Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
hello guys
iam back with another update to compensate for the last late update
here it is hope u like it
nd ya thnks fr d likes nd comments ..sorry was not able to reply seperately

PART - 10
at 7pm all were sitting nd chatting making a circle with nisha and kabir sitting opposite to each other
kirti - guys chalo na kuch interesting khelte hai bohat bore ho rha h
j - han chalo antakshari khelte h
all gives her a wierd look'
d- tujhe yeh interesting lagta hai jwalu
sukku- chalo truth nd dare khelte h
d - han yeh sahi rahega
all agreees , the bottle is spinned nd the questn point pointed towards kabir while the ans one towards nisha
kabirs monologue - ab maza aayga
k - han toh nisha truth ya dare
n - nhi mujhe nhi khelna yeh game ..im going'
k - yeh dekho yeh toh abhi se hi darr gy
n - oh hello mai kisi se nhi darti
k - toh bolo truth ya dare vaise tum truth hi maango kyuki dare toh tumse hone wala h nhi
n - yeh tumhari misunderstanding h ...i choose dare
k - ohk ...dekhte h tum mein kitna dare h
n - ab bologe bhi ki karna kya h
nishas monologue - pta nhi ab yeh kya karayga ..kahan phas gy nisha
k - toh theek h vo dekho jo tumhe ek choti si pahadi dikh rhi h (he points towards small hill nd nisha turns to seee it ) uspe tumhe jana h or zor se chilana h 'kabir is the most handsome guy in the world'
nisha gives him a weird loook - r u serious? mai vahan pe jaake itna bda jhoot bolu ? not at all..pagal ho kya?
kabir gives her an angry look
k - seedha seedha bol na ki tu dar gy ..chal tu koi easy task lele
n - ji nahi ...i can do it
k - toh jao phir
n - ok mr kabir rathore i will show u ki mai kisi se nhi darti
dolly nd summit tries to stop her but she gets up nd goes toward the hill angrily
d - kabir are u mad ..tumhe pta h vahan jaane ka rasta jungle se h ..upar se raat bhi hone wali h ...use kuch hogya toh ...tum aisa bachpana kaise kar sakte ho?
k - are relax dolly di ..mai mazak kar rha tha ..abhi jaake use vapas laata hun
d - han jaa jaldi lekar aa

nisha enters in the jungle angrily - samjhta kya hai apne aapko , use kya lagta h ki mai yeh kar nhi paungi ...i will do it nd show him how much dare i have
kabir also enters in the jungle - are yeh jungle toh sach mei darawna hai ...mujhe jald hi nisha ko dhoondna hoga .. but itni jaldi yeh jaa kahan sakti hai
he shouts - nishaaa
he sees here nd there but doesnt finds her
k - kabire find her fast
suddenly he hears a scream
k - are yeh toh nisha ki awaaz h ..kahin use kuch
nd he runs towards the source of the voice
k nisha kahan h tu??
n - yaha pe hu
k - yahn kahan pe mujhe toh dikh nhi rhi
n - are yahan neeche dekh '
kabir sees that nisha kisi khadde mei gir gy h
k - are tu yah pe kya kar rhi h
n(angrily)- candle light dinner kar rhi hun ,,tujhe ana hai?
k - nisha yeh koi mazak ka time h kya
n - duffer mazak mai kar rhi hun ya tu.. tujhe dikh rha h ki mai yahan gir gy hun or fir bhi tu pooch rha h ki ' nisha tu yahn kya kar rhi h?
k - par tu yahan giri kaise
n - vo mai apne suit ka dupatta theek kar rhi thi or pta hi nhi chala mera pair kisi cheez pe pda or mai slip hoke yahan gir gy...ab tu sawal jwab band karega or mujhe nikalega bhi
k - mai tuje nikalunga but ek condition pe
n - kya?
k - tujhe please bolke request karni hogi
n - kabir tu kitna bda k h ek toh mai yahan gir gy hun or tu help karne ki jagah mujhse please bolne ko keh rha h
k - han toh aisa mauka baar baar thodi milta h
n - mai tujhe koi request nhi karne wali
k - soch le meri jagah pe yahn koi bhi nhi h phir tu help kisse legi
n- ok ok theeek h ...( she mumurs - dekh lungi tujhe mai ...ek baar bahar aane de phir iska badla mai leke rahungi)
kabir tries to listen what she is murmuring but fails
k - tune kuch kha?
n - nhi toh
k - phir kar request
n - kabir please tu mujhe yahn se bahar nikal de ..tu kitna acha h na ... the most handsome guy in this world ...please meri help karde(she makes cute face)
kabir enjoys it nd murmurs - nautanki
n - kuch kaha tune
k - nhi toh ...ab tu itna keh rhi h toh aaja
he extends his hand towards nisha to pull her up ..nisha holds his hand tightly
kabir starts pulling nisha up
n - kya kar rha h kabir ..jaldi kar na ..jaan nhi h kya tujhme'
k - jaan toh bohat h but tera weight kitna h yaaar ...mujhe toh lagta h ki mera haath fracture ho jaayga
n - shut up ...jaldi kar na
kabir finally pulls her up with all his force nd both falls down with nisha on top of kabir
they both shares an eyelock for a few seconds
nisha tries to get up but she again falls on him because of her chain which have strucked into kabirs button
she tries to seperate it but was not able to whereas kabir just kept watching her with a smile ..suddenly he holds her hand nd nisha loooks at him
k - mai karu?
nisha nodds
kabir tries it nd succeeds nd looks at nisha nd sees that she is lost smewhere nd is smiling
kabir shouts - nishaa
nisha looks at him '
n - hmm
k - chain nikal gy
n - ok ... thnks
k- oh its my pleasure ...btw tujhe nhi lagta tu kuch bhool rhi h
n - kya
k - guess kar
nisha irritate hoke - kya bolna
k - are tu mujhpe kabse giri hui h ..ab uth bhi jaa ...varna mai mar jaunga
nisha realises her position nd gets up immediately ...kabir also gets up nd sees that nisha is blushing
k - nisha
n- hmm
k - idhar dekh toh
nisha tries to control her blush - han bol
k - tu blush kar rhi h
n - nhi toh
k- jhooot mat bol mai andha nhi hun,,,,ek mint kahi tujhe mujhse vo toh nho ho gya nd winks
n - pagal h kya ...mujhe tujhse koi pyaar vyaar nhi hua
kabir holds nisha by her waist nd pulls her closer ...he comes close to nishas ear nd nisha closes her eyes
k - par maine pyaar word toh bola hi nhi
nisha shocked opens her eyes nd sees that kabir is laughing loudly
she gets angry on him
n - isme hasne wali konsi baat h ...tera matlab toh vhi tha na
kabir while laughing - mera matlab jo bhi ho but tera chehra dekhne wala tha
nisha gets angry nd starts going frm there
kabir runs behind her to apologise

