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Posted: 9 years ago

Always And Forever

Part 1


The stars dim around,the night fades out,the the darkness deepens..the night welcomes the dawn..

Arjun's house:

Arjun wakes up and looks at his phone...it was 3:45 am..he turns and looks at radhika peacefully sleeping next to him and smiles...

He slowly gets up from the bed,walks up to the cupboard and opens it slowly without makin any noise...he turns around and looks at radhika...he takes his shirt,pant and towel and goes to the bathroom...

The table clock hits 4 and it starts to ring...radhika hears the alarm and opens her eyes..she hurriedly gets up, takes the alarm and tries to turn it off...

"Shhh..shh..arjun will wake up.." said radhika in a sleepy voice juggling the clock in her hand..

She finally turns it off and looks beside her..but doesnt find arjun on the bed...
She wonders where arjun is...

Just then arjun comes out of the bathroom rubbing his wet hair with towel...he sees radhika and says "good morning,radhika..." with a smile..

Radhika thinks that its her imagination...she rubs her eyes and again looks him..arjun was standing infront of her...

Radhika looks at him astonished and said "good morning.."

Arjun never woke up before 6 am...radhika usually struggled to wake him up...but today he was fresh and dressed in cement coloured cotton shirt and black pant...

Radhika begins to wonder how come he woke up before the arrival of golden ball..she thinks hard on what the reason could be..

"dont think too much...get up and get ready soon..." said arjun lookin at radhika...

Radhika gets up from the bed,takes a baby pink and white coloured salwar and goes to the bathroom...

As soon as radhika gets inside bathroom,arjun takes his tab and goes to kitchen...

Radhika while brushing her teeth begins to think y arjun got up so early...

On the oher hand arjun took his tab and typed "how to make kheer" in the google search..it shows some results..arjun clicks on some website..it shows the procedure to make kheer...he starts preparing it..

At 4:30,Radhika comes out of the bathroom and looks around..she hears some noise coming from the kitchen and goes there..she sees arjun arrangin the fruits,sweets on the plate...she sees a bowl of kheer and some parathas on the plate..she gets astonished..

Arjun turns and looks at radhika who is looking at the food items...

"You are ready...come lets do the pooja first.." said arjun

Arjun's voice makes her to come out of her trance...

"Huh..." said radhika...

"Come...lets do the pooja first..." said arjun..he takes her hand and walks up to he mandir...

Radhika after arranging the pooja thaal,does the pooja...

After the pooja...arjun takes radhika's hamd and walks up to the dinning table..he makes her sit on the chair..he goes to the kitchen and takes the kheer,parathas,sweets and fruits and places it on the table...he sits next to her..

"Eat..." said arjun..

"Arjun...i cant eat..." replied radhika

"Y..." asked arjun..

"Arjun..today is karva chauth...nd m fasting..." said radhika...

"I know today is karva chauth and i also know that you are goin to keep a fast...but before that eat somethin.." said arjun..

"Its your sargi...eat it..." arjun added..

" sargi...!" Said radhika..

"Yes...your sargi...now eat it before sunrise..." said arjun..

"Arjun...but..sargi is..." said radhika

But arjun stops her midway and says "first eat...we can talk later..."..he takes a barfi and goes to feed her..

Radhika looks at him lovingly...she takes a barfi from his hand and feeds him first...

"First..you eat..." said radhika..

Radhika then begins to eat paratha,kheer and other sweets...arjun too eats the parthas and sweets...

Arjun takes a glass of water and gives it to radhika...radhika takes the glass and drinks water...

Neil's house:

Neil dressed in royal blue shirt and black pant stands beside their bed with a toy trumpet in his hand...as the clock hits 4..he blows it and wakes sam up..sam after listening to the sound gets up hurriedly..she looks at neil angrily...

"Get up...get up..." said neil with a smile...he gives the towel and dress to sam and asks her to get ready fast...after 30 minutes sam comes outside the bathroom dressed in a sky blue color top and black jean...

Neil looks at her and smiles...he takes sam along walks up to the hall...prerna waits there with the sargi...sam hugs prerna...prerna gives the sargi thaal to sam and asks her to have it before sunrise...

Sam takes the thaali and starts eating..neil takes some sweets from her plate and eats it...

At the crack of dawn,the sun peeps out makin the earth warm...the first rays falls on the earth..

