Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
read all the patrs
lovely story tanya
kabir i love this k kabir
nibir in jungle
thier nok jhoks and cute fight
the way kabir cared for nisha wow yaar amazing
tune mujhe NAUC ki yaad dila di
awesome story
thanks for pm
and srry for the extremely late comment
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

read all the patrs

lovely story tanya
kabir i love this k kabir
nibir in jungle
thier nok jhoks and cute fight
the way kabir cared for nisha wow yaar amazing
tune mujhe NAUC ki yaad dila di
awesome story
thanks for pm
and srry for the extremely late comment
ritika

Thnku soo much
Iam glad u liked the story nd no need for sorry becz u were late only becoz u were busy...nd I always say its never too late so dont be sorry plz😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww sooo cutee nibir kho gye jungle mein grt
"jungle me mangal" .
Nibir romance CNT wait to c jldi update kerna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudiksha10

Awww sooo cutee nibir kho gye jungle mein grt

"jungle me mangal" .
Nibir romance CNT wait to c jldi update kerna

Thnks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww OMG I loved this dude. Like amazing! Didn't want it to end ahaha can't wait for the next chapter! 😃
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Originally posted by: irock321

Awww OMG I loved this dude. Like amazing! Didn't want it to end ahaha can't wait for the next chapter! 😃

Thnku soo much
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PART - 12
after sometime
k - oh nooo
n - kya hua?
k - mai kitna idiot hu
n - isme btane ki kya baat h ..iknw that
k- pagal tu dekh pehle
nisha sees all around
n - oh ..kabir ..yeh toh
k - han yeh vhi jagah h jahan tu giri thi
n - iska matlab hum
k - hum gol ghumke usi jagah pe aagy
n - kabir tu bhi na dekhke nhi chal sakta
k - oh hello ek toh mai tujhe kabse utha ke ghoom rhaa hun ...or tere weight ke karan mere haath dard ho rhe h or tu mujhe thnks bolna ki jagah pe gussa kar rhi h ...
nisha angrily - maine bola tha mujhe uthane ko? or mai kya tujhe moti dikhti hun ?
k - voh toh jo tujhe uthayga use hi pta hoga na kon kitna mota h
n - mujhe bhi koi shok nhi h teri bahon mei ghoomne ka ..utat mujhe neeche ..utar
k - theek h jaise teri marzi
kabir makes her stand and stretches his hands
k - oh iam feeling so relaxed
nisha stares kabir angrily
n - kar liya relax ab bta aage kya karna h
k - i think we should wait here till morning becoz agar hum is time pe jungle mei rasta dhoondenge toh shayad jungle ke aur andar chale jaenge ...nd its a safe place also
n - ya u are right ..but sab vahan humare liye pareshan ho rhe honge
k- pareshan se yaad aya let me call them nd inform ki tu mujhe mil gy h
n- tujhe ab yaad aya hai phone karne ka ...tu kitna irresponsible hai kabir
kabir takes out his mobile
k - oh no
n - ab kya hua ? network nhi h ?
k - network toh h par charging nhi h..pta nhi call ho bhi payga ya nhi
n - kya kabir tu apna phone bhi chrge karke nhi rakhta ?
k - are mujhe sapna thodi aa rha tha ki hum jungle mei khone wale h ..let me try shayad call ho jae
kabir calls summit
n - kya hua phone lga
k -han ring baj rhi h
n -thnk god
at picnic point all r worried for nisha nd kabir
d - mujhe bohat darr lag rha h yeh log abhi tak aay kyu nhi
s - guys i think hume unhe dhooondne chalna chahiya
sukku - han chalo
sumit- guys ruko kabir ka phne h
he recieves call
summit - kabir kahan ho tum? hum log kitna pareshan ho rhe h aur nisha kahan h ?
kabir stops summit in middle
k - ek min jiju let me speak first kyunki mere phne ki charging khatam ho rhi h nd mujhe nisha mil gy h ..hum dono saath mei hai ...hum jungle mei kho gy h ..humne rasta dhoondne ki koshish ki but failed ...
summit- theek h tum vhi raho hum aa rhe h
k - jiju uska koi faayda nhi h ..yahan bohat andhera h ...aap log abhi aay toh shayad aap bhi kho jao ..so we should wait till morning
summit- par kabir tum akele wahan jungle mei
k - dont worry jiju hum safe place pe h
summit - or nisha
k - jiju nisha meri responsibilty h dont worry mai use kuch nhi hone dunga
(nisha smiles hearing this )
summti - acha theeek h tum log apna
before he could complete his sentence phone gets disconnected becoz of charging
d - kya hua vo dono theek toh h na?
summit - dolly vo dono saath mei safe place pe h ..hum kal morning mei unhe dhoondne jaenge
d - hmm ohk

