Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 5

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Tanu🤗

Awesome Update yaar...👏👏👏

Superb EDIT😃

Kabira ko Pyaar ho gaya Nishu se..😆 I knw vo ladki Nishu hai😛🤣

Kabira ka gaana bhi acha tha...😃

Waiting 4 Kabira to meet the girl who mesmerised him..😳 I mean Waiting 4 NiBir Meeting

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more.. Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

Originally posted by: angelanju

awesome update tanya...

thanx for the pm😊

PART - 3
Everyone are in shock seeing kabir new anadaz
dolly with eyes wide open - ise suddenly kya hua ?pehle toh aisa nahi tha
sumit-dolly tum toh gangwals ke yahn jaane wali thi na?
d- oh han mai toh bhool hi gy saurav tu kabir ko bula mai bahar wait karti hun
s- k di
after sometime saurav comes outside
d- kabir kahan hai?
s- vo bas aa rha h apko toh pta hi hai na jab bhi kahi bahar jaana hota hai toh tyaar hone mei toh aise vakt lagata hai jaise uska rishta dekhne jaa rhe hai
both laughs nd kabir comes out
k- kis baat pe has rahe ho zara mujhe bhi btao?
both dolly nd saurav together says - kuch nahi chale
k - ohk chalo
suddenly sukku comes nd says that he will also go with them
k- tu kyun chalega
sukku- are tujhe nahi pta they r my best buddies
k - ohk
s- vaise di unki family mei kon kon hai?
d- tu khud hi chalke dekhle
all of them enters in the house nd sees that the elders r present in the courtyard discussing something
d- hello everyone
everyone turns nd smiles seeing dolly
kabir and saurav becomes shocked seeing such a large family nd comes near dolly nd whisper in her ears - kuch zada hi badi family hai
dolly giggles nd says abhi kahan cousins toh hai hi nahi
saurav getting a shock again - abhi or bhi hai ?
rupan - are dolly yeh kon hai hume bhi toh btao?
dolly introduces them to everyone nd kabir nd saurav takes everyones blessing
d- vaise saare cousins kahan hai?
dadiji tells that they r upstairs helping jwala in her projecet
d- ohk dadi kabir sauro chalo
s nd k - han chalo di
in room when they enters they see everyone doing a cute fight that whose idea is better nd jwala is sitting there holding her head
dolly comes nd asks jwala slowly abt all this she says-pta nahi dolly di yeh log mera kaam kara rahe hai ya badha rhe hai
dolly giggles nd shouts - guys shaant shaant ?
suddenly there is a silence in d room nd kabir nd saurav who were enjoying seeing their fights sdenly gets scared hearing her shout
umesh- are dolly tu kab aay
d- jab aaap log monkeys ki tarah fight kar rhe the
kabir nd saurav laughs slowly
kirti - are dolly di yeh kon hai
dolly introduce them to the cousins nd kabir notices that the girl whom he see in the morning was nt there'
d- are nisha kaha hai?
kirti - are di vo subah se baarish mein bheeg rahi thi tohroom main change karne gy hui hai
kabir in his mind oh so her name is nisha nd smiles
d - oh han guys u all have to come to my house today at 8 pm
kirti - kyun di
d - for dinner nd sumit ne kuch surprise plan kiya hai
bunty becomes excited nd asks - kya surprise dolly di btao na
d - are abhi bta dungi toh surprise kahan rahega nd guys ab hum chalte hain ohk nd yaad se time pe aa jana
all noddded
while going kabir turns again nd again to get one sight of nisha but he was nt able to find her

after sometime nisha comes in the room
kirti - are nishu where were u ? pta hai dolly di aay thi hume invite karne 8 baje unke ghar dinner ke liye jaana h nd summit jiju ne kuch surprise rakha h im so excited nd she also introduced her brothers saurav nd kabir
she comes nd whispers in nisha's ear- vaise unka bhai kabir bohat handsome h
n- are kirti tujhe toh har ladka cute lagta hai kuch nya bta
kirti - how blah nishu
n - are jwala tera project khatam nahi hua
jwala with a sad face - nhi nishu di nd signals at the cousins
nisha stares at them with unbelievable look nd says- koi baat nahi jwalu dolly di ke ghar jaane se pehle mei tera project khatam karva dungi
j - oh nishu bro u r d best
n - i know
nd both laughs
precap - nibir meeting
guys i will try to update the next part today only but if not then tomrw pakka

superb update tanu...