Arjun's house:

Arjun and radhika are sitting on the sofa...

"How did you know about sargi..." asked radhika curiously..

"Google..." said arjun with a smile..

Radhika doesnt say anything further...she wanted to say that sargi is given by mother in law but she stopped herself...she knew that talkin about his mother will make arjun sad..so choose not to ask anything...

Arjun and radhika had a conversation about karva chauth before 2 days when mala called radhika to tell about karva chauth...mala had called radhika to come to hrishikesh for karva chauth...but due to some work arjun and radhika couldnt go..and mishra family also couldnt make it to mumbai as their shop was under renovation...but mala had instructed radhika about what to do on karva chauth...
Yesterday night too mala called radhika to remind about karva chauth..

Radhika feels a bit low..this was the first time that she was away from her family on some occassion...arjun sees her upset and tries to deviate her...

"So...what is the story of karva chauth..." asked arjun...

Arjun knew the story of karva chauth..he googled about karva chauth...but still he wanted to hear the story from radhika...and radhika knew this...she knew that arjun wanted to hear the story from her..

"So...you dont know the story..." asked radhika

Arjun innocently nods in dissagreement...

"There are a lot stories on karva chauth..there is story of karva,story of draupadi,story of veeravati..." said radhika

"And there is story of satyavan and savitri.." said radhika looking at arjun wih a smile...

They both remember the day when radhika refused to sit in his car and walked on the road...

Both smile...

"But its mainly about veeravati..." said radhika

Radhika starts narrating the story and arjun listens to her...

Neil's house:

Sam asks prerna about karva chauth's importance..

Prerna looks at her caresses her hair and says "karva chauth is kept for husband's long life,his safety and to get him as husband for next seven births.."

Prerna's gets teary eyed as she remember's mr.malhotra...

"Oh...god...i have to bear you for next seven birth" said neil lookin at sam...

Prerna hears this and she smiles...prerna holds neil's ears and asks neil to stoo teasing sam...

"Leave my ear ma..." said neil..

They have some light conversation...

After some minutes neil and sam leave for work..

Arjun's house:

As radhika finishes her story...mala calls her...

She sees that its mala and happily takes he phone...

Arjun and radhika talk to mala and other mishra members...

After some minutes they both leave for work...

Bird Song:

All four reach bird song...arjun and neil are in their cabin workin...radhika and sam are in office canteen having some conversation...

Sam and radhika both look at the people around them having some coffee and sweet...

"Strawberry cake..." said sam lookin at the cake kept inside the glass fridge...

"Cold coffee.." said radhika

They both hear what other said...they both look at each other

"If we sit here for some more time we might end up eating something..." said sam

"Yes...lets leave from here..." said radhika

They both leave from there...

Arjun is workin on his lap,when neil comes inside his cabin to discuss something...

Neil comes in and sits on the chair..as he is about to say something,the peon comes there with a coffee cup...

Arjun looks at him and says "i dont...",but he stops,looks at neil and asks the peon to keep the cup...

"Keep the cup on table..." satmmered arjun..

Neil looks at arjun suspiciously...

After keepin the cup,the peon leaves...

"Neil...wat wer you sayin..." asked arjun

Neil starts speaking...he tells about an ad...he continuously looks at arjun and the coffee cup...arjun dint even touch the cup..arjun listens to what neil was saying and at the same time in between worked on lap..

Neil while talkin about the ad asks "have you kept fast..."

"Yes..." said arjun...

Arjun probably dint know that question coming...he realised what he said...

Neil chuckled and started teasing arjun..

"Ahh..hmm...no..no..i said yes for something else..." stammered arjun

Arjun calms himself..

"Sam said that you too have kept fast..." asked arjun

Neil's smile fades...he looks at arjun with eyes wide open...

Now it was neil's turn to stammer..

"Hmm..yes..." said neil

Arjun laughs and says "so you have really kept the fast..i just asked randomly..so u have kept the fast..."

Neil frowned..

Both men had kept fast for their love..

Sam is sitting at her desk,when piyali comes to her and asks her if she kept the fast..sam nods in agrerment..sam and piyali have some chat...

Its afternoon...

All staff memebers gather around the reception area..sam,arjun,neil and radhika come there...all look at them..

"Okay..today the office hours will be upto 3 pm only..after that you all can go home.." said arjun smiling..

All staff memebers become happy...

