Dust of the Dandelions-pt12A-pg142-5/11

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Legally Copyrighted: The story and the name are copyrighted, only I have the right to change the names of the characters, story, places etc and publish it. Plagiarism of any kind, in parts or in its entirety is strictly not permitted. The characters mentioned in this forum, do not belong to the author, they belong to Ekta Kapoor and Balaji Telefilms.

Table of Contents

prologue
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=1

Part 1A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=4


Part 1B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=9

Part 2A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=14

Part 2B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=18

Part 3A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=24

Part 3B

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=29

Part 4A

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=37

Part 4B

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=42


Part 5A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=48

Part 5B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=54

Part 6A

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=64

Part 6B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=70

Part 7A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=75

Part 7B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=80

Part 8A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=90

Part 8B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=95

Part 9A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=100

Part 9B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=106


Part 10A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=111
Part 10B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=119

Part 11A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=122

Part 11B
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=135

Part 12A
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=740643&T PN=142



Prologue

Dust of the Dandelions

Dandelions
- Five fire frenzy (Exerpts)

In a field of yellow flowers,
underneath the sun,
bluest eyes that spark with lightning,
boy with shoes undone.
He is young, so full of hope,
reveling in tiny dreams,
filling up, his arms with flowers,
right for giving any queen.

Running to her beaming bright,
while cradling his prize.
A flickering of yellow light,
within his mother's eyes.
She holds them to her heart,
keeping them where they'll be safe,
clasped within her very marrow,
dandelions in a vase.

She sees love, where anyone else would see weeds.
all hope is found.
Here is everything he needs.

Fathomless your endless mercy,
weight I could not lift.
Where do I fit in this puzzle,
what good are these gifts?
Not a martyr, or a saint,
scarcely can I struggle through.
All that I have ever wanted,
was to give my best to you.


The small doe grazed in the meadowland that was covered with the golden dandelion dust, next to the stream meandering through the valley, she looked about nervously, perking her ears at the smallest noise, geared to flee at the earliest danger. The tall eucalyptus and low lying willows provided gauzy veiling to the needles of the rays of sun that were descending over the ancient hills that stood as silent custodians to the richness of the history.

The mountain wind swept her hair with its usual vitality; the air was an elixir, the freshness of the scent making her feel dizzy. It was the same brook where she waded in, in search of the rounded pebbles with which they played in the absence of expensive toys. There was a time when the dense foliage scared her, but now it just made her feel safe, a sense of peace blanketing her warmly. The crumbling timbers of the tree draped over the brook provided an unsafe bridge to cross over to the other side. An equally crumbling barn stood over, with tumbled remnants of a picketed white fence that was no longer a barrier to the animals that roamed around freely to eat the last vestiges of a garden that saw better days.

As she stepped into the thick layers of the eucalyptus cones and decomposed leaves, the rustle made the doe look up, its entire body stretched like a bow and leaped over the ditch in front and leapt away like the devil was on its heels.

The afternoon was waning like the strength of her fight to keep her family secure, the billows of clouds were changing the color from the color of alabaster to a dark, murky grey black that spelled storm, trouble for the decaying roof that sheltered them.

As she slid down the slope of the grassy ridge, she picked up the tall blade of grass with the yellow dandelion flowers. Amidst the yellow flowers, the pale dried rosettes had snowflakes of dusty whisks of white hair in dozens of round clocks. The gently blowing wind was dispersing the pollen of the dandelions and spreading them in the air, giving it an appearance of falling snow. No wonder the fuzzy cotton like pollen was called the dandelion snow. The name dandelion is derived from the French, dent-de-lion, which is literally "lion's tooth", referring to the sharply-lobed leaves of the plant.

She smiled wanly; the lion's teeth did not really save the flowers from the wrath of the wind and seasons, did they? Bani shivered despite the old cardigan that covered her slight body. It was time to go inside. The fight was far from over. The pollen was shed for a reason, at the turn of the season, the flowers will be back, spreading the hills with their thick, yellow carpets.