awesome yaar jaldi update kar dena...

are cousins 🤣 bechari jwalu.. 😆 but m waiting for precap

Fighting lyk monkeys ha ha mast hai nd waitng for nibir meeting gify ek roll on deo. Par ek questn how os dolly related to gangwals.

superb update dear👍🏼

saubir gangwals cousins se mile😊

loved cousins nokjhok😉

kabir nisha se mil nhi paya but usko uska naam pta chal gya😊

dolly ne unhe ghar me invite kia😊

waiting for nibir meeting😊

Awesome update Tanya
Loved the precap
Continue soon

PART - 4
nisha and jwala were doing the project when suddenly painting colours spread on nishas shirt and kirti comes in the room
kirti - how blah nishu tu abhi tak ready nhi hui dekh 7;45 ho gy h .
n- guys tum log jao mai change karke aati hun
kirti - ohk ..chal jwalu hum chalte h
everyone reaches dolly house
d - hey guys ...are nishu kahan h ?
kirti - di vo uske kapde kharab hogy the toh vo fresh hokar aa rhi hogi
d - ohkz
k - dolly di apne mera bluetooth dekha dopahar tak toh mere saath hi tha
d - nahi toh
umesh - kabir ho sakta h jab tum aaj aay ho toh room mei gir gya ho ruko mai nishu se phne karke kehta hun vo le aaygi
k - hmmm
umesh - uska toh phne hi nhi lag rha h ...aman aisa karo tum jaakar lado
k - nahi nahi aap kyun takleef kar rhe h mai hi le aata hun
d - ohk nd nisha se khena jaldi aay
k - ohk

kabir reaches the room nd is searching fr the bluetooth ..finally he seees it nd bends down to pick it up just then nisha comes out frm the washroom nd doesnt see him
as soon as he pick it up he stands straight nd then few drops of water comes on his face
he looks aroung frm where its coming just then he sees nisha drying her hair with the towel ..he just gets lost in her nd unknwingly starts walking towards her slowly
he is too close to her ...just then she turns nd gets colllided with him nd is just able to fall when kabir holds her


nisha sees kabir fr the first time nd they have an eye lock
nisha's monologue- omg he is too cute ... one sec but who is he
she gets out of her trance nd stands straight whereas kabir is still lost in looking at her glowing face which is getting more beautiful by the water dropping frm her hair
n - oh hello who r u ????
he doesnt respond ..nisha sees that he is lost somewhere ...she shakes him .. he comes out of his dreamy world
n - oh hello mr kahan kho gy ...kon ho tum or mere kamre mei kya kar rahe ho ? dekho agar koi chor ho toh abhi btado varna maar maar kar aisa haal karungi ki bhoologe nahi ...bologe bhi kuch ab ...she speaks in one go


kabir keeps a hand on her lips nd says- shhh!!!!!! are kitna bolti ho yaar tum ..mujhe chance dogi tabhi toh kuch bol paunga ...nd by the way im not a theif ,im kabir dollly di 's brother nd mai yahan apna bluetooth lene aya tha jo dopahar ko iss kamre mei gir gya tha
nisha's monologue- oh toh yeh hai kabir ,kirti sahi keh rhi thi he is handsome yaar ...on sec nisha wat r u thinking ..
she removes his hand frm her lips nd says - pehle nhi bol sakte the
k- tum bolne deti tab na ..bas shatabdi express ki tarah bole hi jaa rhi thi
nisha (angrily ) - acha mai bole jaa rhi thi ...koi aise kisi ke kamre mei bina pooche aata hai
k - are jab mai aaya toh koi tha hi nahi toh isiliye aaa gya
nisha feels that she is loosing the battle nd starts looking here nd there nd kabir notices this ..to make the situation light he extends his hand fr a handshake - hi i am kabir vaise toh pehle bta hi chuka hun phir bhi formality ke liye
nisha feels relieved to the sudden change of topic
she shakes hand with him - hi im nisha nd smiles
suddenly kabirs phone rings
k- han dolly di ...ya bas aa rhe h ...
he cuts the call nd says - chale all r waiting fr us
n - yaa lets go
she picks up her phone nd they left

guys im nt good at writing romantic scenes , just gave it a try nd the pics r just to illusterate the scene more nicely ..i hope its a little like ur expectation