ohk guys ...do like nd comment...first time i have written such a long update ...pheww
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww so cute update Tanya 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome yaar .
just luved nibir nok jhoks eyelock haaye k kabira...
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Posted: 9 years ago
MishRi
I miss them... 😔
It was a cut update 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
such a cute update tanu
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Update Tanu👏👏👏

Kabira ne kya dare dia Nishu koo😉 Shmaartt😛

Nishu ka voh dialogue "candle light dinner" 🤣🤣🤣

NiBir ka fall☺️ Chain phas gaye.. Eyelock...😳

Nishu ki muh se nikal gaya "PYAAR"🤣🤣🤣 ab bol bhi de Nishu😆

Waiting 4 Kabira Patavofying Nishu🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago
Again amazing update tani😊

finally dey decide to play truth n dare🤣

bottle spin ki...n nisha fas gyi🤣

kabir kinna k h full advantage le rha is situation ka🤣

nishu ne dare accept kia😉

wo handsome wali baat me mujhe bhi mishri❤️ ki yaad aa gyi mishrifeels❤️

nishu gyi jungle me😲 akele den kabir bhi uske pichhe gya...

ailla nishu dupatta sambhalte sambhalte gaddhe me gir gyi🤣🤣

kabir usse plz bolwa rha🤣

loved der nokjhok😉

awee nibir fall der eyelock maashallah😳❤️

den ek baar fir fall🤣

nishu kabir me inna kho gyi ki uske upar se uthna hi bhul gyi

nishu blushing kabir teasing🤣

fir se inki closeness haaye jaan lelenge ye to meri😉

update nxt part asap😊

PS : unres on pg 18
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Posted: 9 years ago
read 9 and 10 together
superb upsdate tanyaa
that dare thng muje bhi Mishri ki yaad dilayi 🤣
kuch kuch hone lagi dono ko
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read part 9 & 10 in one go. Tanu superb updates yaar!! Tune to phaarr diya bilkul. Part 9: Kabiraa to ekdum lattu hi ho gaya Nishu ko dekhke. Kabiraa ne compliment nahi diya to Nishu gussa ho gayi...arre waah!! Kya baat hai. N phir NIBIR scene. Haye... mindblowing tha bilkul. Awesome...Nishu kitna blush kar rahi thi. PS= Aneri's pic was nice. She was looking stunning as usual. Part 10: Truth & Dare...mujhe iss game se na D3 ki bari yaad ati hai. Again an amazing update. NIBIR in jungle... aur na jane kyu mera dil keh raha hai k Jungle main hone wala hai mungle!! I'm eagerly waiting for the nxt part. Update soon. N thank u for the pms n sorry for the late comment. Luv u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
read all the parts in one go...awesome work tanya 👏
loved each and every bit of it
nibir nok-jhoks are awesome
nibir cute moments...awww ☺️
sorry for late comment was busy due to exams...n tysm for the pm
loved it 😊

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