after completing the call kabir nd nisha sits under the tree
k - mai jab phne pe baat kar rha tha tab tu itna smile kyun kar rhi thi ?
nisha tries to become unaware - nhi toh
k - jhoot mat bol i saw u similing
n- are kuch nhi vo toh bas yuhi
k - pta h bina baat ke aise 2 log hi smile karte h
n - kon
k - ek toh vo pagal hote h or doosre vo jinhe kisi se pyaar hogya hota h .. ab tu hi bta tu konsi category mei ati h
n - oye mai pagal nhi hu
k - matlab tujhe kisi se pyaar hogya h right ? nd winks
n - kabir yeh kya pyaar vyar lga rakha h...dekh nahi mei pagal hun na hi mujhe kisi se pyaar hua h
k - toh tu smile kyu kar rhi thi
nisha gets irritated - thi koi vajah har reason tujhe btana zaruri nhi
k - han nhi btana na bta vaise bhi 'hum apke hai kon'
nisha sees him wierdly
n - tu pehle se hi aisa tha ya aaj kuch special h
k - mai toh pehle se hi aisa hun
n - ek baat poochu
k - hmm
n - teri koi gf h ?
k - nhi
n - kyu
k - bas yuhi aaj tak koi ladki pasand nhi aaay
nisha starts laughing
n - tujhe koi pasand nhi aay ya tu kisi ko pasand nhi aaya
kabir with attitude - oye tujhe pta nhi par bohat sari girls meri diwani h
n - acha ? fir tu hi btade tujhe kaise ladki chahiye
k - hmmm mujhe aisi ladki chahiye jo sirf dikhne mei nhi balki dil se bhi khoobsurat ho ...jo mujhe samjh sake or meri family se mujhse bhi zada pyaar kare...or meri gf or wife banne se pehle meri achi dost bane ..he says all this while seeing into nishas eyes ..she was also lost in his eyes nd talks
k - aur
n - aur?
k -bas itna hi nd he looks down
k - vaise tu mujhse yeh sab pooch kyu rhi h ?
n - aise hi kyu nhi pooch sakti
k - pooch sakti h mai toh bas aise hi ...vaise tera pain kam hua?
n -hmm thoda bohat
k - chal morning tak bilkul sahi ho jaega
n - i hope so
k -vaise nisha tune ek baat notice ki?
n - kya
k - ki humne pehli baar bina ladai kare baat ki
n - han nhi toh har baat pe argument hota tha nd laughs lightly
k - ok toh friends
n - han friends
nd they shake hands
n - aaj ka dinn kitna ajeeb tha na
k - kyun
n - dekh na subah se sab kuch galat ho rha h..pehle muje tere saath car mei ana pda then tyre puncher hogya aur fir hum iss jungle mei kho gy ..or sabse buri baat ki mujhe puri raat tere saath bitani padegi
k - oh tujhe nhi pta par
n- han mujhe pta h ki saari ladkiyan tere saath aisa time spend karne ke liye marti h but mr kabir singh rathore mei unn ladkiyon mei se nhi hu
kabirs monologue - hmm tu unn jaisi bilkul nhi h ...tu un sabse alag h pta nhi tujh mei aisi kya baat h jo tujhe unse alag karti h nd smiles

