Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsome update tanya

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum update.
nisha understands kabir very well.
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hey i am very very sorry for late comment
and for pm because of my fa and its prepration
will pm you tomorrow
coming to story it was AWESOME update
and as i said you describe well
update soon...

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Originally posted by: TASYAM

hey i am very very sorry for late comment

and for pm because of my fa and its prepration
will pm you tomorrow
coming to story it was AWESOME update
and as i said you describe well
update soon...

Hey..everyone r busy with their studies even I am...so no need for sorry at all nd thnku too fr ur comment 😊
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Superb update tani 😊

Nibir ka k j wala dialogue...code language...bechara saurav🤣

Nisha kabir k ghar me

Doggy se dar gyi...

Smirking kabir 😉

Shopping me nhi Jane wala tha but ranbir ka naam sunte Hi ready ho gya...

Nishu kabir ki car me baithi ranbir ki BMW ko chhod k

Loved der convo❤️

Nisha ko pta chal gya apne aap ki White dress kabire ne pasand ki...

Nishu ko office drop krne k liye kabira kinni jaldi uth gya k kahin ka...

Aweee car me uska hath pakda hua tha aur use Jane ko bol ra

Plz update nxt part soon 😛
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Thankyou all for your comments ..sorry was not able to reply seperately ...
love u all !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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PART - 18

kabir was in the office but was not able to concentrate on his work due to the excitement of night party ...he was just smiling on his own nd roaming in his cabin with his file
sauro came there nd found him smiling stupidly ...he thought 'not again' nd sighed ...so instead of calling him ..he shouted his name as he knew that he wont listen to him in one attempt as he is busy in his chain of thoughts ..kabir gasped nd looked at sauro angrily with a reaction of ' what the hell ' ..saurav giggled nd discussed something abt the project nd left as soon as he left ...kabir looked at his watch nd immediately left for picking up nisha

when he reached ...he got out of his car nd waited for her ..nd got engrossed in his phne nd when he heard nishas voice he got happy nd looked at the gate ..but what he saw made him fume in anger or u can say jealousy ..nisha nd ranbir were coming with ranbir having one hand on nishas shoulder ..they were so busy in laughing nd talking that they didnt even noticed kabir ..kabir tried his level best to avoid looking at them by looking here nd there but cant ..
ranbir accompanied nisha by the parking lot nd then waved nd left ..

nisha turned nd saw kabir ..she got happy but confused too as kabir was having an angry look nd his fist closed ..nisha thought "what happend to him?" ...nd started walking towards him ...kabir noticed her nd so tried to be normal ...
n- heyy ...
kabir trying to smile - hi ...
n - kya hua tujhe ...
k - tera first day kaisa gya ..he tried to divert the topic ...
n- bht acha ...pta h ranbir ne mujhe bilkul bhi nervous nhi hone diya mujhe toh lga tha ki he will behave like a boss but no ..he was not at all changed nd even behaves with the other employes like this ...did u see he also accomapnied me to the gate ..thank god ..i was so upset nd pta h ..nd she continued talking nd praising ranbir ...kabir thought why the hell on earth did he asked this question nd suddenly in the middle he cut her off as he was not able to listen more praise of ranbir anymore - ghar chale ..raat ko party bhi h baki baatein baad mei karenge ..
nisha pouted as she wanted to tell him abt her whole day ...
kabir realised it nd said - are i knw ki tu bht excited h mujhe btane ke liye lekin baad mei aaram se btaayo
n-ok..nd smiled ... they sat in the car nd drove off to the rathore mansion .