After 3 pm all staff leave for home...

Arjun and radhika reach their home,neil and sam too reach their home...


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Okay..this part is kinda weak...if i hurt any religious sentiment by this part i apologise...i had to google certain things...watched some serials but none showed karva chauth properly...part 2 will be updated tmr...
Edited by -rosel- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
really nice...want to read its continuation...

really nice to see arjun dng all dat...n y did radhika didnt find arjun also kept fast...or she knows...

i really liked arjun-neil interaction...



so waiting for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's nice :)

And same goes for my FF... I had to google all the religious stuff and even about Rishikesh because I didn't know about it.
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it's beautiful.plz update soon
Edited by aartee22 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovv

really nice...want to read its continuation...

really nice to see arjun dng all dat...n y did radhika didnt find arjun also kept fast...or she knows...

i really liked arjun-neil interaction...



so waiting for next part...

thnx avni..radhika knows that arjun had kept the fast..

Originally posted by: jey3ram

nice update rose,...

thnx renu..:)

Originally posted by: aartee22

it's beautiful.plz update soon

thnx artee..:)..will update it now
thnx ramya..:)


Edited by -rosel- - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: esprit_00

It's nice :)

And same goes for my FF... I had to google all the religious stuff and even about Rishikesh because I didn't know about it.

thnx esprit..:)..you really took extra efforts..hats off for that..i thought that you knew about hrishikesh..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Always And Forever

Part 2


The sun shone its last rays makin the earth to shine..

Arjun's house:

Arjun and radhika are decorating the house with some fairy lights and flowers..

Standing on the step stool radhika was trying to hang the door garland made of marigold over their bedroom door...arjun sees her trying hard to hang it..he smiles and walks up to her...

Arjun slightly shakes the step stool,radhika unable to keep the balance ,falls..
But before radhika falls arjun catches her...
Radhika who had closed her eyes while falling,slowly opens her eyes to find arjun holding her in his arms..she slightly blushed..

"Arjun..." whispered radhika

"Arjun..put me down" said radhika shyly..

"No..i wont.." said arjun sweetly..

Door bell rings disturbing them...arjun and radhika hear the door bell..

Arjun slowly puts radhika down,he smiles..both wonder who could it be at this time..

Arjun goes to open the door,while radhika again tries to hang the garland..arjun opens the door an finds a courier boy standin outside..the courier boy hands over the parcel to him,takes his signature and goes...

Arjun comes inside with the parcel..he sees the name and smiles..it was from radhika's house..

Radhika too comes there..

"Parcel...from where.." asked radhika lookin at the parcel

Arjun smiles and says that its from hrishikesh..radhika smiles and takes the parcel...they both sit on the sofa and open it..
It had two large boxes..in one there was a maroon color saree and in another it was a faded golden color sherwani..they both smile lookin at the gift sent by radhika's family..

Arjun takes his phone out and calls mala..

Mala picks up the call..

"Hello..ma.." said arjun..

"Arjun beta..." said mala..

"Ma..this saree,sherwani..y.." said arjun

Mala interrupted him and said that it was their duty,she asked him to wear it today..

Arjun and mala have some sweet conversation,he then gives the phone to radhika..

Radhika takes the phone and talks to all her family members..

Neil's house:

Sam is decorating the mandir...neil looks at her lovingly..he picks a flower from the marigold garland and throws at her..

The flower hits sam..she turns and looks at neil,but she doesnt say anything and starts decorating the mandir..

Neil again takes a flower and throws at sam,sam looks at him angrily,but she doesnt say anything...she continues her work..

Neil again takes a flower and throws at sam..sam turns and holds the flower this time..she throws that back at neil..the flower hits neil..as neil takes another flower..

"Ma...neil is disturbing me.." said sam in a loud voice..

Neil hears sam calling her ma and runs away from there..

Sun sank lower in the sky,light of day drained away,giving way to dark of night...

Arjun's house:

Arjun wore the golden jamavar sherwani and red dhoti pants sent by radhika's family,he sat on the sofa waiting for radhika..

Arjun looked like a groom,he looked dashing in that sherwani..

Arjun restlessly waits for radhika...

"Arjun..arjun.."

Arjun hears radhika's voice...he thinks that its his imagination and sits on the sofa

"Arjun..arjun" radhika again called..

