Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16}

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~~PROLOGUE~~
MUMBAI , a city of dreams , everyone come here to try their luck ,crowded roads ,noise pollution but a place where u can find peace is 'THE RATHORE MANSION'
It was 7am two people were walking in the garden of their mansion hands in hands . The two were none other than mr yash rathore and mrs vasundhara rathore .It was their daily routine in order to spend quality time wid each other .
Mr yash rathore ,a famous business man but inspite of this he was a down to earth person with a fun loving nature .
Mrs vasundhara rathore , a loving wife and a caring mother ,simple yet elegant . Their marriage was an example of a successful arrange marriage
In the mansion there lived two more people one was ramukaka who was like a family member and the other was...u must have guessed
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So guys here is the prologue and in this story vasundhara is a positive character

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb start dear😊
continue soon❤️
the other one is kabira
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Hey Tanya. Nice prologue. Update d 1st part soon. N ha nice title. 😊
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Awesome start Tanya
Continue soon
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mera kabira kha h... superb start.. tanu do update soon
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Nice👍🏼
continue soon😊
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Tanu Superb Start👏👏👏

Continue soon & PM me😳
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Hey Tanya!! Kab update karogi?? Waiting!! N ho sake toh pm me.😊
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Nice prologue ...
Continue soon ..


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PART 1

After returning from walking mr and mrs rathore enters in house
Vasu - ramukaka breakfast ready hai ?
ramukaka - ji madam ji ready hai
yash-hmm it smells nice kya bnaya hai ?
vasu- for us aloo ke paranthe nd fr u one glass of milk nd fruits
yash - kya sirf milk nd fruits ? kya vasu hum punjabi hai humara breakfast toh royal hona chahiye nd tum ye roj mujhe milk nd fruits deti ho thats nt fair
vasu- weight dekha hai apna mote ho gy ho thodi apni care kiya karo abhi se old lagte ho
yash - lo bolo ramukaka aapki madam ko mai bhuddha lagta hu ..are vasu do bacho ka dad hu old toh lagunga hi nd vaise kahan hai aapke prince?
vasu - so rha hoga jabse london se paddhai karke aaya h tab se late uthne ki aadat pad gy use...ramukaka aap jao or uthao use or bolna ki ready hokar jaldi aay mujhe zaroori kaam h

on the first floor of rathore mansion there is a big room with a small terrace garden nd wid a swing in side . A tall handsome guy is sleeping peacefully on his bed wid a cute smile nd cool wind is coming fr d window but suddenly sun rays disturbs his beauty sleep nd he covers his face wid a blanket nd hears a voice 'kabbiiirrr'
he wakes up with a jerk nd murmurs 'aaj fir late ..tu toh gya kabire ...aaj phir mom ki daant sunni padegi '
he gets up frm his bed nd goes to have shower nd after getting ready he comes in the hall
kabir - gud mrning mom nd dad
yash - gm son
vasu(angrily)-iam nt gng to talk to u
kabir (making cute face )- sorry mom kalse pakka jaldi uthunga nd aap se bhi pehle ...ab ek smile dedo plzz
vasu (smilingly) - oh my babu ..gm chalo sit here we want to talk to u abt smthng impt
kabir - wat mom ?
vasu - aaj tumhe pune jana hai
kabir (shockingly )- why mom?
vasu - tumhari dolly di ka phne aaya tha bohat naraz hai ki jabse tum aay ho ek baar bhi usse milne nhi gy or tumhare sumit jiju bhi tumhe yaad kr rhe the toh tum vahan chale jao kuch din use acha lagega
kabir - ya mom im also missing dolly di but mai vahan bore ho jata hun
vasu - ab nahi hoge sumit's bro suketu is also there nd tum saurav ko bhi saath le jao
tabhi dere comes a voice 'kisine mujhe yaad kiya"?
all rathors sees at the door
kabir - hey sauro come inside
sauro- hey buddy gm uncle aunty
vasu- gm beta tum samjhao apne frnd ko
sauro - kya hua aunty?
vasu - dolly di ka phne aya tha she is missing kabir so i said ki tum dono thode dinn chale jao uske paas or yeh bol rha h ki vo bore ho jayga
sauro - kya kabir chal na maza ayga nd sukku bhi toh hoga vahan nd i too miss dolly di
kabir - ook we will go by car only
yash - theek h baccho as ur wish aaj noon mei hi nikal jaana to night tak pohanch jaoge

srry guys fr a boring update

Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago

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