IN THE EVENING
in the hall .
kabir while adjusting his tie called out nisha for the nth time ...he was showing that they are getting late but in actual he was getting impatient to see her in the gown selected by him ...
k- nisha agar tu 5minute mei nhi aay na toh mai jaa rha hun ...fir aaajayo driver ke saath ..while nisha too replied from the room which was upstairs - bas aa rhi hun ..
k- pichle half an hr se mai yahi sunn rha hun nd he sighed nd called sauro to inform abt being a little late ..as soon as he cut the call ..
he felt her presence nd tuned around nd saw nisha coming downstairs ...the world stopped for him nd he went in his own dreamland where only he nd nisha is present ..he adored her from top to bottom...her natural glow ..her curly hair .. with a mesmerising smile ..all were just making him go crazy nd then his eyes shifted to her pink glossy lips ...nd without shifting his gaze to another side he just started taking small steps towards her ...his actions were already making nisha blush nd now his steps towards her was making her crimson red ...nd she started playing with her fingers ..
he stood in fornt of her nd made nisha look towards him ..nisha looked upwards nd they shared an eyelock ...kabirs hand was just going to touch her nd he was going to complement her but their moment got broken with the call of vasu ..kabir immediately moved backwards nd nisha too tried to hide her blush which didnt do unnoticed by kabir

v- wow nisha you are looking so pretty ...
n - thanku aunty ...
k - chale late ho rha h ..nisha nooded ...
v- enjoy u both ...nd she waved them a bye

in the car
kabir was not able to find words how to complement her ..while nisha was getting angry at him ...nd kabir could sense it ...
kabirs monologue - kya yaar ghar pe itna acha chance mila tha..usi time keh deta ..par ab kya karu yaar ...
nishas monlogue - kya yaar abhi tak kuch nhi bola itni buri lag rhi hun kya ..nisha was confused nd hence she directly asked him hesitantly - kabir mai theek toh lag rhi hun na ..
kabir was shocked that how can she even ask this question ...kabir stopped the car ...
n - kya hua car kyu rok di ...kabir slowly moved towards her ...they were just a few inches apart ..nisha closed her eyes while kabir smirked ...he whispered in her ears - you are looking damn beautiful just like an angel ..nisha smiled nd opened her eyes ..kabir moved bakwards nd started the car while nisha started looking outside to hide her blush ...now it was a silent drive ...both lost in their own world ..yet they have not accepted their feelings but they knew that 'something is different '!!!!!!!!!!

//finally they reached the velvet lounge ///
they headed towards the party hall ...at the entrance kabir greeted various business associated while nisha just wished them a 'hello' as she didnt knw anyone of them and it was making her feel awkard ...suddenly suaro came there
s- kya kabir itni late..nd as soon as he saw nisha ..he stopped ...wow nisha u r looking gorgeous ...
n - aww thankyou ...
ranbir also came there ..greeted kabir but kabir gave him a ' whatever look ..ranbir was confused but ignored nd then ..looked at nisha from top to bottom naughtily ...
r - wah yaaar tu toh killer lag rhi h ...
n - oh really ..thnks ..
ranbir was about to say something when they heard an announcement
the speaker - good evening ladies nd getlemen ...iam very happy to announce that ..' the worlds one of the most powerful business tycoon ' is here with us ...so please welcome mr ritesh dhandwani among ur applause ..

everyone looked towards the entrance while clapping..ritesh entered with some bodyguards around him ..attitude was clearly visible on his face ..all greeted him ..nd when it was the turn of kabir ...after the greeetings riteshs gaze shifted to nisha ..kabir noticed this ..ritesh forwaded his hand - hello miss beautiful ...nisha felt a little awkard but shook hands with them ..he kissed her hand ..nisha felt umcomfortable nd so backed off her hand immediately ..kabir too felt angry ..
ritesh - can i knw ur name miss ...
kabir cuts him - nisha her name is nisha ..
ritesh was about to say something when someone called him nd so excused himslef but turned nd saw nisha ..nisha holded kabirs hand ..kabir felt her fear ..nd so holded her hand tighly as if giving her surety that he is with her ..nisha smiled ..

ranbir came there - nisha ek min chalna kuch btana h ..
n - are idhar hi bolde na ..
r - nhi na chal plz nd he dragged her with him ...kabir too followed them without being noticed by them .