Arjun hears his name..it was radhika who was calling him..he looks at the watch..it was 6:15..
He wonders how come radhika dressed so quickly..

"She went inside at 6,within 15 minutes she is ready.." said arjun..

"Arjun..please come here.." said radhika

Arjun slowly walks towards their bedroom,he opens the door and goes inside...he closes the door and walks in...

Arjun looks at radhika through the divider...she still dint wear the saree..

Radhika looked at arjun and blushed..

"Arjun...can u please release the dori beads from the divider.." said radhika shyly..

Radhika's dori was again stuck in the divider..and since she couldnt release them,she called arjun..

Arjun looks at her,he remembers the day when he tied her dori..things where different now...

Arjun laughs,he goes towards the bed and sits on it...

Radhika looks at him sitting on the bed and again asks him to release her beads..

Arjun looks at her,thinks for some seconds..

"I will release the beads,but only if you say sorry" said arjun mischieviously

"Sorry..y..." asked radhika curiously

"Sorry...for troubling me all these days..." said arjun

"Say sorry..." arjun added

"No..i wont...i dint trouble you..it is you who trouble me...i wont say sorry..." said radhika childishly

Arjun gets up,"okay..toh wahi atki raho...m goin" said arjun..he was about to go..he acts like he was about to go..

"No..no..wait.." said radhika innocently..

Arjun stops and turns around..

"Okay..sorry..." said radhika..

"What...what did you say i dint hear you.." said arjun smiling mishieviously..

Radhika frowns and says "m sorry..arjun.." in a loud voice..

Arjun hears her sorry..he smiles..radhika too remembers that dori night and smiles..

Arjun slowly walks upto the divider and he slowly releases the beads..as the beads are released radhika holds the dori and tries to tie it..

Arjun looks at her through the divider..he looks at her struggling to tie the dori..he slowly walks towards radhika..his breathing increases as he takes each step towards her...

He stepped closer,he was only an inch away..he stared at her,his heart beat raced..he holds the dori strings..

Radhika moves her hands away from the dori...she took a deep breath..

Arjun held the dori strings in one hand,with his other hand he slowly moved radhika hair to one side and softly placed it on her shoulder...

Radhika's breathing hitched,as she felt a faint tickling at her back..she clutched onto the skirt tightly..

Arjun's hand brushed her bare back as he tied the dori...all the while while tying her dori he constantly stared at her..,he stepped a bit closer..arjun stood there frozen..arjun was breathing heavily..

Radhika was blushing,her cheeks turned red..she felt him very close to her..radhika too was breathing like him..her heart too was beating rapidly like his..

Arjun moved a bit closer,now there was no gap between them..radhika senses his closeness..she closes her eyes,turns and hugs him tightly..she wrapped her arms around his waist tightly..she buried her face in his chest..
She could hear his heartbeat..it was beating like hers..it was for..she could feel his warm breath..she tightened her hold..

Arjun too hugs her back tightly..he could feel her warm breath...he holds her tightly..

After a while radhika calms herself,she slowly pulls herself back...arjun loosens his grip..they pull themselves apart..radhika turns and faces the wall..arjun slowly walks upto the bed and takes the saree and goes near her...

Radhika turns and takes the saree from his hand..she pushes him and asks him to go out..

Arjun stands there stubornly and doesnt go...radhika later pushes him and makes him go out..

"Let me help you..." said arjun naughtly

"No...i can wear it myself..you go..." said radhika innocently..

She struggles to move him..finally she makes him go out and closes the door...arjun leans on the door..he frowns and later walks towardd sofa and sits there..

Neil's house:

Sam wearing a golden and red colour lehenga is sitting on the mirror table...
Neil leaning on the wall looks at her and smiles..

Sam looks at him through the mirror and raises both her eyesbrows and asks what in a silent way..neil nods and says "nothing.."

Sam starts wearing the jewellery...neil still looks at her..he was admiring her..she was getting ready for him..he lovingly looks at her..

Sam finishes her make up,she turns and looks at neil..neil looks at her,takes a deep breath and walks away from there..sam looks puzzled..

After some minutes,he comes back with his camera..sam smiles seeing him..he goes and sits on the mirror table..he takes his camera and is about to take a photo but stops..

"What.." asked sam..

"Something is missing..." said neil..