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Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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hey guys here continues part 12 (it turned out to be a little filmy plz bear it )
n - kabir mujhe bohat bhook lagi h
k- ohk toh miss nisha gangwal aap kya khana pasand karenge? chinese ,italian ya north indian
whatever u like i will order for u
n - kabir fir mazak ...yahan bhook ki vajah se meri jaan nikle jaa rhi h
k - yaar nisha bhook toh mujhe bhi lag rhi h ..but jungle mei hume kuch nhi milne wala ...we have no option
nisha holding her head - kabir mujhe kuch ho rha h
kabir worriedly - kya hua nisha ..kya ho rha hai?
n- mujhe aisa lag rha hai ki bhoook ke karan mujhe ..mujhe nd she faints
k - nishaa
kabir becomes worried nd keeps nishas head in his lap nd tries to wake her up w
kabir panickly - nisha nisha ..please nisha aankhe khol ..mujhe pta hai ye sab meri galti h ..mujhe tujhe aisa task nhi dena chahiye tha (he hugs her) dekh mai tujhe kabhi pareshan nhi karunga i promisse nd starts crying ...nisha plz ankhe khol
suddenly he hears a laughter sound ...he breaks the hug nd sees nisha is laughing
kabir gets shocked
nisha while laughing - kabir teri haalat toh dekh
kabir having a hurt expression - nisha yeh sab mazak tha?
n - aur nhi toh kya mazak sirf tu hi kar sakta h ? aur mai kya tujhe itni weak lagti hun ki ek time nhi khaungi toh behosh ho jaungi
kabir stands up in anger
k - aisa mazak bhi koi karta h nisha ..hadd hoti h pagalpan ki bhi
nd turns his face
nisha too stands up nd stands in front of kabir
n - are tu toh naraz hogya
k - leave me alone ...mujhe tujhse koi baat nhi karni
nd again he turns his face to other side but nisha turns his face to her side
n - sorry kabir
k - bola na baat mat kar mujhse
nisha holds her ears - please maaf karde
kabir with teary eyes - tujhe pta bhi h tere iss mazak se mere upar kya beeti h . ..jaan nikal di thi tune meri
nisha gets emotional nd feels guilty nd hugs him tightly
n - iam really sorrry kabri .iss mazak mei.maine apni limits cross kardi thi..iam very sorry
kabir too hugs her
k - fir kabhi aisa mazak nhi ohk
n - pakka ...ab toh maaf karde
k - theek h maaf kiya
they breaks the hug nd have a cute eyelock nd suddenly it starts raining
kabir irritatedly looks towards the sky - kya yaar fir baarish
n - han yaar iss baar t toh mujhe bhi baarish ki timming sahi nhi lagi
they looks at each other nd starts laughing
nd takes shelter under a widely spread tree
k -bhagwan ji yeh jungle mei gum hona kya kam tha jo aapne apna tap bhi khol diya
nisha giggles hearing his
after some time
k - yaar yeh baaarish toh band hone ka naam hi nhi le rhi h
n - han ..han
kabir notices that nisha is shivering as she was full wet nd was trying to cover herself wid dupatta
k - nisha thand lag rhi h
n- kabir mujhe aisa lag rha h ki iam having fever
k - what ?nisha tu yeh ab keh rhi h
n - pehle bta deti tab bhi kya kar leta
kabir gets worried at what to do nd starts rubbing nishas hand in order to calm her down ...but her temperature was rising ..he embraces her in his arms nd tries his best to make her feel better
nisha while shivering - kabb..iii..r..r
k - nisha abhi chup reh or sone ki koshish kar ...dekh subah hone wali h nd baarish bhi band hogai h ..hum jald hi iss jungle se bahar nikl jaenge
n - kabir mujhe neend nhi aa rhi
k - nisha dekh eyes band karne se need aati h ..check kar tune apni eyes band kari ya nhi
nisha breaks the hug nd punches him on his chest
k - aaah nisha ...kya ladki h yaar tu ..bimar h fir bhi maar rhi h
nisha sneezes ..kabir again pulls her nd nishas head lands on his chest nd was half.lying on him
k - ab chup chap aise rhe ...varna fever or high ho jaega
nisha smiles nd closes her eyes
he keeps rubbing her hand nd in some time nisha falls asleep nd seeing her sleeping ,...kabir feels relieved

kabirs sleep gets disturbed by the rays of the sun nd feels when did he fell asleep ..he immediately sees nisha nd checks her temp ...her temp was a little normal now
nisha also gets up due to the chirping of the birds nd sun rays nd burries herself more into kabirs chest ...kabir smiles
k - madam uth jao ab ..jana nhi h
nisha looks up nd finds that kabirs eyes r red
nisha immmedialtly sits straight
n - kabir teri eyes kyun red ho rhi h
k - vo ..vo raat ko neend nhi aai
n - kabir tujhe jhooth bolna nhi aata toh bolta kyun h ...mujhe pta h tu puri raat meri seva kar rha tha ..mai bohat buri hun ...tujhe kitna parshsan kar diya
kabir puts his hand on her lips
k - shshshsh koi pareshan nhi kiya tune mujhe samjhi ...or fir kabhi mat kahiyo ki tu buri h
he removes his hand nd they have an eyelock and suddenly they hears someone screaming nisha kabir!!!!!!
they gets out of the trance
k - lagta h yeh log aagy
n - han
kabir gets up nd hels nisha to get up
they moves towards the source of the sound nd there they finds the cousins nd dolly , summit nd sukku
dolly sees them nd comes running towards them
dolly worriedly - tum dono theek toh ho na
k- han dollly di hum theek h
d - nisha tu itni garam kyu ho rhi h
n - di vo baarish ke karan thoda fever hogya
d - oh my god chal jaldi
sauro - kabir ...kal raat sab theek tha na
kabir gets a flashback of the night nd a smile appears on his face
sauro - kabirrr
k -han ..han
suro - kahan kho gya
k - kahi nhi chale ab
and alll moves out of the forest


Guys iam again saying iam not good in writing romamtic scenes.plz forgive me
ok guys the forest track have come to an end and as promissed the picinc track will be dragged a little more ...
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update tanu👏
finally nibir ki friendship ho gayi
their sweet tom n jerry nok-jhoks were too cut...I just love it
loved the update tanu
continue soon 😊
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tanu I read First half of Part 12😆

Loved it👏

Hope NiBir ki Jungle Night ache bithee bina ladee🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

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