ranbir nd nisha reached pool side ..
n - kya hua kyu laya hai mujhe yahan ..
r - be patient miss nisha ,iam your boss ..nd both giggled ..
kabir was standing with a glass of juice at a little distance at which their convo was audible ..kabir - aisi konsi baat h jo ise yahan le aya ...
ranbir took out a small box nd opened it ..there was a diamond ring in it ...nisha nd kabir were shocked nd the glass of juice sliped from kabirs hand ...nisha nd ranbir looked in the direction of breaking of glass nd found kabir there ...
r - are kabir are u okay ..he asked heading towards him ..
kabir recovered from his shock - ya yaa ...iam ok ..its just ..
r- koi baat nhi ..waiter clean it ...
kabir too joined them ...while nisha looked at ranbir with confusion ...
kabir trying to become unaware - are yeh ring ..yeh kiske liye h ...ni ..nisha ke liye h kya ..he asked with a lot of difficulty ..
ranbir shocked - are nhi bhai ..kyu marwane pe tula h ..pagal h ...yeh nisha ke liye nhi kaira ke liye h ...
kabir nd nisha looked at each other...ranbir sensed their confusion ... - nisha mai isiliye toh tujhe yahan leke aya tha ..plz meri help karna ..i want to propse her ..we are dating frm past 1 yr ..i cant wait more..but i am nervous too ..he kept speaking ...
n - stop stop stop ..are hadd h tune toh mujhe dara hi diya tha ..vaise kon h vo lucky girl ..she teased him .while kabir took a breath of relief ...
r - kya nisha tu bhi ..
n- oho blushing blushing ..kahan h hume bhi toh milwao ...
ranbir turned nisha nd pointed in a direction ..
kaira was standing talking to some girls wearing a knee length dress ...kabir too looked at her .. n - hmmm ...nd turned towards him again ...
n - meri kya help chahiye tujhe ...
k - han nisha isme kya help karegi ..u come with me ...im experienced [winked] ..
nisha glared at him ...n - oh ..thnku soo much mr kabir kumar ..but i can understand a girls feeling much better ..
k - toh kya hua ..nd they started their cute fight again ..
ranbir looked at them surprisingly ...he shouted - chup !! ..everyone present there looked at them while kabir nd nisha felt embaressed ...
r - sorry ..u all enjoy ...nd . what is this yar ?ab btao tum meri help karoge ya nhi ...
k nd n - yaa sure ..they looked at each other nd turned their faces in the other direction angrily ...r - rehne do tumse nhi hoga ...
n - are nhi ruk ..nd she holded his hand ..dekh ranbir ek ladki humesha se yeh chahti h ki jab koi ladka use propose kare toh vo apne dil mei jo h vo sab kuch bolde ...or ek ache relationship mei humesha trust bht zaroori hota h ...toh tujhe apna past ,present sab kuch usse bantna hoga taki baad mei koi pareshani na ho ...nd bilkul bhi nervous mat ho ..just say whatever u feel .. dont hide anything ...kabir surprisingly ..adored this side of her ..
r - yaa u r right he hugged her tightly ..thnku thnku sooo much ...
kabir trying to control himself - are itna mat chipak..usne dekh liya na toh pta chale propose karne se pehle hi reject ho jaye nd giggled ..ranbir immeditely broke the hug while nisha glared at kabir angrily ...
r - are han..thnku yaaar ...chalo milta hun thodi der mei ...enjoy ..nd he left

as soon as he left nisha turned towards kabir - toh mr kabir kumar , kya keh rhe the aap ..she asked folding her hands against her chest ...
kabir angrily - ..kya keh rha tha .
nisha angrily - kuch nhi keh rha tha na ,..theek h dont talk to me mai jaa rhi hun ..nd she went towards the exit..kabir didnt stopped her ...
k - hadd h yaar choti choti baaton pe gussa ho jaati h nd he too went from there