He looks at her carefully..he then takes a light red colour lipstick and applies it on her lips with his finger...sam looks at him lovingly..
Neil wipes his finger in a towel and looks at her..

He takes his camera,but again stops..he takes some kajol and puts a tikka behind her ear...

"Tumhe mere camera ki nazar na lage..." said neil

Sam smiles and slightly blushes..she lightly pats on his arms...neil too smiles...

He takes his camera and finally takes the photo...

Sam then asks neil to get ready...neil nods and goes to get ready...

The dark clouds conquer the sky...the stars start to blossom..

Arjun's house:

Arjun sits on the sofa,he hears the sound of opening door...he stands up and looks in the direction of their bedroom...

Radhika comes out of their bedroom...his breathing hitched as he saw her coming out..
Radhika came out in a maroon colour saree..the pallu pleats wer very thinly pleated and was pinned to the golden colour blouse with small sleeves..the saree border was embroided with small golden beads...her hair was half up and half down...

She wore a simple mang tikka..the mang tikka had a small jhumka on the end..she worn a medium size jhumka whose strings wer attached to her hair,a simple necklace hung around her neck along with her mangalsutra..
She had worn red bangles with two golden bangles at both ends on one hand and watch on the other hand..

She looked elegant..arjun very slowly raised his eyes,he moved his eyes inch by inch..first looked at her sandals and slowly moving up and looked at her face..her face shined along with the fairy lights..

Radhika slowly walks up to arjun..arjun could feel his heart beating faster..

"Arjun..chand aa gaya kya.." asked radhika..

"Huh..." said arjun in a awestruck voice..

"Arjun...has the moon come out..." asked radhika again..

"Yes..." said arjun..

Radhika widens her eyes and innocently asks "y dint u tell me before.."

She goes outside and looks at the sky..the moon had still not come out..it was still hiding behind the clouds...
Arjun's eyes followed her...radhika comes back..

"Chand toh nahi aaya...y did u say yes.." asked radhika

Arjun smiles and looks at her lovingly...he tucks her hair behind...then he slowly moves his finger towards her eyes..radhika moves a step behind..

Arjun holds her shoulder and makes her stand still in a place..he then takes a kajol from her eyes and puts a tikka behind her ear...

"Tume chand ki nazar na lage..." said arjun..

Radhika feels shy...arjun slowly leans forward,his face near her ear...

"You are lookin beautiful..." arjun whispered..he says this and moves back...

Radhika just looks at him...she doesnt even utter a word..this was the first time arjun complimented her..she just looks at arjun lovingly...

Both look at each other...

"Chand aagaya..chand aagaya..." the neighbourhood women's said..

This broke their eyelock...radhika hears this and goes and takes thaali..

Arjun and radhika go to the terrace..

Neil's house:

Neil is dressed in golden sherwni and red pant..his sherwani is embroided with red thread around the neck area...he walks upto the hall where sam is sitting with prerna..sam looks at him and smiles..neil looked dashing in that sherwani..

Neil looked at sam..sam was beautifully dressed in crimson red colour lehenga with embroided golden thread in spade shape..the dupatta was red colour with an golden inch border..he wore a simple mang tikka,a jhumka earrings and a simple necklace along with her mangalsutra..she looked beautiful..neil admired her from a distance..the lehenga was gifted by prerna to sam..

Prerna goes and looks whether the moon has come or not..neil walks upto sam and swiftly kisses her cheek..sam's eyes widen..she looks at neil and smiles...

Sam checks whether prerna has returned or not and slowly kisses neil's cheek...neil raises his eyesbrows..he looks at sam...sam stands as if nothing happend..neil smiles and so does sam..

"Sam..chand aagaya.." said prerna..

Sam goes to the terrace..neil looks at her goin empty hand...he takes the thaali and goes to the terrace..

Sam reaches the terrace and sees that she had not brought the thaali..as she turns,neil comes there with the thaali..

The moon shines brightly in the dark sky..

Sam and neil stand opposite each other...sam takes the thaali...she covers her head with the dupatta..she does the pooja..she offers the water and sweet to the moon..she then takes the sieve,places a diya on it and looks at the moon through the sieve..she moves the sieve to neil's direction and looks at neil through the sieve..neil then takes the water and makes sam drink it thereby breakin her fast...as sam moves,neil holds and stops her...he takes the thaali from her hand,he makes her stand opposite her..he takes the sieve,places the diya on it and looks at the moon..he moves the sieve towrads sam..he looks at her through the sieve..he then places the sieve back on the plate..

