tear-stricken and childlike face..he loved her childlike innocence,

"I will return everything that is your's and then I will leave" said arjun softly

"I have brought everything with me,sir...there's nothing.." says radhika..

As she says "there's nothing" arjun holds her face and wipes her tears and says "you still cant lie properly"..

He looks at her,cups her face,wipes her tears..

Arjun in a deep tormented voice says "if you have brought everything with you here,then y do you make me feel your presence everywhere?..y do you come my memories and disturb me?y did you leave your smile with me and brought only your tears along with you?y does my every breath has your scent?

Arjun's voice gets deep,he holds her face tightly..he keeps his forehead touching hers..his fingers around her hair..radhika too feels the pain in his voice,she feels sad..

Arjun continues in a broken deep voice "y does my every talk has your mention?y does my every moment is to have you..y?..he is almost breathless

Radhika looks at him with teary eyes and in a brittle voice says "sir"
Arjun reaches his breaking point and finally confesses to her..

"I love you radhika"

Daastan ikk nayeee...

Radhika lifts her eyes and looks at him..arjun still cupping her face...in that moment there was no pretense between them.. there was no denial,no escape..it was final and complete..

"you left me,but I couldn't leave you" said arjun lovingly...

"but sam loves you" said radhika..

Arjun sweetly smiles and says "sam doesn't love me"

Puzzled radhika asks "then?"

He smiles and says "where samindhar singh,her his idiot..."

Hall area:

Mala,dadaji and sam are having light hearted conversation along with some snacks..neil enters with lots of luggage..

"her trolly broke somewere,not fair...you have made me a coolie..arjun
went to his chashni and here you are having chappan bhog..do u have any feeling of pati dharm..." said neil in a tired voice

Sam nods in disagreement...neil adds "husband is working here and wife is having fun.."

Sam goes near dadaji and asks "the choice is good na,he talks a lot..it vil be fine soon.."

Dadaji teases neil,sam,dadaji and mala have good laugh...

Dadaji says "the love in which friendship remains,that love is special.."

Neil and sam say "wah wah"

Mala gets up and says "I will go and call choti",but sam stops her and
says "even god should not come inbetween husband and wife..correct
dadaji.."

Neil and sam look at each other...

Radhika's room:

"Neil.." said radhika surprisingly..

Arjun says "yes neil.." and nods in agreement..he further adds "nobody knows,wen,with whom and how we fall in love...now look at me itself.."

Arjun loked deep into her eyes and saw that they mirrored the same feelings he had,radhika too looked at him and his eyes told her a story,story of longing, loneliness and love..

Arjun looks at radhika lovingly,caress her hair and says "fell in with the stone of my path..gave my heart to a panauti..dreamt of spending my whole life with the peanuts...

Khwaaishon pe likhi dil ki yeh arziyaan,kaisi yeh manmarziyaan
Daastan ek nayi khwaabon pe saji,bekaid manmarziyaan

He cups her face...

"Sir" radhika said in a soft voice..

Arjun brings her face close to his and leans a bit forward and he slowly and tenderly kissed her forehead..

"arjun" he said...

Then gently planted a soft kiss on each eyes...

"arjun" he repeated softly

He leans forward and holds radhika close...

"sir" radhika said in low voice

"arjun" he repeated again breathlessly

"sir"she said softly

Arjun leans a bit closer,he breathes heavily..

"Arjun" uttered radhika softly...

Finally she said his name...she finally said what arjun wanted to hear from so long...as arjun hears his name,he took radhika in a warm embrace..
Arjun tightly hugged radhika,radhika too hugged him..

Daastan ikk nayeee...
After a while,they pull themselves apart,radhika feels a bit shy..and arjun smiles seeing radhika..arjun feels something in his eyes,he rubs his eyes..radhika who sees him rubbing his eyes asks..

"Kya hua...si...(after pause)..arjun" asked radhika sweetly

Arjun smiles and remembers the previous incident when she asked him "wat happened"..he smiles gently..

"Tum hui...Radhika..Tum.." replied arjun..

They hear mala calling choti..

"lets go down" says arjun...

They both go down...sam sees radhika and feels guilty..radhika looks at sam,she smiles..goes towards sam and hugs her..sam hesitates abit,but she too hugs her back..radhika looks at neil and hugs him..

Sam after some hesitation asks "can we talk,radhika"

Radhika smiling says "yes..y are you asking me this.."

Radhika takes sam to her room,they have a light hearted converasation..

"radhika,m sorry..watever i.." said sam..radhika stops her midway and says "there's no need to apologise...we are friends na...in friendship no sorry,no thanks.."

Radhika smiles,sam too smiles a bit..

"but still.." said sam

Radhika asks her to leave it...the two girls have a sweet talk..

Dilip,ankush had come back home..the mens have a little conversation,while mala is cookin in the kitchen..

After a while,radhika and sam come down...they all sit at the dinning table and have dinner...

Radhika and arjun look at each other lovingly...

The moon shinned brightly in the dark sky...stars blossomed in the sky..cool breeze blew swiftly...it was calm and peaceful..

Arjun is standing at the rooftop lookin at the moon..his heart was at peace...he got what he longed for all these years..radhika slowly walks towards him..she comes and stands beside him..arjun looks at radhika lovingly and smiles..radhika sweetly smiles back at him,she wraps her hand around his arm and rests her head on his shoulder..arjun looks at radhika lovingly and kisses her forehead,he rests his head upon hers...
Both look at the moon..

(Voiceover:There's never a time or place for true love..it happens accidently,in a heartbeat,in a single flashing,throbbing moment...)

Daastan ikk nayeee...

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Edited by -rosel- - 10 years ago

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lovv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

i havnt read it completely yet...half completed...got work...bt i wanted to comment ...so...

bt i knw i am gng to like it for sure...few lines of dat song n d intro z enough...

...k completed...

really nice...

i really liked dadaji's dialogs abt legs n eyes dialog for arjun, n friedship n love dialog for neil...

he z awesome dadaji...

really in d show i didnt like d ear cleaning...they could hav given some other fun moement...

i knw at dat time, dadaji's intension was he z not hearing wat radhika z asking type of fun answer...

nice lyrics...

really nice...

Edited by lovv - 10 years ago

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rosel

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: lovv
i havnt read it completely yet...half completed...got work...bt i wanted to comment ...so...

bt i knw i am gng to like it for sure...few lines of dat song n d intro z enough...

...k completed...

really nice...

i really liked dadaji's dialogs abt legs n eyes dialog for arjun, n friedship n love dialog for neil...

he z awesome dadaji...

really in d show i didnt like d ear cleaning...they could hav given some other fun moement...

i knw at dat time, dadaji's intension was he z not hearing wat radhika z asking type of fun answer...

nice lyrics...

really nice...

thnks avni...m happy u liked it..

Dadaji is awesome as always..

The song selection was of esprit...

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rosel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Thnk u all for likes and comments...

The OS Say is companion to OS sehsucht...
i would like to thnk esprit..the song soona soona was her suggestion...hope you all like this OS too...
if u like pls leave ur feedback...
Pls excuse if ther's spelling mistake or grammatical error...