Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART - 11
kabir runs after nisha to apologise to her
k - nishaa ruk toh ...yaaar im sorry
n - noo mujhe tujhse koi baat nhi karni
k - please yaar maafi maang toh rha hun maaf karde na ..itna kya gussa karti hai
n - nooo
kabir holds his ears nd makes a cute face
k - please maaf karde.
nisha smiles seeing his kidish act - pagal h tu sach mei...jaaa maaf kiya
k - han par tujhse zaada nhi
nisha angrily- kabirrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
k - acha acha fir se gussa mat hoyo ...mazak kar rha tha...ab chale
n- han chal ...
suddenly she stops
n - ek minute par hum jaenge kaise
k - jaenge kaise matlab jaise aay the vaise jaenge
n - are bevkoof ...mera matlab h mujhe raasta nhi pta vapas jaane ka
kabir shocked- what??????????
n - par tu hi toh mujhe lene aya tha ..tujhe toh pta hoga
k - nhi mujhe nhi pta ...vo toh teri chillane ki awaz se darr gya ki khi tujhe kuch ho na gya ho ...or usi awazz ki taraf bhaagkar aa gya ...
n - tujhe bhi raasta nhi pta ..mujhe bhi raasta nhi pta ...iska matlab
nisha sees kabir
both - hum jungle mei kho gy ...oh no
nisha and kabir looks at each other with tension

AFTER SOME TIME
k - nishaa i think hume right jaana chahiye
n - nhi kabir left chalte h ..vhi shi rahega
k - maine kha na right
n - tu toh aise confidence ke saath keh rha h jaise tujhe bda experience h jungle mei kho jaane ka ...sach bta or kitni ladkiyon ke saath aise khoya h nd winks
k - ek hi pagal ke saath khoya hun ab tak toh
nisha punches him on his shoulder
k -ouchhh kya h nisha lagta h
n - aage se mujhe pagal bola toh or tez padega ..samjha
k - acha acha theek h
n - chal left chale
k - haddd h maine kha na right
nisha irritated- aisa kar tu right jaa mai left jaati hun ..ok
k - han or jab jungli jaanwar tujhe apna dinner bna lenge toh mujhe mat kahiyo ki roka nhi
n - han han theek h na ...jab tujhe handle kar sakti hun toh jungli jaanwar kya cheez h nd giggels
kabir gives her an angry stare but nisha ignores it nd goes on the left side ...nd kabir moves on the right side


after walking a small distance
n - are yeh jungle toh or daraawna hota jaa rha h ...khi mai galat side pe toh nhi aa gy ...nhi nhi nisha tu shi h ...be brave
suddenly nisha hears some voice ...she ignores it ...but again she hears the same voice ...she gets scared
nishas monologue - lagta h kabir mujhe darane ke liye yeh sab kar rha h
n - kabir dekh agar tu idhar hai toh bahar aaja ..mujhe aise mazak bilkul pasand nhi h ...agar tu nhi aaya na toh ..toh ..toh mai tujhse bilkul bhi baat nhi karungi samjha

suddenly nisha sees shiny eyes cooming towards her ...she was hell scared now..she moves a little backwards nd screams nd runs as fast as she could ...suddenly she gets collided with a muscular body...it was kabir ...nisha immediately hugs him nd starts crying..kabir was shocked nd was not able to understand what to do
kabir while rubbing her back- nisha kya hua ...tu ro kyun rhi h or aise bhaagkar kyu aa rhi thi
nisha was still crying only she can say was
n - kabir promisse kar tu mujhe kabhi akela chodke nhi jaaega
kabir was shocked at this sudden ques
kabir breaks the hug nd cups her face - han pakka kabhi nhi jaunga...chal ab rona band kar or bta toh shi tujhe hua kya h
nisha while sobbing - vo..vo...vo...vha
she again hugs him ...feeling safe in his arms
kabirs monologue - lagta hai isne kuch darawna dekh liya hai
kabir rubs her back nd hair slowly to calm her ..nd it was working ...she stopped crying...she slowly breaks the hug
kabir with concern - theek h ab tu ?
n - hmmm
k - chal chale