nisha reached the parking area
mumbling to herself - hadd h samjhta kya hai apne aapko ...pehle toh yahan pe iss ajeeb si party mei le aya jahan koi jaan pehchan nhi h ..upar se mujhse hi ladai karne lag gya ..mere dost ke saamne vo bhi ...use kya lgta h mai kisi ki help nhi kar sakti ..nd she kept speaking ...aisa karti hun ghar vapas chale jaati hun ...koi na koi auto toh mil hi jaega ...she was about to go when ritesh came there - hello miss nisha ...kya mai apko drop kardu .
.n - no thanku ...nd she was about to go when ritesh holded her hand nd pulled her ...nisha gasped at this suddedn move ..
n - yeh kya badtameeze h chodo mera haath

in the party

after some 10 minutes when kabir didnt saw her anywhere he bacame scared monologue - kahin sach mei toh nhi chale gy ..use toh mumbai ke baare mei kuch pta bhi nhi h ..oh god kabir how can u do this ..nd he ran towards the exit ...
sauro noticed this - ise kya hua ...
when kabir reached the parking area he searched for her nd then he hears a scream ..
k - yeh toh nisha ki awaz h nd he went towards the source of sound nd what he saw was enough to boil him with anger ...ritesh was trying to misbehave with nisha ..
kabir shouted - riteshh!!! ...nd stormed towards him ...he broke the grip on nishas hand ..nd started beating him ..while nisha stood in a corner taking support of a car ... crying badly
saurav came there nd tried to stop him ..
k - chod de mujhe sauro..ise toh mai chodunga nhi ...
s - kabir plz shaant hoja leave him right now ..nd after a lot of tries he got successful ..
ritesh while standing up - tu samjhta kya h apne aap ko chodunga nhi mai tumko yaad rakhna..tum jaante nhi ho kisse panga liya h tumne ..nd he went from there. ...
s - mai nisha ke liye paani laata hun ..nd he too went ...
kabir turned towards nisha nd ...nisha just threw herslf on him nd started crying more ...kabir hugged her tightly ...nisha was not able to speak anything but her silence was enough for kabir to understand her feelings ..tears were there in his eyes too ...
k - iam soo sorry nisha ...nisha didnt responded ...nd when sudddenly her cries stopped kabir broke the hug..only to find her fainted ...
k - nisha nisha ...he got scared nd when sauro came there ..he asked him to bring the car immeditately ..he picked her up in his arms nd sat with her at the back seat while sauro drove the car towards the house ...

kabir tried to wake her up nd cried ...he sprinkled some water on her face ...nd it worked nisha was regaining her consiousness ..
nisha with eyes half closed - k k..kabir ...nd the fear again overcame ...nd kabir could notice the change in her expressions...
k - nisha dekh hum ghar jaa rhe h theek h ...but nisha started crying again ..kabir side hugged her ..
k -shhh chup ..kuch nhi hua ..sab theek h ...
n - yeh sab humesha mere saath kyu hota h ..kabir just crushed her in his arms nd tried to calm her.. ..sauro was watching all this from the mirrror ..

they reached home .nisha was a bit calm ..her cries turned into sobs ...kabir opened the door nd signalles suaro to open the main gate ..sauro followed him ...kabir stepped out of the car nd forwaded his hand for nisha ...nisha looked at him with red eyes nd slippe dher hand in his ...she stepped out of the car weakly ...nd kabir accompanied her till the room

sorry for typo errors .
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww poor nisha 😭 ritesh 😡 kabir 😳
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Awsm update tani...

Kabira j ho ra...nishu ranbir ko sath dekh k🤣

Haaye nishu ko dekh k to kabira k hosh Hi ud gye🤣

Loved der car convo...

Velvet launge❤️

Ritesh😡

Apne j pan se kabira ne glass tod dia🤣

Ranbir to kaira k sath set h🤣

Nibir fight😉

Poor nisha 😭

Loved d way kabir consoled her...

Us ritesh ki to😡
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Awesome update tanya 👏
Ritesh 😡
Thanks for the pm

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