Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: angelanju

hi iam anju...i will call u tanu...
so tanu...awesome👍🏼
i think yeh story FB pe update ho chuki hai right?
well i hv read this before and love this story very much😊...
main dobara padhna chahungi so can i get a pm for upcoming updates??plz...i'll send buddy request...😳

Hello anju ya I have updated it on fb but wid a diffrnt name as I operated it with my sis account nd ya I will send u a pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: tanya119

Hello anju ya I have updated it on fb but wid a diffrnt name as I operated it with my sis account nd ya I will send u a pm

😳i was waiting for ur update there...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelanju

😳i was waiting for ur update there...😊

I will try to update there as soon as possible but here I will update it today only😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
superb update tani👍🏼

yash ka breakfast🤣🤣

loved yash vasu nokjhok😉

kabir late se utha😉

saurav ki entry dhasu thi🤣

kabir saurav pune ja re dolly sumit k yha..wha sukku b h😊

waiting for nibir meeting😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry for being late
awesome start tanya 👍🏼
it was not at all boring indeed I loved reading it
plz continue soon n if possible plz pm me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

superb update tani👍🏼

yash ka breakfast🤣🤣

loved yash vasu nokjhok😉

kabir late se utha😉

saurav ki entry dhasu thi🤣

kabir saurav pune ja re dolly sumit k yha..wha sukku b h😊

waiting for nibir meeting😊

Thnku nimmi 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

sorry for being late
awesome start tanya 👍🏼
it was not at all boring indeed I loved reading it
plz continue soon n if possible plz pm me 😊

No need to say srry...it.is never too late nd im happy that u liked it.
Ya I will pm u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanya119


No need to say srry...it.is never too late nd im happy that u liked it.
Ya I will pm u😊

thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

thank you so much 😊

Needless😊😊
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Part -2
IN THE CAR
s-saurav k - kabir
s- are kabir dekh kitni achi baarish ho rhi hai kaash yeh baarish kabhi khatam na ho
k- baarish mein tujhe kya acha lagta hai mujhe toh baarish bilkul pasand nhi hai mai toh soch rha hun kab pune pohanche or iss baarish se relief mile
s-kya kabir baarish toh sabko achi lagti hai dekhna ek din tujhe bhi achi lagegi
k-impossible!!!!!!!!!!!

AT PUNE
sumit opens the door nd becomes happy seeing kabir nd saurav
sumit- dolly jaldi aao dekho kon aya hai
dolly comes nd becomes happy but fakes anger
'd - chalo yaad toh aay tumhe dolly di ki
kabir comes forward nd hugs her nd says - sorrryyy di ..i missed u sooo much ...maaf kardo na iss chote se jojo ko
dolly smiles nd pulls his cheeks nd says - maaj kiya
k - aahh dolly di bas karo
s - oh hello mai bhi yahan pe hun ..
d - oye monkey tu kyun itna j ho rha h idhar aa
nd they hugs each other
sumit - ab aap logo ka mel milav ho gya ho toh inko andar bhi aane do thak gy honge
k - hey jiju where is sukku ???
sumit - vo apne frnd ke ghar gya hai so late aayga
d - tum dono fresh hojao mai tumhare liye dinner lagati hun
k - no di we r tired we need only rest ..
d - u sure ?
s nd k - ya di
d- ohk toh tum dono ke liye guest room clean karwa diya hai u both take rest or agar kuch bhi chahiye ho toh call me ok
k - ohk di

IN EARLY MORNING KABIR WAKES UP ND SEES THAT RAIN HAVE STARTED AGAIN ..HE SIGHS ND GOES TO CLOSE THE WINDOW AS THE RAIN WATER WAS COMING INSIDE
but as he was going to close it he sees something nd gets mesmerised
he sees that a girl is enjoying rain stretching her arms nd eyes closed with face facing toward the sky nd is just jumping nd trying to catch the rain drops like a kid unknowingly that someone is seeing her with love ...as he wanted to get a more close view he goes in the balcony nd doesnt realise that he is also getiing wet
his trance gets broken with a call of dolly for breakfast
he realises tht he is full drenched nd smiles seeing the rain drops on his hands nd remembers saurav's saying that one day even he will like rain
kabir turns nd goes to get ready but again turns nd sees her with a cute smile

at dining table everyone was having breakfst with kabir nd saurav chatting with sukku
d - guys jaldi se breakfst karlo fir mai tumhe kisi se milvaungi
s nd k - kisse di?
d - the gangwal family'
as soon as kabir hears this the flashes of the morning starts flashing in his mind
sukku sees kabir that he is lost somewhere nd signals everyone to look at him
sumit - kabir kahan kho gya ?
k - kuch nahi jiju bas yuhi
sukku (teasingly)- lagta hai apni gf ke khyalo mein kho gya
k - noo sukku kya tum bhi
sumit - ya kabir itni saari ladkiyan tere peeche hai tu kyun kisi ko paand nhi kar leta
k - no jiju they r nt my types
s - pta nahi ise kis ladki ka intazar h nd jaisi ladki ise chahiye vo pure world mei hogi ya nahi nd laughs
kabir gets up frm his seat with angry face nd turns to go everyone feels that he he didnt liked it
suddenly kabir turns nd says seeing saurav
"bholi si surat aankhon mei masti door khare sharmaay,meri nazar se tum dekho toh yaar nazar vo aay " nd winks nd goes to wash his hands
everyone gets shocked seeing this side of kabir

sorrry for a late update hope u liked it


Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago

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