"Wont you make me drink water and break my fast.." asked neil

Sam smiles,she takes the kalash and makes him drink water thereby breakin his fast..

Prerna looks at them sweetly..a tear escapes her eye in happiness...

They both come downstairs to their home along with prerna..

As they reach their room...neil gives her a gift..

"What is this.." asked sam..

"Your karva chuth gift.." said neil..he asks her to open it...

She opens it and finds an photo album..she opens it and sees her childhood pic..she looks further..it had photos of her,her family..her photo with neil,radhika,arjun,teji..

Neil had made an album..the album covered her story till day..sam gets teary eyed..she keeps the photo on bed and hugs neil..neil hugs her back..

After a while both pull themselves apart..sam looks at him..

"I too have gift for you..." said sam

"Gift..for me..." asked neil

"Yes..gift for you...for keeping karva chauth vrat.." said sam..she went near a cupboard,opened it and took a gift out..

She walked towards neil and gave the gift to him...

"Open it.." said sam

Neil excitedly opens it...he looks at it and gives a wide smile..the gift box had a variety of camera lenses...

"Prime,wide angle,telephoto,fisheye lens.." said neil lookin at the lens..

He keeps it aside and hugs sam..they both hug each other..

"I love you samindar singh..." said neil

"I love you too idiot.." said sam

They both stay in the warm embrace..

Arjun's house:

Radhika is about to begin the pooja,but arjun stops her..

"I will be there in a minute.." said arjun..

Arjun goes down,he comes back after a minute with a gift box..he unwraps one and takes a beautiful red colour dupatta..he slowly places it on her head and admires her..radhika smiles..

Radhika does the pooja..she looks at the moon and pours the water from the kalash..she then offers the prasad to the moon..

Radhika takes the sieve,places a diya on it and looks at the moon..she slowly moves the sieve and looks at arjun's face through the sieve..arjun smils at her..radhika too smiles..

Arjun then takes the kalash and makes radhika drink water,thereby breaking her fast..

Radhika takes the kalash from his hand and makes him drink the water..arjun gets a little surprised..he wonders how come radhika knew about him keepin the fast..

"Dont think too much.now eat this.." said radhika..she took a sweet from the thaali and fed him...

Radhika had seen arjun's face when she and arjun talked about karvachauth 2 days ago..by then she had known that he would keep the fast..and she confirmed her doubt as arjun dint even eat anything today in office..

"I will be there in minute.." said radhika

After a minute radhika comes with a gift box and gives it to arjun...arjun takes the box..

"What is this.." asked arjun..

"You gift for keepin fast for me..." said radhika sweetly..

Arjun unwraps it and sees a pair of boxing gloves,he smiles..

"Wont you put it.." asked radhika innocently..

As he is about to put it in his hand,he sees a watch inside a boxing glove..he takes it out..

Radhika smiles at him...she takes it from his hand,removes his watch and puts the gifted watch around his wrist..arjun looks at the watch and smiles..

It was like she had symbolically asked him to spend some quality time with her..

Arjun takes a small box from his sherwani..he gives it to radhika..

Radhika takes it and opens it...it was a OMAS fountain pen..

She looks at it and smiles...she thanks arjun..arjun smiling looks at her...

He then takes radhika in his arms and goes downstairs...


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Edited by -rosel- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
rose nice part...
these two guys r like romeos it seems...


one z telling dat his love vl get nazar from camera...

d other gone one step ahead...n said she vl get nazar from chand...

great gng guys...n great gng rose...

nice OS...

i really expected u vl give some more on office conversation...or how radhika tries to make him eat...n all...


but...u made really good ending for both d pairs...
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Originally posted by: lovv

rose nice part...

these two guys r like romeos it seems...


one z telling dat his love vl get nazar from camera...

d other gone one step ahead...n said she vl get nazar from chand...

great gng guys...n great gng rose...

nice OS...

i really expected u vl give some more on office conversation...or how radhika tries to make him eat...n all...


but...u made really good ending for both d pairs...

nazar na lage dialogue came in a flow...lol

I liked neil's camera ki nazar na lage line...

I got stuck in that office scene..so i moves the part...

Thnx avni...:)...

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Posted: 9 years ago
thnx mystic... 😊

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