kabir was moving forward while nisha was following him ...there was a silence between them
nisha was thinking about their hug nd how kabir consoled her nd a smile appears on her face but suddenly she screams
n - ouch
kabir turns
k - kya hua
n - mere pair mei kuch chubha
k - dikha toh
he makes her sit
k - are kitna lga h dekh ...blood bhi nikal rha h
n - its paining too
k - tera dhyaan kahan tha chalte time ...mai kabse dekh rha hun ...kiske khyaalo mei khoi hui thi
nisha in a slow voice - tere
k -kuch kha
n - nhi nhi toh
kabir picks out his hankerchief nd ties it on her feet
kabir while tying it- vaise kitna ajee hai na
n - isme kya ajeeb hai
k - are tune films mei dekha nhi ki jab hero ko chot lagti hai toh heroin apna dupatta tear karke uski chot pe bandhti h ..yahan tu situation hi puri ulti h nd laughs
n - kabir ..ek toh mujhe lag gy h upar se tujhe mazak soojh rha hai ..so bad
k - are mai toh bas tera mood theek karne ki koshish kar rha tha
nisha with a weirds face -ise mood theek karna kehte h ?
k - han shayad nd giggles
he gets up nd nisha also tries to get up
k - are nisha kya kar rhi h ...tujhe pain horha hai na
n - are jaana nhi hai ...puri raat yahi bitane ka iraada hai kya
kabir comes closer to nisha - tu or mai iss sunsan jungle mei akele ...not a bad idea nd winks
n - kabir tu kitna k hai
k - or tu mere k se kitni j hai
n - oh godd!!!!!!!!!!
nd nisha tries again to get up..,kabir helps her as he knew she would not listen to him
she starts walking but due to pain she was nt able walk properly nd was screaming with pain after every 2 steps
n - ouch
kabirs monologue - kitni ziddi h yaaar kisi ki sunti hi nhi h
suddenly nisha loses her balance but kabir holds her at the right time
n- ouch ...thnks
k - nisha ...dekh tujhe kitna pain ho rha hai ..chale hi nhi jaa rha h ...thodi der rest karle
n - nhi mai theek hun
kabir was hell irritated now as she still wanted to walk
he comes closer to her nd picks her up ...shocking nisha
n - kabir kya kar rha hai ..mujhe neeche utar
kabir angrily - chup bilkul chup ...ab ek shabd or nhi ...kitni ziddi h yaar tu ..dard ho rha hai fir bhi chalna h ...ab bas bohat karli apni manmani...
nisha was listening to him like a child - par kabir
k - bola na chup
nisha keeps finger on her lips nd seeing this a smile apears on kabirs face
k - pagal
nisha giggles
nd kabir starts walking nd nisha just keep looking at him getting mesemerised by his care



thnks fr ur likes nd comments ...i knw this part was a little dramatic but i hope u all liked it 😛
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
tanu it was such a cute update
nibir ek saath jungle ma gum ho gaye 😉
aww...dari hui nishu aur caring kabira
nibir hug
nishu kabir ke sapno ma kho gayi
kabir ne nishu ko utha liya
ye dono ek sunsan jungle me akele ☺️
loved the update tanu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

tanu it was such a cute update
nibir ek saath jungle ma gum ho gaye 😉
aww...dari hui nishu aur caring kabira
nibir hug
nishu kabir ke sapno ma kho gayi
kabir ne nishu ko utha liya
ye dono ek sunsan jungle me akele ☺️
loved the update tanu

Thnku so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
so cute yaar just luved there nok-jhoks n the caring kabir...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naucfan

so cute yaar just luved there nok-jhoks n the caring kabir...

Tysm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tanu yaar kya mindblowing update tha yaar!! Nibir nok-jhoks were as usual funny. N then Nishu ka daar n after that NIBIR hug... Ab main aur kya bolu...aur uske baad Kabir consoling Nishu. Fir Nishu ko chot lagi to mujhe laga hi aab to pakka kuch hone wala hai n dekho at last Kabiraa ne Nishu ko utha hi liya. Pata nahi age jungle main kya kya hone wala hai!! I'm just so excited. Plzzz update soon Tanu. N thanx for the pm. Luv u...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Tanu yaar kya mindblowing update tha yaar!! Nibir nok-jhoks were as usual funny. N then Nishu ka daar n after that NIBIR hug... Ab main aur kya bolu...aur uske baad Kabir consoling Nishu. Fir Nishu ko chot lagi to mujhe laga hi aab to pakka kuch hone wala hai n dekho at last Kabiraa ne Nishu ko utha hi liya. Pata nahi age jungle main kya kya hone wala hai!! I'm just so excited. Plzzz update soon Tanu. N thanx for the pm. Luv u...

Aww thnku fr such a cute comment
Nd ya I will update soon😉
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome...👍🏼.loved their nok-jhoks...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Awesome...👍🏼.loved their nok-jhoks...

Thnku
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

☺️ ☺️ isse jyada kya bolu

I thought that it was a kind of dramatic
But iam glad u liked it

Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago

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