Dandelion Flowers in Bloom



Dust of the dried dandelions


Singhania Family Tree
================
1 Kedarnath Singhania (Deceased)
1 Saraswati Singhania (Living Matriarch of the family, 80 years old)

2A. Rai Bahadur Singhania and Wife (Deceased):
Elder Son of Saraswati and Kedarnath

3A. Kiran Dixit: (Deceased): Only daughter of Rai Bahadur
Nishikant Dixit (Deceased): Husband of Kiran

4A. Bani (13), Pia (11), Rano(9):
Daughters of Kiran and Nishikanth Dixit


2B. Amarender Singhania and wife (Deceased):
Second Son of Saraswati and Kedarnath

3B1. Shiv Singhania(44):
Son of Amarender, grandson of Saraswati

4B1. Ranvijay(22) and Roshni(20):
Kids of Shiv Singhania

3B2. Shankar Singhania(44):
Son of Amarender, grandson of Saraswati

4B2. Ranveer (19): Son of Shankar Singhania

3B3. Pallavi Deb (24): Daughter of Amarender, married to Aparajit


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Bali Family Tree
===============
1. Jagdish Bali Married to Biji (Dadi)
2. Aditya Bali (24):
Only son of Jagdish and Biji, married to Jigyasa Walia (22)

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ +++

Walia Family Tree
===============
1. Udai Walia married to Krishna Walia (diseased)
has a mistress Bernali

2A. Jai Walia: Eldest son of Udai walia (20)
2B. Jigyasa Walia: Daughter of Udai Walia (22)
2C. Nachiketh Walia: Second son of Udai Walia, mother not married(2)

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ +++


Hi All:

I actually have one more short fiction going at this time, but some how this idea was in my head and I thought I would start it.

For those of you who have already read my fictions and those who like the comedy aspect, I wanted to apologize, because this is more like 'Candle In the Wind' not like 'The Blackmailed bride' or 'An Italian Serenade'.

I hope you will like this, I don't want to give away too much in the prologue, except that it is the strugge of the valiant. Struggle of two courageous spirits fighting against time, circumstances, and evilness of the world to come up and to find solace in each others arms. It is the story of Jai and Bani.

Let me know what you think so far.

As always, I love your feedback and your enormous support for my writing.

Some one had asked me to send links to my earlier FFs, so I put them up here.

Here are the links to my earlier FFs. I am afraid they are my first few and were a little lighter, not as intense as CITW.

Adhuri Zindagi

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/484491/ff-adhura-zindagi-all-parts-pg1

The Blackmailed Bride

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/503451/ff-blackmailed-bride-pg-1-all-parts

Candle In The Wind

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/546789/candle-in-the-wind-note-pg160-new-thread

An Italian Serenade (in Progress - Comedy)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/719293/ff-an-italian-serenade-pt3-pg17-9-28


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Hkaurk22 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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saved will edit in morning 😉

Ok me here.. Im editing like two morning later~!! Soweee!! Fabulous start! You painted such a nice picture.. I hope nobody here is allergic to dandelions! Dont worry Im not! 😆😆😆

Do start it soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Dalia, never really went away, just was a bit busy lately...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a lot Sheenu for starting another FF and I am sure you are going to rock as usual. 👏

Lovely start and I am already waiting for the update, next one that is. 😉

Seems to be a very interesting premise. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dear Shoba (right 😛 )

I loved it...waiting for the story to unfold. The description of the scenary is too good...god I wish I could just go to place like it.....please continue soon...love Tin
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Love it, Sheena. I love all your styles of writing, but CITW was a fave...so much depth to the characters and situations...can't wait..

Bina
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Dust of wot 😲 dekh yaar is unphad Bihari ko aaise taang mat kar...itne vade vade words samagh main nahin aate...so i broke it into two...Dande n Lions...ab theek hai...ye dono words pata hai... 😆 Dande khane ki to adaat hai bachpan se...n i liv wid a lion 😆

i have not read it just saw the name n was 😆 sorry yaar itne acche se naam ka bi dagi uda diya..pls forgive ur joker...i cud not help it.



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I didn't read Candle In The Wind (someday I hope to read it in one go 😕), but I can't wait to read this one.
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HI Shoba!! 😊

Glad that you started a new FF. Great start and different storyline as well. And the name DOD (a little bit hard for me as Sammy said 😆 ) is unique ....just kidding yaar 😆 .
Now can't wait for the next part from you soon. Thanks dear 👏 👏 .

Khushboo 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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another fanfic by you???????????yippie! lyk candle in the wind- i just luv intense stories like that- hope to see da first part real soon!

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